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Are There Any High-Quality Stories About Two Male Protagonists? Two Male Protagonists! ! Two Male Protagonists! ! !
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A Group Portrait of a Group of Teenagers Entering the World. Some of Them Use Swords, Perform Knives, Are Good at Calculations, and Practice Medicine.
A group portrait of a group of teenagers wandering into the world. Some of them use swords, perform knives, are good at calculations, and are good at medicine and poison.
Jianghu Double Men, High Quality.
I Want a Young Man, Not a Master and a Disciple. the Young Men Are Like Cultivating Immortals. Two Men
The young man is high-spirited and has the courage to face everything
Cultivation of Immortality, Two Men, Group Portrait, High-Spirited Young Man Wandering the World
It's 80,000 Words and Only 9 People Have Read It. Is There Anyone Worse Than Me?
I want to read a book similar to "The Gangster Has Fallen in Love with Me". I wrote it for a long time, maybe it was just out of my own passion, and no one read it at all.
Doesn't Tomato Have a Good-Looking Double Nanny? ಠ╭╮ಠ
Shuangnan, a Cultivator, Gifted and with a Good Family Background, a Group of Teenagers Traveled Around the World
I want to watch something like "Yaoshou!" The book "This Sword Cultivator Isn't Quite Straight".
I Want to See a Group Portrait of a Group of Boys and Girls Making Their Way in the World.
Tomato is all about cultivating immortals, so I want to watch martial arts! Similar to the Orange Light game "Young Disciple Jianghu Lao"
Looking for Two Male Protagonists Who Are Cultivators of Immortality, and Upgrade Their Streaming Tut
I want to read a book similar to "Junior Brother Xie, what should I do if he is too popular?"
Two Men, Cultivating Immortals, Not Master and Disciple. I've Read Too Many Articles About Masters and Apprentices, and I Don't Want to Read Anymore.
A Sweet Story About Two Nans, the Male Protagonists Are Both Strong, and the Ending Is HE
Asking for My Senior Brother's Article Shuang Nan Xiu Xian, My Senior Brother Is on Top
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This book is really good. According to my own opinion, I think Xiao Qingshan is even comparable to Mo Dao. Whether it is the ups and downs of the main plot, which is exciting, or the blurring to clarity of the emotional line between Jiang Xun and Fu Yue, it is very interesting. Every character is so vivid in the author's writing. Brother Xun, Brother Lin, Brother Jin'er, Ling'er, and Ali all interpret the high-spiritedness of young people. After reading this, I just can't say enough, come again! The story of Jiang Wan also makes me sad. I lament that she died young, but the brightest person was haunted by hatred. I hope that she can prosper in the next life and everything will be safe. I hope that Xinghui Village, Xiansui Mountain, Yangchunmen, Zhonglusi, Xiangyue Mountain, Huachao Tower, Yiyuan Pavilion, Yusha, etc., The entire rivers and lakes, the entire people in the court, and the entire Qingshan will be safe. Being able to read this book is my greatest luck! Such a masterpiece should be seen by more people! ! I saw a lot of people talking about the relationship between Wen Ruyu and Fu Yue Jiangxun. I felt that it was not love and I had to settle for second best. Fu Yue liked Wen Ruyu in the early stage, just because of his youthful temperament. Wen Ruyu was his master in Xiansui Mountain. Whether it was Wen Ruyu's strong martial arts or outstanding appearance, it was really hard not to like him. In addition, Wen Ruyu is one of the few people Fu Yue trusts and can get close to in Xiansui Mountain. This kind of liking is a habit developed day and night. Rather than saying like it, I feel it is more arrogant. His master is the kind of domineering he comes to take care of? It's normal for Wen Ruyu to be moved, after all, the long-term pursuit The other party is an extremely good person, but he did not accept Fu Yue. This relationship had no results in the first place, so it was buried like this. During the period when Fu Yue liked Wen Ruyu, Jiang Xun had already fallen in love with Fu Yue, but Fu Yue didn't notice. During this period, it was Jiang Xun's secret love (it feels so heartbreaking to see here, Xun Bao, you are very good, there is no need to compare with others). Maybe there is an ambiguous atmosphere between the two here, which makes Fu Yue feel uncomfortable. It feels like stepping on two boats. In fact, Fu Yue's care for Jiang Xun is the friendship between his disciples and his own inner feelings. However, he did not find anything wrong with himself, which also makes me think that his liking for Wen Ruyu is more like a habit (which means that maybe Fu Yue's liking for Wen Ruyu is just due to the habit of taking care of his master. Time has long brought his passionate love for Wen Ruyu, personal opinion) Later, Fu Yue noticed Jiang Xun's alienation and went to mediate. This was the beginning of his concern. The five of them went on a mission together, which deepened Fu Yue's feelings for Jiang Xun. It was probably during this period that Fu Yue himself gradually realized that his heart was towards Jiang Xun. Compared to Fu Yue's feelings for Wen Ruyu, the arrogance of a young man who would challenge his master and defeat his sword, Fu Yue truly devoted his whole heart to Jiang Xun. Wanting to be with him, wanting to have skin-to-skin contact with him, wanting him to be safe, wanting him to be confident, this would feel more like liking, not to take care of junior brother, but caring because of liking. Jiang Xun did not reveal his love to Fu Yue, nor did Wen Ruyu reject Fu Yue once or twice. Fu Yue also did not give up. With his temperament, he wanted to get what he wanted, so how could he suddenly let go of Wen Ruyu, so this did not constitute love that could not be obtained. When he loved Jiang Xun, He has long disliked Wen Ruyu, and settling for second best is even more ridiculous. In Fu Yue's eyes, Brother Xun is the best, and liking him is the best. The moment he fell in love with Jiang Xun, Jiang Xun was definitely no worse than Wen Ruyu in his mind. From that moment on, Wen Ruyu was just his master. In short, my personal point of view is that Fu Yue's love for Wen Ruyu when he was young was more likely caused by Mu Qiang or being needed. He really liked her, but in the end, it was definitely not because of love that he let go. He just met someone better, met Jiang Xun, met someone who amazed his life, and met someone who filled his eyes. When they were on a mission together, Fu Yue realized that Jiang Xun must be the best and he admired him. Oops, I can't explain it either. Anyway, Brother Xun is not Fu Yue's spare tire or his second choice. He is the person Fu Yue is firmly committed to! Oh, Fu Yue and Jiang Xun are doing well!
