Apocalypse: I Hand Over the Elves to the State
末世：我把精灵上交国家
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 354k Words
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- Doomsday: Starting with a Bound Spirit System末日开局：从绑定精灵系统开始Former title · until Oct 2026
162Chapters
46Reads
8.6Score
6Listens
176.8kReads · all time
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I think it's quite interesting. Come on, it's the first time I've seen this type of thing.
Overall, it's pretty good, but I changed the moves, and it evolved too fast. In three months, the Chou Ugly fish evolved into Menus, and King Magikarp evolved into Gyarados, which was a little weird. Also, the plot was relatively stable. I think I can describe the scene of the death of Menus and an elf, and then when the disaster begins, it should be We should write more about the sacrifices of soldiers. The appearance of monsters can be slowed down. The pig's feet gradually strengthen the country. When I watched it, I felt that the pace was very fast, and I felt that it was easy to collapse later. Although the fighting part was not very good, and the writing was a bit immature (personally), it was still acceptable. There were not many poisonous points [top post][please update][please update]
The book is good, but there are still some small suggestions: 1. There are few descriptions of time in the chapters, which can easily make people confused. 2. Regarding the evolution of elves, maybe because there are few descriptions of time, it makes me feel that the evolution of elves is very easy. I hope the author can use my suggestions to better improve this work [please update]
The author's last one is my fierce bite of land shark! I quite like it! 💕💕💕💕💕
When the author stopped updating, I was very sorry. Now that the author is back, my mood immediately improved.
It's interesting, the plot has a decent twist, and it's my favorite Pokémon novel to read.
The writing is good. From the author's writing style, you can feel that the author is a novice, but I personally feel pretty good. Let me tell you first. I am a person who looks at the ratings before deciding whether to read it or not. I was a little interested when I saw the title of the book. I clicked in and took a look. What a guy! 6.5! (I read the introduction first) Although I was a little interested, my instinct was to quit, and then I backed out and clicked in again! I repeated it several times, thinking that it would not lose a piece of meat if I looked at it, so I looked at it, and it was indeed not bad! I'm just worried that if the author writes this way, it will collapse later. (Although the combat ratio is a bit off, it's not a big problem here for me) Another comment: The author is great ~ don't have a female protagonist, okay? It's okay if you have... Well, I won't mind.
Is the author running away?
Hupa should be stronger. Liberating Hupa requires a level one divine combat power. It only takes seconds for the air to escape.