I, the Vice-Captain of the Straw Hats, Cannot Be Killed.

Hehehe [laughing evilly], that's great👍🏾. I hope I can find someone to marry Aunt Snake. [Sinister smile]

In fact, I think this is good. Don't turn into a girl [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]. Sometimes I would rather he be asexual than have a gender. Maybe it's selfish, but don't become a girl [almost crying] [almost crying] I really like this novel [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The theme is very good, I just hope I won't be timid again later.

I'm so touched that I finally have a slightly normal protagonist. Obviously in reality, most people get scared when they see a gangster, and they want to run away when they are surrounded by five or six people, but in the novel, it is not "normal" not to kill a tiger at the beginning, or to fight ten knife-wielding gangsters by one person.

The writing is quite good, but I have a very big question, that is, how can Gray Wolf and Spongebob get a green card? If nothing else, these two are really bugs. Let's not talk about Spongebob, just the terrifying invention of Gray Wolf. Power, that's simply invincible, okay? Moreover, Spongebob is immortal and can absorb water without limit. You say he is invincible. The key is that he ignores damage. So I have a very big question, why are these two just green cards? I can't figure it out, I can't figure it out.

Apart from being too cowardly, it's still pretty good.

Later, you can let the protagonist and Sauron cp. ? I feel like a pervert

I read it for a long time but forgot to rate it. Now I will focus on this book. Why did Ultraman not eat snail noodles after defeating Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf dominated Gou Xiong Ridge? Is it because Conan and Dio paused time? Or is it because Grandpa Niu's true identity as the Dragon King God of War shocked them. In Grandpa Niu's anger, 30,000 soldiers surrounded them, but they were not afraid at all, because Crayon Shin-chan came to support them later.

Currently I am the only Pirates fanfic that I don't think I can get enough of, I love watching it👀 [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The plot of this novel is very good. The only shortcoming is the early character portrayal of the protagonist, which is cowardly! Totally cowardly! Ridiculously cowardly! In terms of personality, he and Orochimaru cannot be similar, they can only be said to be unrelated, which makes some readers feel uncomfortable and gives him a lot of one stars. If this kind of personality is paired with some funny anime characters, the gap between readers will be small. Although there will still be one star, it will not be like this. But if you pair this character with someone labeled as "perverted" and "cold-natured", the gap is like "the Milky Way falls into the sky". This will dissuade a group of people at the beginning, and if the character cannot be controlled properly and make the character change more natural, some readers will be dissuaded. But this does not mean that the author's writing is not good. On the contrary, under these circumstances, the author still received a lot of praise, which is enough to prove that the author's writing style is very good. Therefore, if the author publishes the next book, he can pay attention to it. He should think about how to write the beginning, then look at how the character can be connected with the main content of his novel, and finally connect it with the previous one. This may achieve unexpected results. (≧▽≦) Big cheers for the author [like][like][like] I'm just a passerby, so I'll give an objective review. Please be gentle if you criticize me🙏🙏🙏, and there may be some typos, I hope it won't affect everyone.

Brother Meng, let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book (personally) Advantages: Growth and enthusiasm are well controlled, the protagonist's strength improvement is obviously not beyond the scope, the personalities of all the protagonists are well controlled, and our protagonist even dresses as a woman from time to time Disadvantages: Typos and sentences may affect the experience (but not too much). Some foreshadowing of the protagonist has not been recycled for the time being. There are also problems with experience and emotional values. This is a big problem. Then I will talk casually. First of all, I hope the author will make a list of events and the S-level rating standards. Otherwise, it will be a bit confusing and there will be a lot of people complaining about it. In fact, this is a costume, not a game, and Goldfinger is not an invincible article. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. But when will the author arrange a side story between the protagonist and Kaido? I want to see it, I'm a pervert! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

I have read more than 80 chapters so far, and I think it is quite interesting! I read "Invincible with Ships" before, which made me feel a bit numb and boring... But this book is slow-paced and a very real time travel [facepalm]. Many people hate that the protagonist is a coward, but I think it is quite real (I think it is very funny, and it is much more interesting than "Invincible" at the beginning, after all, everyone knows the general plot). Besides, didn't the author say that it will become more and more perverted [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I also saw the precursors of the protagonist's perversion [punch out] Those who like the invincible flow, it's better not to worry [face covering] Once you have the system, you will definitely kill people... (You are too beautiful if you have a chicken) It's too slow, and it's a bit uncomfortable for those who are dragging it... There are too few capable characters in the protagonist [punch out]. At present, I feel that the system is too stretched and too delayed... I can understand if you drag it on, but can you update it faster [laughter]

