[Non-system, growth flow, decisive killing, never virgin, kill through the junction (being chased)]
How will the fat house survive in the borderland after being hit and killed by a dump truck?
I thought I had game experience and could kill everyone, but I found that even the map of the border area had changed.
Most of his past experiences are useless, what should he do?
When the NPC of the game appears in front of him, how will the tragic experience change?
The faded person smiled coldly, it's very simple, won't it be enough if I become a master?
Reader comments
Come and read the book and leave a review. Woo woo woo [crying][crying][crying]
The biggest feature is realism, which is quite good. Games are games, and gameplay should be given priority; novels are novels, and in terms of novels, the original game should serve the second creation of the novel to a certain extent. The author handles this aspect very well. He does not just reproduce the plot of the Ring of Law, but makes it realistic and more consistent with the intersection of reality, such as consciously enlarging the map and introducing real life elements. In terms of plot, it can be seen that the outline is based on the original work, but there are many changes in the arrangement of characters compared to the original work, and it is not a simple reproduction of the script (seriously, the fragmented narrative of this generation of souls is too serious, if the character plot is not independent from the original work) When written, it is basically a running account) This is a great advantage; the writing style is slightly inferior to the average of the entire Internet literature community on each platform (I have read quite a few on each platform, although this definition is one-sided, but it can still be seen), and it is already very good on Tomato. Five stars.
The book is very good, and it can be written under the theme of the Dharma Circle. Come on! ! ! (Mainly because I can't get used to the protagonist's name [Laughter and Cry][Laughter and Cry][Laughter and Cry])
Hello, author, I had something to do before and I didn't have time to read your work in my post. Now I'm here to fulfill my promise. In addition to a wave of five-star praise and support, I also add some personal suggestions.
One thing to say, the author's writing style as a new author is actually quite good for most novels. The characters and plots in the novels also have their own insights and expansions, and they are not simply applying the original game template.
It's just that it may be limited by the writing subject matter, and the audience of Laotouhuan may not be that wide on Tomato (maybe few people who have played it have just seen this novel. Generally, they will be more sympathetic and interested if they have played it themselves. For example, I am a cloud player. I usually don't have time to play so I don't get into it. The story of the game is all played by watching the anchor, so when reading the novel, it is easy to lose the sense of immersion due to half-understanding of some parts. After watching it for a long time, you will not be interested), and the main point is that games have popular periods and cold periods, and the old man ring craze has passed for a long time.
It is inevitable that the novel you just wrote will not achieve results. The author does not need to be discouraged. If there is a chance to read your new book in the future, I will continue to come back to support you. Come on.
Speed! Also, since this is the real world, it stands to reason that the protagonist can use the ability of the magic ring! Or the bonus of the magic ring is relatively high, otherwise you think, if the bonus of each magic ring is not high enough to reach the back, I am afraid that Radagan will not be able to defeat it, and it is impossible to fill up other people's lives, let alone the incarnation of the golden tree in the back. Also, what are your arrangements for that huge figure sitting on the throne in the underground city? Please update it quickly!
To be honest, Feiya's bed curtain favor is not such a simple thing. It's not something you can get with a hug. Think about what contains life force, except blood. [Sinister smile]
It's well written, has a lot of words, but the main character's name is too weird.
I think it's okay. Many of the people written by Lao Touhuan are eunuchs. I hope this one can not be eunuchs [smile], come on!
Come on, good writing
The writing is good. In fact, I personally feel that some plots such as a heroine can be added (of course, I just like it personally, and there is no other meaning). Come on, I hope the author can continue writing.
Okay, okay, I just finished three weeks of reading and I came across this book. The writing is not bad. Keep writing. I'm optimistic about you.
How about deleting the so-called 800-week setting... There are so many things I don't know, which makes me feel uncomfortable... Even if I don't spoil them, I can just give you a vague impression...
How did you come up with Papi? Papi, Panan, Pat. That one doesn't sound better than Papi. Why isn't Papi called Papi? [Awkward laugh]
Please, add more more more more more more! ! ! ! !
Only a mage with full strength is a good warrior
As a time traveler, Pigfoot has little or no knowledge of what happened at the junction. Apart from changing the fate of the daughter of the lord of Moren City, he has no foresight about the story as a time traveler [Thinking]
Come on, author! Don't do it!
It's very good, and it would be even better if they had a harem. The eldest wife is Irena, the second wife is Melina, the third wife is the perfumer (forgot what it's called), the fourth wife is Lani, and the fifth wife is Milia.
Not bad, after all, it is a rare type. It's just that the main character's name is a bit out of place and I'm not used to it, but there are no other problems.
Come on😊Come on come on come on come on come on
This is the most interesting one I have seen so many times. The process may be a bit boring, but it is not completely the same as the game. The different power systems make me deeply feel that I am not playing a game but a real person entering the world of Elden. Even if the guidance has long been broken, please ascend to the King of Elden.
Come on, author, you can find that the really good reviews are like those we have been reading for a long time. I really like it. I am willing to follow you. I hope you will ascend the throne of Elden and never stop updating.
Come on, the DLC will be out soon [Like]
Why not rated?
Very good keep up the good work
What about the author? Why is it gone?
It's much better than other Elden Circle novels.
