海贼王之熬死你们我就无敌了

Damn, this is so exciting. Can you update it in 20 hours? One hour to eat, one hour to wash, and two hours to sleep.

After a while, capture the three generals and target Kizaru, don't let him idle. And that one, Whitebeard, Kaido, Charlotte Lingling, Roger, catch them all and let them feel the father's love.

The book is very good, and people are looking forward to the following content. I hope it won't collapse in the future, but there are very few chapters at the moment, so I need to read again [smirking] Come on, author!

Oh~ My God, look at this novel, which has been updated for 13 consecutive days and has been interrupted for 13 hours. Doesn't the author want to explain it? What a perfect coincidence, but I hope that the interrupted update hour can be shortened to less than 1 hour. How about it? (*^ω^*)

Author, you need to take good care of yourself. Always maintain a status of explosive updates don't be like me Go to bed early and get up early, be strict with yourself, keep exercising, and have instant egg noodles

In the future, when a war breaks out on the top of the mountain, the protagonist shouts: "Everyone here is either my son or grandson. There is nothing to fight for. We are all one family [smile] [smile] [smile]"

Yes, this shows the passion and passion of the pirates... I can't make it up anymore.

This book is much better than other One Piece fanfics. This book has almost no changes to the plot. Fans of One Piece can read it with confidence. It is simply to cultivate them, unlike some fanfics that either kill plot characters or recruit younger brothers. What he wrote was the details that Oda didn't introduce, and then he taught some of the plot characters almost enough, allowing them to develop freely, and it became the plot written by Oda.

A very interesting book, waiting for updates! Come on, author! [Eat melon] I really can't stand it when I see Kizaru! ! ! Just for the system reward, slap people's faces on shit!

I personally feel it's quite good, and I have one star for myself. The main character has a love line, and it seems like the author really can't think of a main line to fill in the words (the age difference between the main character and the heroine seems to be a bit big), but the front part is really very beautiful! Worth recommending! ! ! The heroine Robin really can't stand it anymore...

I have seen some good pirate stories so far. Unlike others, cheating is too serious, such as having a harem, bullying, etc. Super beautiful, the pinnacle of pirate writing

Don't push the roots anymore. The author also needs to rest. He will die suddenly if he stays up late... But what does his sudden death have to do with us? Give me more quickly! ! !

It's beautiful, haha, it's so fun. I hope there won't be a heroine. Please [facepalm]. After all, I'm so old. I just need to educate the children.

Brothers, I remembered one thing. Look, Roger and Garp are the sons of the protagonist, Dragon is the son of Garp, and the grandson of the protagonist, isn't Luffy the great-grandson of the protagonist? Then the protagonist recognized Roger as his son, and then Roger gave birth to a son named Ace, and then Ace should be the same generation as Long, and then Luffy became sworn sworn brother with Ace, forcibly making his father the eldest brother, turning against the guest and forcibly equalizing the seniority, so I really want to I know what the protagonist should call Ace during the war on the top. [Thinking] You must know that the protagonist is neither a pirate nor a navy. He can do whatever he wants. So let's make a blind guess. The protagonist may save Ace during the war on the top. [Cool]

To be honest, sometimes it is nonsensical, very funny, and very fun. And it gives me the feeling that he is an old naughty boy. The characters are created extremely well. Particularly immersive. And it has a great sense of humor. And the plot is well written. Flawless. Very cool! The writing is also very good, and the receptionist is also very good. There is no gap in the middle. I personally think this novel is very interesting. And I felt happy after watching it. I hope the author can continue to write without interruption or eunuchs. I will keep reading. I hope you don't give up either. This novel is the funniest one I've read among the One Piece fan fiction. And you are the prettiest too. I don't know about other novels, but I think this novel is really good. Keep reading, keep going! Dear author, hello! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to rush for updates, because I believe that I can see his ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't abandon updates and replenish water, everything will not be a problem. I am waiting with you, your loyal readers. I admire your writing very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. , Just like Jane's state of reading "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard", one more chapter leads to one less chapter. I want to read it, but I can't bear to read it. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I am just a bored idler. I click on this novel aimlessly. I have no intention of reading it. His mood is over, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish reading. Now I can only be filled with emotions. Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this time. I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. You dear readers