I don't know why the more I read it, the more I liked it, and I read it in one sitting. I hope that the article will not be abandoned or removed from the shelves, because there are many removed and abandoned articles in my bookshelf. Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

How can I say that the subject matter is very good, but it is too cowardly. Normally, it would be scary, but most people are not used to it when you write like this. Because it is originally a novel and it is not about your personal experience, so the rating may be very low when there are more people later. So I still hope that the author can speed up. The main thing is not to be too cowardly. It doesn't matter whether it is strong or not. It really is a little scary to be cowardly.

Author, I really don't understand why your book has such a low rating, but I found it really interesting. It's about whether you can let the protagonist acquire Orochimaru's calm perverted psychology, otherwise it won't be fun to watch. Also, please update quickly.

This book is very good. The low ratings are all written by people who like cool writing (not necessarily). The pace is good. In the early stage, you may feel that the pig's feet are timid, but this is also a true portrayal of diaosi's time travel. After all, everyone cannot be a warrior king. There will always be normal people. Don't bring the settings of the protagonists of other novels to this book. The protagonist of this novel has a personality similar to that of an ordinary otaku. All in all, I think this is a good book (if the author is not a douchebag) (whisper beep(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑))

In fact, it should have been given five stars. I gave it four stars because my highlight was the female protagonist. When I first watched it, I had no idea that there was a female protagonist because he didn't show it in all aspects. He would have a female protagonist. At first, I thought he would turn the protagonist into a girl. After thinking about it, this was also my highlight. Why don't I stop watching it? But I still have a habit of reading a few more chapters to make sure. After reading the next chapter, I realized that she would not become a girl. Until the appearance of the empress later, I felt that suddenly there would be no heroine. I was not sure at first. Then I read a few chapters later, and it seemed that there was really a heroine. Then I... Didn't read it, and saw that there was no heroine. Damn it, I should change my habit of only reading the introduction and not the comments. I just looked at the comments and there was a female protagonist, and there were probably a lot of interesting things about it, and suddenly I felt that it wasn't very good. In the third comment, I read their comments again. I was really speechless. Later on, the protagonist really turned into a girl. They all hit my mark. As described above, I thought I would never become a girl, but it changed later. I really...

I think this book is super exciting. Although you all commented that the protagonist is timid, I think this is better. It can preserve the plot more and not delay the growth of the protagonists. It can not only add some interesting things, but also make people shine in some places. Please update it soon, author.

I think it's more realistic for normal people to travel through pirates' routines than for them to exist every second. Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! Say important things three times

What should I say? The author's writing is very good. I have read this book before but did not continue to read it. The book is finished. After reading it in one go, I felt very happy. However, when I finished the last three extra chapters, I felt that the author's last three pictures were unexpectedly scrawled and perfunctory, and the simple female protagonist's retirement life was not as exciting as the male protagonist's interstellar adventure. Day. The relationship between Hancock and the male protagonist is still unrequited love. The ending changed from one person's relief and longing to two people's relief and longing for retirement. Rizhen was so sloppy, so perfunctory, and so simple. The relationship between Zoro and the heroine was also very sloppy, so simple and perfunctory. It was all Zoro blushing, and then it was over. I've never seen them kiss, let alone get married, or even have children. They just go out. His mother is still 12 years old. Luffy, a straight man, doesn't have a partner yet. Ace and Yamato don't know if they are married. Sabo, Satan and Garp don't know what Sabo is doing. I don't know if Satan and Garp died or something happened?

This book is a type of story that first suppresses and then develops. The protagonist is very timid at the beginning, but then becomes mature. You can see the changes of the protagonist with your own eyes. At the same time, the plot arrangement and writing style of the work are also good. Highly recommended! ! !

I have read Chapter 144. I first read it as a male-channeled novel, but gradually Orochimaru became a hero. I really liked the protagonist who had sex with Nami in the early stage, but it was a pity that the protagonist completely forgot that he was a time traveler near the sky island plot, and he couldn't take it anymore. It's a pity for my Nami-chan, I also want to have sex with her. On a few stars, she actually had a child with Sauron. It's so disgusting.