It's a really good book with many wonderful things.
The description of emotions is also very delicate
Hey guys, why did you delete my comment? I didn't say anything bad about you. In my heart, you are number one in the Fahuan novels.
Come and read the book and leave a review. Woo woo woo [crying][crying][crying]
The biggest feature is realism, which is quite good. Games are games, and gameplay should be given priority; novels are novels, and in terms of novels, the original game should serve the second creation of the novel to a certain extent. The author handles this aspect very well. He does not just reproduce the plot of the Ring of Law, but makes it realistic and more consistent with the intersection of reality, such as consciously enlarging the map and introducing real life elements. In terms of plot, it can be seen that the outline is based on the original work, but there are many changes in the arrangement of characters compared to the original work, and it is not a simple reproduction of the script (seriously, the fragmented narrative of this generation of souls is too serious, if the character plot is not independent from the original work) When written, it is basically a running account) This is a great advantage; the writing style is slightly inferior to the average of the entire Internet literature community on each platform (I have read quite a few on each platform, although this definition is one-sided, but it can still be seen), and it is already very good on Tomato. Five stars.
The book is very good, and it can be written under the theme of the Dharma Circle. Come on! ! ! (Mainly because I can't get used to the protagonist's name [Laughter and Cry][Laughter and Cry][Laughter and Cry])
Hello, author, I had something to do before and I didn't have time to read your work in my post. Now I'm here to fulfill my promise. In addition to a wave of five-star praise and support, I also add some personal suggestions. One thing to say, the author's writing style as a new author is actually quite good for most novels. The characters and plots in the novels also have their own insights and expansions, and they are not simply applying the original game template. It's just that it may be limited by the writing subject matter, and the audience of Laotouhuan may not be that wide on Tomato (maybe few people who have played it have just seen this novel. Generally, they will be more sympathetic and interested if they have played it themselves. For example, I am a cloud player. I usually don't have time to play so I don't get into it. The story of the game is all played by watching the anchor, so when reading the novel, it is easy to lose the sense of immersion due to half-understanding of some parts. After watching it for a long time, you will not be interested), and the main point is that games have popular periods and cold periods, and the old man ring craze has passed for a long time. It is inevitable that the novel you just wrote will not achieve results. The author does not need to be discouraged. If there is a chance to read your new book in the future, I will continue to come back to support you. Come on.
Speed! Also, since this is the real world, it stands to reason that the protagonist can use the ability of the magic ring! Or the bonus of the magic ring is relatively high, otherwise you think, if the bonus of each magic ring is not high enough to reach the back, I am afraid that Radagan will not be able to defeat it, and it is impossible to fill up other people's lives, let alone the incarnation of the golden tree in the back. Also, what are your arrangements for that huge figure sitting on the throne in the underground city? Please update it quickly!
To be honest, Feiya's bed curtain favor is not such a simple thing. It's not something you can get with a hug. Think about what contains life force, except blood. [Sinister smile]
It's well written, has a lot of words, but the main character's name is too weird.
I think it's okay. Many of the people written by Lao Touhuan are eunuchs. I hope this one can not be eunuchs [smile], come on!
Come on, good writing The writing is good. In fact, I personally feel that some plots such as a heroine can be added (of course, I just like it personally, and there is no other meaning). Come on, I hope the author can continue writing.
Okay, okay, I just finished three weeks of reading and I came across this book. The writing is not bad. Keep writing. I'm optimistic about you. How about deleting the so-called 800-week setting... There are so many things I don't know, which makes me feel uncomfortable... Even if I don't spoil them, I can just give you a vague impression...
How did you come up with Papi? Papi, Panan, Pat. That one doesn't sound better than Papi. Why isn't Papi called Papi? [Awkward laugh]
Please, add more more more more more more! ! ! ! !
Only a mage with full strength is a good warrior
As a time traveler, Pigfoot has little or no knowledge of what happened at the junction. Apart from changing the fate of the daughter of the lord of Moren City, he has no foresight about the story as a time traveler [Thinking]
Come on, author! Don't do it!
It's very good, and it would be even better if they had a harem. The eldest wife is Irena, the second wife is Melina, the third wife is the perfumer (forgot what it's called), the fourth wife is Lani, and the fifth wife is Milia.
Not bad, after all, it is a rare type. It's just that the main character's name is a bit out of place and I'm not used to it, but there are no other problems.
Come on😊Come on come on come on come on come on
This is the most interesting one I have seen so many times. The process may be a bit boring, but it is not completely the same as the game. The different power systems make me deeply feel that I am not playing a game but a real person entering the world of Elden. Even if the guidance has long been broken, please ascend to the King of Elden. Come on, author, you can find that the really good reviews are like those we have been reading for a long time. I really like it. I am willing to follow you. I hope you will ascend the throne of Elden and never stop updating.
Come on, the DLC will be out soon [Like]
Why not rated?
Very good keep up the good work
What about the author? Why is it gone?
It's much better than other Elden Circle novels.
It's a really good book with many wonderful things. The description of emotions is also very delicate
Hey guys, why did you delete my comment? I didn't say anything bad about you. In my heart, you are number one in the Fahuan novels.
Who are the heroines?
Big cheers for the author [Like]
Come on! Very well written
Really good, I feel okay