Elm Immortal

The narrative is plain, rhythmic, and intriguing. The characters are vivid, real and individual, the world view is in line with public health concepts, the scenes are euphemistic but not too bizarre, and the main and sub-lines advance layer by layer and are fascinating.

I think this book is quite good. I am not one who specializes in good reviews. I will just say a few points. There is no white text. Various characters are set up well. Some of the characters are quite funny. It makes people want to read more. It is just a bit short. I read 500 chapters in 3 days. I feel that I am still in the golden elixir stage. It is estimated that if I want to become an immortal, I will need at least 2000 chapters. One chapter a day is too difficult [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]🤦 It's getting better and better. I saved dozens of chapters and read two others during this period, but none of them are as good as this one. If nothing else, I write better about battles. Unlike other novels (late Mortal Bones) where you can't finish a battle after dozens of chapters, this one is quite good. The protagonist has many opportunities and good skills. He can hit a few moves at the same level in seconds. If he hits too high, he will run away. It's very logical. Unlike other novels where you have to shout a few times to tell a story, but in the end you still can't win.

Personally, I feel that this book will become smoother the more I write it. In the early stage, it may not have been so streamlined, compact, and a bit messy, but after reaching the end of the book, I personally feel that it should be a good book. The protagonist, Yu Xian, is neither impatient nor impetuous, and sticks to his original intention. The most important thing is that the characters, details, and realms in the book are very realistic, and there is no such thing as a downbeat realm. In a word, it's enjoyable to read.

I accidentally looked in, but I kept seeing the chase, and decided to chase it to the end. What a great novel! Once you pick it up, you don't want to put it down. The score of 9.1 Is low, it should be at least 9.5. The author is very classy. Not only is the story interesting, but he also has a philosophy of life. He has truth, goodness, and beauty. Cultivating an immortal is also a human being. The author must be a kind and compassionate person. Anyway, like it, like it, like it, and like it again! Very nice! Very good! This is a good book that Tomato can make into the top ten! If I'm going to be picky, I just think the male protagonist's name is a bit awkward. It's just Yu, and why should I call him Xian? It doesn't sound nice or loud. I don't know why the author chose such a name. It's not cool. Also, the author often confuses "that" and "which". Anyway, I like it very much! So well written! I wish the author good health and pen, and all the best! To be fair, this book should be rated 9.5! Come on Situ! You are the best! 👍👍👍

The protagonist is not a Holy Mother, but she knows how to be grateful and practice hard! The world is awake!

This book is the only fantasy book I'm following on Tomato. Although it has its flaws, it's really fun to read only about immortality and nothing else. However, the author is very slow in updating it. It would be even better if it could be updated twice a day. I follow the latest chapters every day. I used to feel that the author was starting to get sluggish, but now I find that it's not a question of whether it's stale or not, but that there are too few updates, so I feel like I'm getting sluggish if I can't read it enough. I read it in one sitting after reading it for a few days, but I didn't feel like I was running out of words. Anyway, keep it up, author, it's a difficult book. I will write a chapter review later to analyze the plot of the novel. Brothers, just wait.

The plot is compact and reasonable. The content ranges from the small changes in your heart to the grand scenes, and they are all described very well. The protagonist kills decisively without procrastination. What I love most is the various understandings of "Tao". There are many places that I can read over and over again and even ponder carefully. It is different from many novels with repetitive plots and pale content. Usually I only comment after I have finished reading or if I can't read any more. This time I read the description of Lei's insights in the scene of the missionary transformation. My next plan is to return to Dongzhou and establish a sect. I can't help but praise the author. I hope the author will always produce good content ~ Finally, I wish the author a constant source of inspiration Xiaohua Xiaoduo doesn't want to be involved and decisively refuses to like it. Hongshao tolerates the ambiguity, and Fengmao is a little disgusted. Not only does she not do anything, but her daughter falls in love with her father? The first time the master was deceived was due to his personality. The second time he was deceived by the same plot. Let's assume that your "elm-headed" heart has not changed. But it also depends on the situation. The entire sect has mobilized to attack the Blood River army. When the army has already set off, your coach was framed for a few words? The master is no longer found, and Dongzhou is no longer unified. Even if the other party's rhetoric is full of loopholes, he still has to find a red peony root. His combat power was also ruined, Yu Xian was crazy and invincible during the Yuan Ying Period. According to the previous six major sects, Baiyun Sect only has two Nascent Souls. But why would it be like this in Dongzhou during the divine transformation stage? It's not as exciting as condensing qi in the mine. The great power has hundreds of millions of incarnations in Dongzhou. If you kill a tomato 100 million times, you will be able to retire. The above are a bit common in the plots of cultivating immortals. I thought that the transformation of gods and the founding of a sect would be the climax, but it turned out that the word "water" was too obvious to fill in the gaps. Let's take a few days to rest on the writing of Enlightenment and then look at it later. I hope the author can think more carefully about this emotion and the overall situation. If it really doesn't work, it's fine if there are no male-female scenes later. You can also shoulder your fair share of big responsibilities. Oh... Sad.

It seems to be about Yu Xian, but in fact it is about life. It resonates with readers and becomes more and more exciting later on. It's more interesting to read than some cool articles. There is a plot and a main line. It's just that the protagonist is indifferent to feelings. Isn't it a little unkind? The author still has a high vision. Only red peony root can be pleasing to the eye.

"... If you are lucky enough to meet him, you must not rely on his (her) kindness to you, be disrespectful, unreasonable, or make nonsense." The content is novel and not just written for the story. The plot of the story is used to warn people about how to be a human being. It can be used in ancient times and today, so that readers can learn from it. He is a very responsible author who disdains common things about love and uses inspirational stories to warn future generations.

It's so passionate, especially the time when he ascended to immortality. This is the protagonist, this is the mortal cultivating immortality. The author is so amazing [laughing] 👍 👍 👍