Yuxian

The narrative is plain, rhythmic, and intriguing. The characters are vivid, real and individual, the world view is in line with public health concepts, the scenes are euphemistic but not too bizarre, and the main and sub-lines advance layer by layer and are fascinating.

I think this book is quite good. I am not one who specializes in good reviews. I will just say a few points. There is no white text. Various characters are set up well. Some of the characters are quite funny. It makes people want to read more. It is just a bit short. I read 500 chapters in 3 days. I feel that I am still in the golden elixir stage. It is estimated that if I want to become an immortal, I will need at least 2000 chapters. One chapter a day is too difficult [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][face covering] It's getting better and better. I saved dozens of chapters and read two others during this period, but none of them are as good as this one. If nothing else, I write better about battles. Unlike other novels (late Mortal Bones) where you can't finish a battle after dozens of chapters, this one is quite good. The protagonist has many opportunities and good skills. He can hit a few moves at the same level in seconds. If he hits too high, he will run away. It's very logical. Unlike other novels where you have to shout a few times to tell a story, but in the end you still can't win.

Personally, I feel that this book will become smoother the more I write it. In the early stage, it may not have been so streamlined, compact, and a bit messy, but after reaching the end of the book, I personally feel that it should be a good book. The protagonist, Yu Xian, is neither impatient nor impetuous, and sticks to his original intention. The most important thing is that the characters, details, and realms in the book are very realistic, and there is no such thing as a downbeat realm. In a word, it's enjoyable to read.

I accidentally looked in, but I kept seeing the chase, and decided to chase it to the end. What a great novel! Once you pick it up, you don't want to put it down. The score of 9.1 Is low, it should be at least 9.5. The author is very classy. Not only is the story interesting, but he also has a philosophy of life. He has truth, goodness, and beauty. Cultivating an immortal is also a human being. The author must be a kind and compassionate person. Anyway, like it, like it, like it, and like it again! Very nice! Very good! This is a good book that Tomato can make into the top ten! If I'm going to be picky, I just think the male protagonist's name is a bit awkward. It's just Yu, and why should I call him Xian? It doesn't sound nice or loud. I don't know why the author chose such a name. It's not cool. Also, the author often confuses "that" and "which". Anyway, I like it very much! So well written! I wish the author good health and pen, and all the best! To be fair, this book should be rated 9.5! Come on Situ! You are the best! [Like][Like][Like]

The protagonist is not a Holy Mother, but she knows how to be grateful and practice hard! The world is awake!

This book is the only fantasy book I'm following on Tomato. Although it has its flaws, it's really fun to read only about immortality and nothing else. However, the author is very slow in updating it. It would be even better if it could be updated twice a day. I follow the latest chapters every day. I used to feel that the author was starting to get sluggish, but now I find that it's not a question of whether it's stale or not, but that there are too few updates, so I feel like I'm getting sluggish if I can't read it enough. I read it in one sitting after reading it for a few days, but I didn't feel like I was running out of words. Anyway, keep it up, author, it's a difficult book. I will write a chapter review later to analyze the plot of the novel. Brothers, just wait.

The plot is compact and reasonable. The content ranges from the small changes in your heart to the grand scenes, and they are all described very well. The protagonist kills decisively without procrastination. What I love most is the various understandings of "Tao". There are many places that I can read over and over again and even ponder carefully. It is different from many novels with repetitive plots and pale content. Usually I only comment after I have finished reading or if I can't read any more. This time I read the description of Lei's insights in the scene of the missionary transformation. My next plan is to return to Dongzhou and establish a sect. I can't help but praise the author. I hope the author will always produce good content ~ Finally, I wish the author a constant source of inspiration Xiaohua Xiaoduo doesn't want to be involved and decisively refuses to like it. Hongshao tolerates the ambiguity, and Fengmao is a little disgusted. Not only does she not do anything, but her daughter falls in love with her father? The first time the master was deceived was due to his personality. The second time he was deceived by the same plot. Let's assume that your "elm-headed" heart has not changed. But it also depends on the situation. The entire sect has mobilized to attack the Blood River army. When the army has already set off, your coach was framed for a few words? The master is no longer found, and Dongzhou is no longer unified. Even if the other party's rhetoric is full of loopholes, he still has to find a red peony root. His combat power was also ruined, Yu Xian was crazy and invincible during the Yuan Ying Period. According to the previous six major sects, Baiyun Sect only has two Nascent Souls. But why would it be like this in Dongzhou during the divine transformation stage? It's not as exciting as condensing qi in the mine. The great power has hundreds of millions of incarnations in Dongzhou. If you kill a tomato 100 million times, you will be able to retire. The above are a bit common in the plots of cultivating immortals. I thought that the transformation of gods and the founding of a sect would be the climax, but it turned out that the word "water" was too obvious to fill in the gaps. Let's take a few days to rest on the writing of Enlightenment and then look at it later. I hope the author can think more carefully about this emotion and the overall situation. If it really doesn't work, it's fine if there are no male-female scenes later. You can also shoulder your fair share of big responsibilities. Oh... Sad.

It seems to be about Yu Xian, but in fact it is about life. It resonates with readers and becomes more and more exciting later on. It's more interesting to read than some cool articles. There is a plot and a main line. It's just that the protagonist is indifferent to feelings. Isn't it a little unkind? The author still has a high vision. Only red peony root can be pleasing to the eye.

"... If you are lucky enough to meet him, you must not rely on his (her) kindness to you, be disrespectful, unreasonable, or make nonsense." The content is novel and not just written for the story. The plot of the story is used to warn people about how to be a human being. It can be used in ancient times and today, so that readers can learn from it. He is a very responsible author who disdains common things about love and uses inspirational stories to warn future generations.

