Elden Ring: From the Start, I Take the Tarnished's Place

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The biggest feature is realism, which is quite good. Games are games, and gameplay should be given priority; novels are novels, and in terms of novels, the original game should serve the second creation of the novel to a certain extent. The author handles this aspect very well. He does not just reproduce the plot of the Ring of Law, but makes it realistic and more consistent with the intersection of reality, such as consciously enlarging the map and introducing real life elements. In terms of plot, it can be seen that the outline is based on the original work, but there are many changes in the arrangement of characters compared to the original work, and it is not a simple reproduction of the script (seriously, the fragmented narrative of this generation of souls is too serious, if the character plot is not independent from the original work) When written, it is basically a running account) This is a great advantage; the writing style is slightly inferior to the average of the entire Internet literature community on each platform (I have read quite a few on each platform, although this definition is one-sided, but it can still be seen), and it is already very good on Tomato. Five stars.

The book is very good, and it can be written under the theme of the Dharma Circle. Come on! ! ! (Mainly because I can't get used to the protagonist's name [Laughter and Cry][Laughter and Cry][Laughter and Cry])

Hello, author, I had something to do before and I didn't have time to read your work in my post. Now I'm here to fulfill my promise. In addition to a wave of five-star praise and support, I also add some personal suggestions. One thing to say, the author's writing style as a new author is actually quite good for most novels. The characters and plots in the novels also have their own insights and expansions, and they are not simply applying the original game template. It's just that it may be limited by the writing subject matter, and the audience of Laotouhuan may not be that wide on Tomato (maybe few people who have played it have just seen this novel. Generally, they will be more sympathetic and interested if they have played it themselves. For example, I am a cloud player. I usually don't have time to play so I don't get into it. The story of the game is all played by watching the anchor, so when reading the novel, it is easy to lose the sense of immersion due to half-understanding of some parts. After watching it for a long time, you will not be interested), and the main point is that games have popular periods and cold periods, and the old man ring craze has passed for a long time. It is inevitable that the novel you just wrote will not achieve results. The author does not need to be discouraged. If there is a chance to read your new book in the future, I will continue to come back to support you. Come on.

Speed! Also, since this is the real world, it stands to reason that the protagonist can use the ability of the magic ring! Or the bonus of the magic ring is relatively high, otherwise you think, if the bonus of each magic ring is not high enough to reach the back, I am afraid that Radagan will not be able to defeat it, and it is impossible to fill up other people's lives, let alone the incarnation of the golden tree in the back. Also, what are your arrangements for that huge figure sitting on the throne in the underground city? Please update it quickly!

To be honest, Feiya's bed curtain favor is not such a simple thing. It's not something you can get with a hug. Think about what contains life force, except blood. [Sinister smile]

It's well written, has a lot of words, but the main character's name is too weird.

I think it's okay. Many of the people written by Lao Touhuan are eunuchs. I hope this one can not be eunuchs [smile], come on!

Okay, okay, I just finished three weeks of reading and I came across this book. The writing is not bad. Keep writing. I'm optimistic about you. How about deleting the so-called 800-week setting... There are so many things I don't know, which makes me feel uncomfortable... Even if I don't spoil them, I can just give you a vague impression...

Come on, good writing The writing is good. In fact, I personally feel that some plots such as a heroine can be added (of course, I just like it personally, and there is no other meaning). Come on, I hope the author can continue writing.