National Games: Ye Luoli's Template, Teammate Qilin

For your own books, give them good reviews first! The first book failed miserably, so I carefully made a mind map and outline for this book. For nothing else, I just want you to enjoy it more! I won't send pictures, otherwise I will show you the mind map. Improved Ye Luoli templates, maps, monsters, etc.! For the sake of my hard work, please give me a five-star review! [Blowing kiss]

It looks good, I look forward to the protagonist's expression when he becomes a man [laughing evilly]

Come on, author, the outline is well written! But it would be perfect if there were more chapters😏

Very interesting and novel. I hope this story has an ending.

I love the author. It completely combines the genres I like to watch now: becoming a girl (of course I also like to watch it as a boy, after all, I am a senior fujoshi), Ye Luoli fandom, forbidden land exploration and brother group cp.

I like this book very much. Every move of the protagonist in the book touches my heartstrings. The character of Du Xifei played by the protagonist is not very similar. The most important thing is that there are too few. Great support for the author! Follow (≧∇≦)/! !

Overall, it's great, but the main character is a little frustrated, and I personally feel that he didn't really play the role (although it's not a big deal). Maybe it would be better if he could be brought in a little more (just a little suggestion)

The book is very good, the author Ka is good at writing, the subject matter is very novel, and the writing style is also good. But the introduction is slightly inconsistent with the article. The introduction says she is a cold-faced girl, but the article feels like a funny girl. So in fact, we can change the cold-faced girl in the introduction to be more lively and cheerful, and then the last thing needs to be changed. Just please get rid of that bad habit of Kavin! [Manual dog head]

The article is very good, and the "author is also very good" card is a good one.

This is the first time I have read this kind of novel that combines Ye Luoli and tomb robbing. It is very exciting. Especially since I like to read novels about Ye Luoli and tomb robbing, so the author needs to update it more! Come on! (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

Author, hurry up and update it😭😭😭 it's not enough!!!!! This is the only article I've seen on Tomato that combines Ye Luoli and the National Games! I hope there will be scenes in the later stages of Li Hui Yan Jue Pang Zun Ling Princess Time Fairy Huo Liao Ye and Lingxi Gate😏

It looks good but there are so few, so it's tied immediately (╥╥)

Well, you guys, please don't read it. It's like Wang Mo and a little brother forming a CP. The character of the little brother is also very complete. As for giving it a five-point rating in order to let more people see it, the following is a lie: This novel is really, really, really, really, really, really, really good to read. I especially like the protagonist who is not OOC at all and the protagonist's CP is really super sweet. I am not a fan of CP all the year round, so I like it very much. I recommend it with stars.

It's very nice and beautiful. I like this one the most. I originally liked Ye Luoli and wanted to read books like Ye Luoli, but I didn't expect that this kind of subject matter is also very good. The only thing I hope is that the male fairy template does not have to be female, so that it feels more interesting and charming. Also, I don't feel embarrassed at all when I cast magic. The magic spell is really cool and special when I cast magic. It is so handsome. The more I think about it, the more excited I am. I hope this book can become a novel with seven or eight hundred chapters. In fact, the author can write like this to avoid the embarrassment when converting the template. He said that I am one of the saint-level fairies of Ye Luoli's Fairyland Lingxi Pavilion. Because the fairyland and the human world are about to collapse, they came to help humans. However, it is only stipulated that one other fairy will come and hand over the original power to me. Then they went to resist the extraterrestrial forces and I came to help you. This explanation does not feel awkward.

A very interesting book, the subject matter is very novel [shy][please update]

It's really good to read, thank you to the author (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

How to put it this way, I personally think it's very good-looking. Don't substitute Ye Luoli's character. The character in this article is very social and quite funny (a nice word, not an irony, don't get me wrong) [Cool]

Overall it's OK. It's just that Du Xifei's character set me off a bit. I've seen Ye Luoli, Poison Empress should be a mature royal sister, this seems a bit... To me... But it's okay, I can still bear it, and the character of the protagonist is also pretty good, so I'll give you five stars.

How should I put it... This Ye Luoli, this is the first time I have seen the theme of the combination of the little brother and the forbidden land, it is a bit novel. However: ① The character of the little brother collapsed a bit in the early stage, but it is still okay in the later stage ②Although the protagonist is not a character, it is not said to be a private design, so it is better to follow the original character of the doll as much as possible. Overall, it's pretty cool. Good luck to the author! ╭( ･ㅂ･)و ̑̑Good

I think this book is pretty good overall! I hope those who read the book can read a few more chapters and comment and give stars. This book as a whole is a kind of funny novel. The protagonist changes from male to female. The protagonist has an out-of-the-box personality and a big brain. His personality is not cold and talkative, but he is very strong (if you don't like it, you can leave here). The storyline is also full of drama and humor. Then let's talk about the key points that everyone mentioned: 1. The protagonist does not play Ye Luoli, and there is no character design at all. The protagonist uses Ye Luoli's template. The system only requires the protagonist to keep the appearance exactly the same, and does not involve personality. 2. I personally feel that the little brother's character is not too broken, he doesn't talk too much, and he doesn't change from being cold and ruthless to talkative. 3. I also feel embarrassed. I think it's a bit outrageous. When I saw this title, weren't I prepared for some of the ridiculous lines in this book? Then, the protagonist's lines when casting a spell were a bit off-kilter, and the author later changed them himself.

It's very interesting, especially the plot where the protagonist becomes a girl. To be honest, when the person invited the protagonist to become a princess, I laughed unkindly! In short, I feel that this book is particularly good-looking, so good cheers for the author! ! *^O^*

This is the first time I have watched Ye Luo Liwen, which is quite enjoyable. However, the shortcoming is that the IQ of the people in it is forced to offline. I hope that the people's brains will not be too "smart", and the little brother will not affect the performance of the protagonist. I am just giving suggestions (although the author cannot see [awkward laughter])

It's very interesting. Keep up the good work, the author. The protagonist and the little brother are CPs, right?

Great! Come on, please do more! I look forward to seeing how Yanyan's mask of indifference will crack after he returns to being a boy👀 Support the author greatly💐

It's super good-looking, highly recommended. I hope the author can update it every day and support the author. It's very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. I say the important things three times. Jimeis, what are you waiting for? Hurry up! 😁😁😁

Very interesting, please update soon. I want to see the boy's reaction when the protagonist becomes a male character. ᴵˈᵐ ᵒᵏ(ᵕ̣̣̣̣̣ ͜ ᵕ̣̣̣̣̣ ˶ )♡ л̵

It's beautiful o(*≧▽≦)ツ! I really hope there will be a male character, but don't come to Pang Zun first. Pang Zun is too manly, and what will everyone's expression be like when they find out that their Miss Ling is a boy? 🌚🌚

The plot is good, but it's a bit of a downgrade. It would be better if I hadn't watched Tomb Raiders Notes. This is not Xiao Ge at all, haha, but there is no need to care about the role of Ye Luoli, the protagonist, because he (the male protagonist) is not originally., I give it four stars, I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on

The author is great, it's really great and very beautiful. ❛˓◞˂̵✧

1: The protagonist has multiple roles, both male and female, but the protagonist's personality does not conflict. Two: The story scenario is imaginable. . . Three: It's funny, and it's also good at science and CP. Emmmmm no more...... That's all