One word, awesome [thinking] Although the plot is really good. A little [shy] on the emotional line But the main plot and plot advancement are really good. It's just that Wang Lufei's plot line is too poorly described. Although, it would be good to write more plot lines about the man who wants to become the Pirate King [Thinking]. If Wang Lufei knew that one of his crew members had become his grandfather, would he be embarrassed? Should he call him grandma? [Laughing] Then there is the hidden thread buried earlier, the subplot between the Empress and Wang Lufei. How can I write it better below? It should still be based on the original plot, and it will still be magically changed [thinking]. As far as the overall development of this book is concerned, there are many plot lines that can be written, including the original main plot line of the protagonist, Wang Lufei's original protagonist plot line, including the Empress, Hawkeye, Ming Ge, the follow-up Murlocs, Celestial Dragons, and Whitebeard's death after experiencing the war at the top. , The development of the new Yonko, including Markisaka, I remember correctly, I still don't know who his master is, so in the war, there are three generals, two are the protagonist's apprentices, and one is Garp's backup. The Warring States Period was taught by the protagonist, so there is a lot of room for imagination in the subsequent development.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy Heavy, gradually, it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was heavy, maybe both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just TM Who do you look down on in the next few chapters?

It's pretty good. It's a rough-and-tumble piece of writing. If possible, I think we can make a side story about the character, such as Garp's or Roger's.

This book is very good, I hope the author will add more chapters and not be too eunuch.

I almost couldn't watch anymore. If the protagonist hadn't collected a harem, I would have given a one-star negative review. It's pretty good now. I hope it will continue and the protagonist will have more and more harems [laughter]

Why do you keep abusing Garp?

Update soon! Hey! So pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

I have never begged anyone in my life, so...

The book is okay. But why can ordinary animal species be developed into phantom beast species? Phantom beast species are phantom beast species, and animal species are ordinary animal species. How can phantom beast species be developed after birth if they are innate. There are no more than 10 phantom beast species in the entire Pirates, and they were not developed from ordinary animals into phantom beast species, but were originally phantom beast species.

It can be said to be a very unique book, and the author updates it very quickly. There are basically four chapters every day, and the update is very fast. And its overall story is very attractive. There are very few books of this type. It may be said that this is the only one ("maybe" is not necessarily)

Okay, it's considered good among all the One Piece movies I've watched, and I definitely think this one is very good. The key point for me is not whether the battle power collapses or not (but it's not unimportant) or whether there is a heroine or not. Just read the book and enjoy yourself. Some books can't be read halfway through, so I didn't rate them randomly. I also can't understand that some people will randomly rate someone if they don't like it (a very small number of people). Some people will belittle the author's hard work in just one or two sentences. (My own hobby is also writing. Although my writing is terrible, I am happy.) I'm watching the old man travel in the world of pirates for us. I was watching the scenes of falling in love and killing each other in One Piece, and I was watching some interesting things, and I felt a little bit uneasy. (Humans, don't be too picky) Those people were cared for by the old man when they were young. Although the old man was a bit naughty, he was really good and would teach the disobedient children. Their interaction was really good. I even cried when the old man left after teaching them. [Almost crying] There are many moments of joy in the book, and there are also some great truths in it. After reading this book, my other One Piece books were a bit boring. These are my own opinions. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. [Smile][make a face][make a face]

Suddenly one day, the protagonist wanted to find a wife. He had a very unique vision and fell in love with a sexy woman named Charlotte Lingling with an amazing figure. Then Garp had dozens of brothers and sisters, Long had dozens of uncles, and Lu Fei had dozens of grandfathers.

Looks good, come on, what would happen if Garp and Roger met and found out they were the same father?

It's so beautiful, everyone will care about it, it's no better than Bo Ran.

The subject matter of this book is very novel. Those who have not read the original work should not get mad here. Isn't this how Garp trained Luffy? Don't take the anime as reality.