Bound to a Sign-In System? Don't Panic, Hand It Over to the Nation First!

I gave it such a high score simply because I thought it was very hard for the author to type in large numbers. There is no other reason. The author's imaginative theme at the beginning was really good and novel, but as it got later, it felt more and more stymied by the characters. Has the author ever thought about speeding up the process? For example, by passing time in one stroke, accelerating the growth of the heroine's complete character; or correcting some inconsistencies: the heroine has begun to distrust the official, how to arrange cases to solve instead of leaving a foreshadowing of hidden dangers. As for the male protagonist... We can actually modify the introduction... After all, according to the current presentation of the novel, the change in the male protagonist's attitude is not reliable, and the male protagonist is not very present when the female protagonist needs companionship... The most important thing is that the male protagonist's purpose is not pure at the beginning. If the post-processing is not handled well, there will be a very strong sense of being forced. It's like the male and female protagonists are together because they are a good match or because they each have what they need, and it has nothing to do with love... I hope the author can think about it again...

I received that the system was not bound, and then it was bound for my mother's treatment, and then it was handed over to the state. I feel like I'm not of the same era, am I naive...

Not bad, not bad, really good! ! !

Well, it's different from ordinary cool articles, and the tone is good, but I think the author needs to improve his expressive skills, and some political descriptions are not satisfactory and are too childish. The heroine is indeed a very twisted person, but it is the words that make us feel that the character is twisted, rather than the words that make the readers feel twisted. Maybe there is something wrong with my expression, that is, the whole book reads too childish. The characters can be childish, but the words cannot. I was able to read all the updated ones simply because the tone was good and I wanted to see what technologies would emerge. Come on, author. Through the text, I feel that this is a relatively young author, and he deserves encouragement for writing such a long text.

Emmmm To be honest, I don't really like this kind of subject, because it always feels like it's going too far. . But I was short of books, so I gave it a try. I feel that the author's writing is quite good, and many plot details are considered in detail. For example, after the protagonist informed the national system, he was monitored and protected; the protagonist did not become a genius overnight and could learn everything he could. Like the protagonist's personality and various entanglements. Etc. I think the author must have thought about it a lot, and I think it's pretty easy to accept. Hahaha, I didn't go into the text deeply and just enjoyed the pictures. Personally, I don't think the entire article is a very brainless and enjoyable article. Some parts are also considered well-thought-out, and of course there are also some parts that are not particularly perfect. But I think it's still OK. Come on update!

It's just that the heroine has a bad personality and is timid

Come on, the author, work hard to update, update! ! ! Write what you want, and don't worry about what other people say. No one can satisfy everyone. Don't pay attention to what they say, come on, come on, come on! ! ! [Laughing][laughing]

Who is the male protagonist? 😂 I hope the heroine can stand up

How come such a beautiful book doesn't get a high score?

If Gu Ze is the male protagonist and Jiang Shi is a time bomb, will the female protagonist and the male protagonist have a love triangle?