Maybe the writing is good, but I really can't stand Nami repeatedly buying women's clothes for the protagonist and forcing the protagonist to not resist. Every time I see this, I feel that she is repeatedly jumping on the dignity of men. Maybe I bring it in when I read novels, but I really can't stand it anymore.

Everyone, I have read Chapter 50. I have survived. The protagonist finally dares to face the enemy head-on instead of hiding and shouting for help. [Crying] I will read on, try the poison, and then come back to make up the score. Wait for me! [Cover face] Well, after raising it for a while, I suddenly found that I turned into a ghoul. It's a bit magical, and the protagonist really turned into a woman, right? In fact, Orochimaru is pretty awesome. I think the ghoul setting may be a bit redundant. The writing is okay and the author is really careful, but I want to ask if he can change back to a man in the end [face covering]. I have only read more than 300 chapters. After all, I really like the setting of this article. In fact, although I don't really like the kind of gender change, Uncle Snake is like that. I am still a little curious about whether he can change back [Thinking] Some places are still a bit abrupt.

I've finished watching it, it's not enough. Watching the protagonist slowly become stronger and metamorphosed, not a strong metamorphosis, but a metamorphosis in various senses. The protagonist in the first hundred or so chapters was relatively useless but looked too much like me in every aspect, so I felt very immersed in it. However, the more I read, the more perverted it became and I couldn't relate to it anymore. However, the story was well written and very "wonderful" in every sense of the word. I felt uncomfortable if I didn't like it, so I couldn't keep reading. The more I eat the melon, the better I feel, and the more I look at it, the more I feel like a pervert [face covering]. Then when I was reading more than 400 chapters, he was spoiled by the comments. I was disgusted, but I wanted to continue eating melons. After that, as I continued reading, I felt like someone had spat on the melons I was eating. The melons were very fragrant but felt disgusting [face covering]. I finally finished watching it. I finished eating the melon but not enough. Since the original work is still being serialized, the ending is unsatisfactory. The author continues the story brilliantly, but it moves too quickly and becomes sloppy. Summary: Thank you to the author for creating a great melon. I am full. I have to read a few stud books and try to regain some of my sexual orientation [face covering] [face covering] [face covering].

Perfectly subverted the image of Uncle Snake in my mind

The book is very talented and varied, and the character descriptions are also quite flexible... But the character of the protagonist is too timid... He is too timid in his normal state... He is so timid that he doesn't even want to test his own strength. This is the first time I have seen such timidity... Just for the protagonist's cowardly and meaningless character, I can only give a four-star rating...

Among the two-dimensional Tomatoes, this one is relatively high-level. At least it is different from those authors in the same genre who write Shuangwenlu. This is the reason why it gets one point. The second point is that although it is about a boat trip, the writing is not very abrupt. At least it has the basics of the original One Piece book. How can I write it? As long as the original plot of One Piece is not changed, and it is written according to the psychology of the characters at that time, you can basically gain some favor. The third point is that I personally prefer this type. This is the most important thing to get a star. But unfortunately, this book is not the most perfect one in my mind. The fourth point is that I think on Tomato, a platform where people write based on their interests rather than their profession. It is not easy to have so many words, and it is very good to write around the title of the book without straying from the topic or going off topic. I'm so sleepy. I ran away three times today and still have to take the exam. I'm really convinced.

In fact, this book is rated 9 in my opinion, but instead of 4 and a half stars, I will give it 5 stars. It's a very humanistic story. It was relatively relaxed and day-to-day in the early stages, but from the moment the protagonists were beaten away in the Shampoo Islands, the plot exploded. I saw the power of the author's original creation, it's a great fight, and the plot is awesome. I want to say that Oda doesn't understand Pirates [manual dog head]. The protagonist has the characteristics of Orochimaru, he does not always have the same body (he does not kill people randomly just to find a container, his body is made by his own experiments), and his gender is not fixed. The language is not very mature yet, and it feels like it lacks polish, but it is pretty good among free novels. However, the author sometimes uses voice input, which leads to some homophonic typos, but I think it is still acceptable. [Like] This is the small size on my mobile phone, and I read it on the large size on my tablet. There is no need to doubt my reading time, I have already read the entire book. And pay attention to Orochimaru's characteristics. Isn't it normal to change bodies and genders? I don't understand how poisonous this can be [eating melon]

I hope to become a girl, I will soon 🔥. Code word girl~~