Immortal First and Then Practice Cultivation. If I Survive You to Death, I Will Be Invincible.

It is better to say that it is to survive than to survive. This world is too ruthless for ordinary people. The author's description is very good and has profound knowledge. Whether it is Huang Shouzi or Lao Zhenzi, they are the epitome of the people at the bottom. The sadness revealed makes people sigh, a bit like Kong Yiji. I think the only pity is that the article could actually have a more stylish name, but if we abandon the current online book title that is in line with current public tastes, we may lose some readers. There's no way, people nowadays like cool articles, but it's not a big problem. As long as the article is good, you can completely trick people into it and then kill them, like me~

The author's writing style is very good, and the characters in the article are fully portrayed. The ordinary life and tragic ending of the old escort's character create a sense of reality for the story. The portrayal of the protagonist's humanity is also good, but it still lacks Huo Hou. The portrayal is not enough in some places and the emotional rendering is not good. But I have to say that the writing is very good. In my opinion, if I can keep writing, I will be qualified to become a god. It is recommended that the author study more novels with rich characters and plots such as In the Snow, The King of Evernight, and Zhe Tian, ​​and then supplement them with modern novels about low-class people such as Alive and Xiangzi to deepen the writing power of the article. I hope that the author will continue to work hard, strengthen his writing skills, and finally persevere. There are not many good books of this type now, so don't give up because of low ratings. One day, the clouds will clear and the sun will shine. I believe your novel will get a correct evaluation one day. I hope the author will give it his best. ——A brief book review by a bookworm of eight years

It's a very good book. The author obviously has a good rhythm, but many people are used to reading cool writing and can't stand the slow pace and depressing plot. Personally, I think this book is excellent, with good writing, good artistic conception, appropriate plot, and delicate description. It has the flavor of realism in a fantasy world. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I strongly support it and hope that the author can maintain the current level and improve it even better. Never update for the sake of updating. In fact, Kavin, my brother can afford to wait. I have seen too many authors ruin the work because they were struggling to deliver it. I think the current two women are the foundation for this book to become gods. If you can write a plot where the protagonist accompanies Ruan Qinglan to grow old and die normally and then undergoes a transformation, really, you can definitely make this book stand out! Then the rest of the follow-up is up to you. But don't be in a hurry when writing. Finally, we can afford the wait!

It's good to read. I've been loving reading books like this lately. The writing is also pretty good. Unlike other books with infinite lifespans, the protagonist quickly becomes invincible. The protagonist is still laying the foundation after more than sixty chapters. Moreover, the protagonist also has a brain, but there are too few updates in one day, which is not enough to read!

It's really good. I like this kind of slow-burning novels. I'm tired of reading Shuangwen. I don't like the delicate and complete tragedies of literature, and I don't want to read Shuangwen's Long Aotian and complete comedy. This kind of slow-burning, ordinary, heavy, but not many stories is what I like.

Hi hi hi hi! [Laughing evilly] (Sorry for my sudden illness~) Generally speaking, there shouldn't be much problem with this book... Right? Personally, I don't think it's a big problem. The author just needs to keep up the offensive and keep going! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][please update]

Such an ordinary process is the most real life of ordinary people. The cool articles in the air are just floating clouds every second. Being mediocre is real, being invincible at the beginning is too fake and boring [eating melon]

It's okay. Those poisonous spots are just a little uncomfortable for me. Seeing the setting that you can only cultivate immortality and have extremely ordinary qualifications, I knew that there would definitely be this uncomfortable point. If you don't want to see it, you don't have to watch it. Please don't lower the rating (I just hope that you can't comment without request. Don't argue with me. You are just my dinner, you are the best)

The writing style is relatively good, not brainless, the world has not collapsed for the time being, if the car is driven less than 100 million points, it will not be much different from the Virgo of those great authors! Come on, author, don't collapse, don't be eunuch, don't end up unfinished, don't speed up the pace too much.

I think it's pretty good. You've already lived forever. What else could you ask for? Moreover, the author's writing is very smoky. The protagonist is just an ordinary person. He has nothing special except for his immortality. Moreover, the author wrote very well about the oppression of ordinary people in that world. It was not easy for everyone to survive. He did not exaggerate. He just wrote about the life of the poor in ancient times.

