Xiao He traveled to a world where a black hole came.
A strange red rain caused the mutation of animals around the world, and what is even more terrifying is that countless more terrifying monsters came to Mercury from the black hole, such as the Western Dragon, Tyrannosaurus Rex, Godzilla, Yamata no Orochi, King Kong, Taotie...
Xiao He bound the [Pokémon Spirit System] and handed the system over.
Since then, the passionate era of Pokémon fighting against monsters has begun.
Charizard VS Western Dragon, Bankelas VS Godzilla, Tyrannosaurus VS Tyrannosaurus Rex...
Established Pokémon Hospital and Pokémon Breeding Center...
Xiao He becomes the father of Pokémon!
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I think it's quite interesting. Come on, it's the first time I've seen this type of thing.
Overall, it's pretty good, but I changed the moves, and it evolved too fast. In three months, the Chou Ugly fish evolved into Menus, and King Magikarp evolved into Gyarados, which was a little weird. Also, the plot was relatively stable. I think I can describe the scene of the death of Menus and an elf, and then when the disaster begins, it should be We should write more about the sacrifices of soldiers. The appearance of monsters can be slowed down. The pig's feet gradually strengthen the country. When I watched it, I felt that the pace was very fast, and I felt that it was easy to collapse later. Although the fighting part was not very good, and the writing was a bit immature (personally), it was still acceptable. There were not many poisonous points [top post][please update][please update]
The book is pretty good
But there are still some small suggestions
1. There are few time descriptions in the chapters, which can easily confuse people.
2. Regarding the evolution of elves, maybe because there are few descriptions about time, I have a feeling that the evolution of elves is very easy. It's not that I hate the fact that elves evolve quickly, but I just feel that there should be a suitable reason for the elf's evolution, such as "the energy in the crystal core is compressed, which allows the elves to grow faster", "the elves given by the system are already easy to grow", etc.
I hope the author can better improve this work from my suggestions [please update]
The author's last one is my fierce bite of land shark! I quite like it! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
When the author stopped updating, I was very sorry. Now that the author is back, my mood immediately improved.
It's interesting, the plot has a decent twist, and it's my favorite Pokémon novel to read.
The writing is good. From the author's writing style, you can feel that the author is a novice, but my personal feeling is not bad. Let me talk about myself first. I am a person who looks at the ratings before deciding whether to read it or not. I was a little interested when I saw the title of the book. I clicked in and took a look. What a guy! 6.5! (I read the introduction first) Although I was a little interested, my instinct was to quit, and then I backed out and clicked in again! I repeated it several times, thinking that it would not lose a piece of meat if I looked at it, so I looked at it, and it was indeed not bad! I'm just worried that if the author writes this way, it will collapse later. (Although the combat ratio is a bit off, it's not a big problem for me)
Another comment: The author is great ~ don't have a female protagonist, okay? It's okay if you have... Well, I won't mind.
Is the author running away?
Hupa should be stronger. Liberating Hupa requires a level one divine combat power. It only takes seconds for the air to escape.
The subject matter is very novel and the writing style is a bit immature. Great author, come on!
The subject matter is very novel, I haven't seen it anywhere else. It's good [like], I just wish it would be faster😁, but it's not good enough [please update], cheers for the author!
It's well written, but it's been so many days, aren't you ready to update it?
Great author, come on＾0＾~
Found a huge treasure
Why is this novel rated so low? Obviously the setting is very novel, the plot is smooth, and the content is good, but the rating is so low, I really don't understand it. Come on, author, I think your writing is beautiful.
A very interesting novel
The subject matter is fresh and quite good!
It's a very good book, but don't stop reading it.
I started listening at 2 a. M. Yesterday and it is now 3:23 a. M. I finally finished listening to it. The novel is very good, except for some problems with some details. Everything else is fine, but the progress is a bit slow.
A very nice book. . . But. . Is this a eunuch? [Laughter awkwardly][Laughter awkwardly][Laughter awkwardly]
Big cheers for the author
Looking forward to it
It's good-looking ⊙▽⊙. I feel that the end of the world in this book matches the elves. Compared with the simple elves coming and popular science articles, the background setting of this article has a different flavor. Oops, I can't explain it. Anyway, it is very interesting.
The system is awesome
The subject matter is novel and good
This book is still very beautiful and has its own characteristics.
Beautiful and beautiful♥️♥️
Never use a female lead! ! !
Love you, thank you for your hard work😘😘
This type of novel yyds! Big boost to the author!
Very exciting and well written! [Sending Hearts]
The subject matter is very good, but I feel like the writing style is a bit lacking. Keep up the good work.
