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Waiting online, the fortune teller said that I am missing five stars in my life, you know what I mean (ｏ)! ! ! I really didn't expect so many people to read this book. This is my first time writing a book. I feel that the writing is really poor and there are many shortcomings in other places. If you have any questions, you can comment in the comment area below. I will reply when I see it. Then many people asked the same questions about the content of the first few chapters and the spy play house. When I wrote this book, I didn't I thought so much that I actually wrote it for myself because it was the first time I wrote a book and I didn't write an outline. Every day I wrote whatever I thought of, and then I would write some plots that I thought were good. I kowtow to the anime fans who play the role here. In the end, many readers said they wanted to see the skirt. I have already built it - you are so mad at Ling Er and Wu Jiuling.

I didn't expect that the author is not only beautiful, but also writes so beautifully [shy]

Ordinary life, wall crack recommendation

The name of this book does seem a bit old-fashioned, but the content is actually a bit comforting. I highly recommend it [Like]

Come on! It's well written, it's the type I like.

A good book may not be liked at first, but it will become more popular over time. I hope the author will persevere and not end it [laughs][laughs] I haven't watched it for a few days. Why is it over? [Crying][Crying]

At first I thought it was a spy play house fan novel, it's very good

Good idea and good content. It must be the first time for the author to write. The details aren't handled very well, and the environment changes aren't very good either. Neither is the character description. I don't know the rest either. Come on, author. Write well By the way, there is also a bit little description of this world.

I particularly like that the beginning of this book is a bit like spy playing house, but then it becomes different and very thoughtful [face covering] [face covering]

It's good-looking, but it's a little short, and there are some small holes that haven't been filled in. But the author also said that he has to improve himself, and these small holes don't matter, it's really good-looking, keep up the good work, and publish a good book! ! ! [Crazy][crazy]

It's okay, but it's too short. The most the male and female protagonists can do is kiss (the last chapter)! Just read it as a story! - 2023.4.9 19:25

It is not difficult to tell that this is the first time the author has written. The plot is pretty good, but some details are not handled very well. It is quite interesting. Although I have not watched Spy Play House, I think those people will like this. Others are good, but I think the author should not make the heroine too stupid. After all, she can be a top assassin. Otherwise, she will die 108,000 times if she is so stupid. I mean where is the bargain price of 300? It's okay to have a blank slate in love Also, in the author's Chapter 66, it's great that the male protagonist confesses to the female protagonist. I've read other novels that just drag them on and grind them to death.

The plot is interesting, witty and heartwarming, a good book, you can read it [Like]

The plot is exciting and very sweet. However, is it now popular to trick 🐶 into killing him? ! !

I just read it today. The plot is relatively novel and the author's writing style is relatively good. I hope the author will continue to develop in this style and not let other people's rumors influence him. Finally, I would like to sum up: This book is very punishing!

The subject matter of the novel is very good (although it may be borrowed from some), but I feel that the essence is not written. I personally think that the essence of this type of novel lies in the plots of hiding and being hidden in daily life between the two parties, practicing their own justice in testing and concealment, thus enriching the characters, and then showing a classic confrontation at the moment when the two parties show off or when one party is discovered. But it is a pity that the author did not go into depth in either the writing style or the plot. The characters presented in this way seem a bit dull. Of course, it may also be the reason why the story has not been fully developed in the early stage. Overall, it is good and the future is promising.

The showdown is straightforward and very enjoyable. I hope the author will keep updating the quality.

So pretty! But... Why did it end suddenly! ! ?

It looks good, but the author completed the main plot too quickly, and it was almost done as soon as the identity was revealed. But not having water is a good virtue [like]. I have read many books that have run out of juice and are still in water, which is really disgusting. Five stars. Looking forward to the author's next book!

The whole book is still very good so far. The protagonist is the one who can beat the strongest man in Japan like a dog. And when he fights with the guy from the Black Hawk Bureau, it doesn't feel particularly easy, so I always feel that the combat power is a bit broken. Just this little problem, the rest is very good and very exciting. It's tasteless, it doesn't smell good, it's hard to describe, and the main character has no role.

It looks good, but it's too short, a lot of holes are left unfilled, and the most important thing is that I didn't eat even a morsel of meat [angry]

Update soon. Besides. This is over sixty episodes. Just slept on the same bed. Not even kissed. This relationship develops a bit slowly. I hope the author will read and write it himself, otherwise he will give me the address. I'll send you some souvenirs [cool]

The writing is very good. I personally think that if it is not a bad ending, it should be able to reach a high score of 9 points. When I read this book, I was expecting the protagonist to confess to the heroine. Although it was not what I thought, it was not bad. I believe in the author's writing style. Come on.

It's okay, but I hope it will be sweet to death later on, so come on, author! ! !

Ordinary life, warm daily life [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Partridge Sky·Huaiwang Daofu Songs of downfall record past travels. What more can you ask for if your head looks like this? There is nothing left to do if the heart and liver are vomiting, and it is not a long-term plan to have a safe mouth and stomach. I'm afraid of the heat, and I'm afraid of autumn. There is no book in Tianya Mengjuan. Most of the eyes are new and shallow, and they are envious of micro-officials for their tricks. Poppy Spring Sorrow Chen Liang The east wind blows with light clouds, sending Xiaoxiaoyu with it. Painted pavilions by the water are swallows newly returned, a mouthful of fragrant mud is wet, and falling flowers are flying. The path of begonia grits is paved with fragrant embroidery, and it is still thin in spring. Willows and crows crow in the courtyard at dusk. I remember the man who was singing with the moon and the moon. He sent the envoy of Zhang Demao to the prisoner. Chen Liang I haven't seen Nanshi for a long time, and I talk about the North group being empty. With just one hand on the spot, I finally returned my ten thousand husbands. The self-smiling Han Dynasty envoy is like a vast river, still only flowing eastward? If you return to Qionglu and pay your respects, you will meet on Gaojie Street! The capital of Yao, the soil of Shun, and the seal of Yu. There should be a half-shameful minister Rong in the middle! Thousands of miles are like this, but the eternal heroes are still at peace. When will the majesty be cleared? Why should Hu Yun ask? The sun will come from within! Pear blossom. Week.

Well, that is. The subject matter is good and the writing is good. But it's really too short. Moreover, there are not many that set up such a good world view, so there are many that can be written. But in the end, well, it's okay.

Awesome! [Adoration][Adoration] More sweet plots, I want to knock (=^▽^=)(๑°3°๑)[Note]

I feel like hiding my identity is quite uncomfortable.

The overall look and feel is very good, but there are some deficiencies in plot control, but this does not affect the smoothness of the entire book. The characterization of the characters is also quite satisfactory. Although it is not particularly fleshed out, it is not inexplicable either. More than 80 pieces have been hastily completed, leaving a lot of holes unfilled. It is indeed a big mistake. I hope the author can continue to work hard and create better works!