I think this book is very well written. Why is it rated so low? The writing is very real, there is eternal life, but there is no chance to become powerful. The protagonist works very hard and there has been no update for several days. I hope the author will persevere. Those who work hard will eventually be rewarded. Come on, we are waiting for you🌹🌹🌹

This book is very good. How can I put it? Reality is not a fairy tale. Since immortality is destined, one must experience the pain of losing loved ones and relatives. Otherwise, there is no point in living without desires and pursuits. In addition, this book describes the helplessness of the life of the lower class people.

Very good, according to this cautious and small-scale writing, the overall view of the early period of books like this on Tomato is inferior to that of cultivating immortals. A long life is not just a matter of living in obscurity, just like ordinary people, struggling and struggling, and finally becoming a blockbuster.

The writing style is very good, the writing is very real and it is very enjoyable to read. It is not the kind of brainless Long Aotian stallion story. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Blow kiss] [Like] [Love]

This book is slow-paced, but it shows a rich fantasy world. The author updates each chapter one by one. I doubt that he has done anything wrong, so I recommend updating it thousands of times a day [smile][smile][smile][smile]

In fact, this book is very good, but the subject matter is not very novel. But it incorporates something that is not found in other novels of this type. Well, I hope you don't have to criticize a new author like this. His first book is already very good. Can an author create a readership? I feel this book is very good. If readers will write more in the future. I will definitely be the first to support it. I hope the author can create a large readership. If possible, can you give me an administrator? [Smile]

Come on, come on, I feel great

It's very well written, and it basically reflects the ups and downs of cultivating immortals and the real people living at the bottom. If you can stick to it, it should become popular.

This book is actually quite well written. Although it is systematic, it does not overly affect the growth of the protagonist. It is a book with a very good setting in the longevity novel, and it is worth writing. After all, it took almost a hundred chapters to get into the mood? What's more, this is the time of high martial arts, and there are also An Jin and Hua Jin. . . . If you can keep writing it, it will be really interesting, including the current love line. This is like a growth story of ordinary people who only have the immortality buff. The plus point of the next door is that it is too fast-paced and deviates from the growth pace of ordinary people with ordinary immortals. In comparison, the immortality story next door is a bit dependent on the system for growth.

This book is very real and gives a good reading experience. Some of the poisonous points in the middle really made my scalp numb and very entangled, but it also successfully attracted the following story. It is like those bloody plots in TV series that would not happen normally. He just can make a truth happen, and it will be popular sooner or later. Come on, author.

Tomato is a rare masterpiece. Although it has some flaws, it is still undeniable that the author's writing is very good. The reason for the low score is probably because the book is true and focuses on character description and the slight cruelty and helplessness of life. It does not belong to the category of refreshing writing. It does not have the so-called refreshing points of those novice novels, which has caused dissatisfaction among some readers and makes them feel useless. . . . .

This book is very good. It tells the lives of the people at the bottom of the martial arts world and the warmth and coldness of the world. It is very good. I found a lot of bad reviews! Anyway, the good books on Tomato nowadays are like looking for a needle in a haystack. There are too many interesting articles. I still miss the horror articles in the past that were not interesting. Alas, I can't go back. (I'm not saying that the exciting articles are not good, it's just that there are too few good ones.)

More than ten years have passed. Why doesn't the protagonist change places or practice disguise? Isn't it possible that no one will notice that he has been in one place for such a long time?

To be honest, personally, it's pretty good. It's not brainless, it's just too little.

Okay, it's a good book on Tomato

This book is different from the books I have read. There is no super fast upgrade speed; It feels like that slow ramp up feeling that some of the previous books had.

I think it's very good, but the update is a bit slow. I think this is the state of an immortal. Once immortal, you are still a human being and not a stone. Those who directly become eunuchs are really confusing.

This book really attracted me, because I don't like reading books that are too straightforward or too long-running, but this book just meets my standards, and the plot is also exciting. I hope the author will keep writing. I don't know if I can see the end, because except for the unfinished books, I never seem to finish a novel completely. I hope you can be the first one.

But what he wrote was pretty good, and the content and plot were pretty good.