It looks great, I hope it doesn't collapse later.
It's super beautiful, both in terms of subject matter and content, it's very innovative (for me). But there are still a few people reading the novel. I hope the author will not give up. [Sending my heart]
For book friends, if you think the book is good, please give the review a star🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟[Please pay attention][Please pay attention][Please pay attention][Please pay attention] Each of your comments is a great support for the author and the author's motivation for writing [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention] [Asking for attention]
I think it's quite interesting. Come on, it's the first time I've seen this type of thing.
Overall, it's pretty good, but I changed the moves, and it evolved too fast. In three months, the Chou Ugly fish evolved into Menus, and King Magikarp evolved into Gyarados, which was a little weird. Also, the plot was relatively stable. I think I can describe the scene of the death of Menus and an elf, and then when the disaster begins, it should be We should write more about the sacrifices of soldiers. The appearance of monsters can be slowed down. The pig's feet gradually strengthen the country. When I watched it, I felt that the pace was very fast, and I felt that it was easy to collapse later. Although the fighting part was not very good, and the writing was a bit immature (personally), it was still acceptable. There were not many poisonous points [top post][please update][please update]
The book is pretty good But there are still some small suggestions 1. There are few time descriptions in the chapters, which can easily confuse people. 2. Regarding the evolution of elves, maybe because there are few descriptions about time, I have a feeling that the evolution of elves is very easy. It's not that I hate the fact that elves evolve quickly, but I just feel that there should be a suitable reason for the elf's evolution, such as "the energy in the crystal core is compressed, which allows the elves to grow faster", "the elves given by the system are already easy to grow", etc. I hope the author can better improve this work from my suggestions [please update]
The author's last one is my fierce bite of land shark! I quite like it! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
When the author stopped updating, I was very sorry. Now that the author is back, my mood immediately improved.
It's interesting, the plot has a decent twist, and it's my favorite Pokémon novel to read.
The writing is good. From the author's writing style, you can feel that the author is a novice, but my personal feeling is not bad. Let me talk about myself first. I am a person who looks at the ratings before deciding whether to read it or not. I was a little interested when I saw the title of the book. I clicked in and took a look. What a guy! 6.5! (I read the introduction first) Although I was a little interested, my instinct was to quit, and then I backed out and clicked in again! I repeated it several times, thinking that it would not lose a piece of meat if I looked at it, so I looked at it, and it was indeed not bad! I'm just worried that if the author writes this way, it will collapse later. (Although the combat ratio is a bit off, it's not a big problem for me) Another comment: The author is great ~ don't have a female protagonist, okay? It's okay if you have... Well, I won't mind.
Is the author running away?
Hupa should be stronger. Liberating Hupa requires a level one divine combat power. It only takes seconds for the air to escape.
The subject matter is very novel and the writing style is a bit immature. Great author, come on!
The subject matter is very novel, I haven't seen it anywhere else. It's good [like], I just wish it would be faster😁, but it's not good enough [please update], cheers for the author!
It's well written, but it's been so many days, aren't you ready to update it?
Great author, come on＾0＾~
Found a huge treasure
Why is this novel rated so low? Obviously the setting is very novel, the plot is smooth, and the content is good, but the rating is so low, I really don't understand it. Come on, author, I think your writing is beautiful.
A very interesting novel
The subject matter is fresh and quite good!
It's a very good book, but don't stop reading it.
I started listening at 2 a. M. Yesterday and it is now 3:23 a. M. I finally finished listening to it. The novel is very good, except for some problems with some details. Everything else is fine, but the progress is a bit slow.
A very nice book. . . But. . Is this a eunuch? [Laughter awkwardly][Laughter awkwardly][Laughter awkwardly]
Big cheers for the author Looking forward to it
It's good-looking ⊙▽⊙. I feel that the end of the world in this book matches the elves. Compared with the simple elves coming and popular science articles, the background setting of this article has a different flavor. Oops, I can't explain it. Anyway, it is very interesting. The system is awesome
The subject matter is novel and good
This book is still very beautiful and has its own characteristics.
Beautiful and beautiful♥️♥️ Never use a female lead! ! ! Love you, thank you for your hard work😘😘
This type of novel yyds! Big boost to the author! Very exciting and well written! [Sending Hearts]
The subject matter is very good, but I feel like the writing style is a bit lacking. Keep up the good work.
It looks great, I hope it doesn't collapse later.
It's super beautiful, both in terms of subject matter and content, it's very innovative (for me). But there are still a few people reading the novel. I hope the author will not give up. [Sending my heart]