It's so passionate, especially the time when he ascended to immortality. This is the protagonist, this is the mortal cultivating immortality. The author is so amazing [laughing] [like] [like] [like]

This is one of the best novels about cultivating immortals that I have ever read. It doesn't have too many emotional scenes, and it satisfies my fantasy about cultivating immortals. I don't have feelings for a woman when I see one, but it's about truly cultivating immortals!

The description of the protagonist fits the character's growth pattern, the acquisition of various opportunities, strong beliefs, and devilish practice. From weak and helpless to powerful and invincible, he has blazed his own path to perfection.

A very good novel. Having read nearly a thousand books, this book can be ranked among the best. The author's writing style is sophisticated and his sentences are fluent. The plot of the novel is not cliche or verbose. Each chapter contains a lot of information. I look forward to a perfect ending.

It's wonderful, the sentences are fluent, the organization is clear, and the thinking is thoughtful. It is indeed a good book!

The writing is very novel and the understanding of Taoism is very profound. The writing of fantasy is fictional and true. Although I am a Tomato reader, I have read many fantasy books. This book has connotation and is worthy of book lovers to read carefully. It is interesting and interesting. I hope the author will write more books of this kind.

I didn't expect that there would be such a wonderful novel about cultivating immortality after "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality". It's like finding a treasure. I personally think this book is better than "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality". The protagonist and supporting characters are flesh and blood. If the total recommendation score is 10 points, I would recommend it 100 points.

The master drips water from the apprentice, and the apprentice springs from the master. I really like the description of the master and the apprentice. I was originally digging for gold in the tomatoes, and I fell in love with this book just by reading it, especially the master and the protagonist. They are both people who are warmed by each other●ｽv●

After reading this book, I really want to drop everything and go to practice immortality. Because what is written in the book is true and believable, and the fantasy can be experienced right before your eyes. We, the ants, should live a wonderful life like Yu Xian. I envy you, I envy you, I envy you all in my life!

It can be seen that the author put his heart into it, the writing is very good, and the protagonist's character makes people love and hate it. Sometimes he is thoughtful and sometimes he is unreachable. Whenever it comes to people or things around me, I am always too reckless or chaotic. Although the results are all good (after all, the halo of the protagonist), people often sigh: This character will not survive more than three chapters [face covering]

It's not enough to watch at all. I'm on top. I feel like I've learned how to become a god. Come on~

The character of the protagonist is in line with the Chinese tradition. Although the plot is not suspenseful and full of foreshadowing, it is very logical and interlocking and makes you feel like you are immersed in the situation. The shortcoming is that the update is too slow. I hope it can have a good ending and not be unfinished.

This book is really well written, and I feel like the writing is as sharp as a knife. The protagonist has a sense of justice, is wise, does not panic when faced with trouble, has a clear distinction between love and hate, and is not a good person. The plot arrangement of the story is reasonable. I still want to hear it

The setting of this book is novel, the plot is novel, and the author's writing is humorous. It is one of the few good books I have read! There is no harem, and there is no setting where women surround you. There is a bit of drama in the end, but nothing huge! Come on, author! !

It's good to read. The author is quite humorous and funny. I've read dozens of chapters and it's still quite rigorous. It's very normal, very smooth, the thinking and logic are very good, and the writing style is also very good. Come back and comment after watching it🙈🙈🙈 The more I looked at it later, the more I felt it didn't look good.

It is a very good book. The male protagonist is very passionate and sexual, and there are some awkwardness. But I heard that the previous title of the book was originally "Elm Fairy", which is more in line with the theme of the novel. I have read many novels about ordinary people, and the things the male protagonist insists on make the image of the male protagonist more distinct. Although the author is Lao Shui, he is still overall. The body is good, I think this is a novel without a female protagonist. Judging from the Tao that the male protagonist currently adheres to, having a female protagonist and love is not in line with his Tao [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking], continue reading, I still really want a female protagonist, because the male protagonist's character definitely does not have a harem. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking], author, please write! ! !

There is no female protagonist so far, and I think it should be a female author. The number of likes has increased a lot recently, and it is getting better and better. I personally like Yu Xian's character, whether it is his master-disciple relationship with Xiao Wusheng, his protection when building Xiao Duo's foundation, and his confession to Hong Shao about killing Xiao Cao. I cannot say that he is a perfect person, but he is still a pure person. The character portrayal of the people around him is also relatively good. Regardless of whether they are friends or opponents, I look forward to the struggle and growth between the protagonist and those saints, and they cannot be crushed unilaterally.

Except for a few parts that are a bit poisonous, everything else is pretty good. The writing is very real. The protagonist's character grows quickly and he is decisive in killing. No more, I drive high and go low, I have a lot of inner drama. I like to twist my mind a little bit no matter what I do. There are a lot of inner saliva dramas in one chapter.

It is very different from previous fantasy. The exercises, practice time, and rhythm are all very good. There is no sense of being invincible in the world like other novels. I haven't thought about who the heroine will be yet, and it feels like Hong Shao. I also hope there is no female protagonist. It's fine if the protagonist is invincible alone [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

The protagonist in this book is not as reckless as the protagonists in other novels, doing things regardless of the consequences and causing trouble for himself. He talks about being low-key but acts high-profile. He acts even more unscrupulously when he can surpass the enemy. He does not consider encountering higher-level situations at all and makes enemies everywhere. The protagonist of this book is intelligent and tactful, leaving room for others to avoid completely offending them.

Come on, author, I really like this kind of traditional cultivation of immortality. Please update it soon. I want to read more.