It ended in a daze. This is the longest book I have read in a while. Compared with the protagonist's emotional line, Xiaowan's writing is better. She is my favorite "heroine" I like brother Xun, wish 99 Please update this extra chapter soon [Sending Hearts]
The personalities of the two protagonists are actually complementary. Jiang Xun is a more sensitive and suspicious child, so he can't help but look at the dazzling Fu Lin. Fu Lin is a person who admires strength, so he will always chase Wen Ruyu in the early stage. Maybe after Jiang Xun changes his mind and grows up in the middle and later stages, some sparks will fly between the two. There is a sentence in the book that I like very much: "Grow up well, eat well, and we will meet one day. It may be sunny or rainy, but what is certain is that you will be braver that day than you are today." I hope that we in life will also grow up well, eat well, and become braver people. "In this never-ending time of life, there will always be young people running towards the sunset with splendor, and there will always be newly cut spring shirts stained with catkins. There will always be one person who, on the street corner burned by dusk clouds, suddenly understands the hustle and bustle of the city that he had ignored when he was young. " Green hills rush! ! !
It's really super good-looking [crying] Go check it out. The young man is full of high spirits, and in his youthful years, he still has the company of a group of young people wearing bright clothes and angry horses. Although there are ups and downs along the way, he gradually carves out a world in this world. When the novel ends, I feel filled with emotion, but their story will not end [crying] I just hope that this journey will be smooth, and everything will be fine! ! [Crying] I feel that the writing is so delicate, with a layer of sad tones, delicate and soft. Anyway, I cried when I read the following content. I sincerely hope that our little Qingshan can get better and better.
After chasing it today, make a mark. This is the most harmonious ancient style among the novels about two men I have read so far. The five-person group wandered around the world, the young man was full of high spirits, Brother Jin was digging out his bones and his life was in danger, the knife seemed to be cutting out my heart, the rift between Fu and Jiang made me worry, and the experience of Master Xiaowan was infuriating but helpless. Although they are no longer those people in the end, they will always exist in the hearts of everyone who cares about them. I was so relieved that the fivesome could have a meal together again. Carrying a sword and wielding it to the end of the world is a wish that every young person has had in his heart. Although he can't help himself, his heart has already traveled thousands of miles into the sky. This is the first time I have written such a long book review, but it is not the first time I have cried for the characters in the book. When Brother Jin came back to pick up Dong Ling, tears burst out of my eyes. I think I felt very similar to Ling'er's mood at that moment. This book is not perfect, but it shows how unfair the world is, how difficult it is for women, how they can't help themselves, how young they are, how powerful they are, and how many plans they have. The author is the best chess player for them and writes how they should be. Finally, I wish the author and his articles will get better and better, and I also wish the author less injustice.
I really like the author's writing style. The growth-oriented protagonists always have flesh and blood, and they look like yyds. Watching them, they may be young and ignorant or rush into activities recklessly. In the end, they struggle with their friends in the rivers and lakes, and learn compassion and tolerance in love, hatred, and hatred. Everyone has different life choices, and different personalities collide and grow. This is the living rivers and lakes. I personally like this kind of rhythm very much, and it's not a bad idea to get into it. [Love] The author's writing is delicate and the characters are deeply rooted in people's hearts. Their story has come to an end, but I can't get out of it. Is the bad data because of Tomato? Everyone likes to read mindless cool articles, it's a pity~~~ The group portrait is really beautiful, everyone has their own shining moment. Nice! Nice! Nice! Super pretty! ! ! Looking forward to the author's next book, I will definitely follow it! ! ! It's not a loss if you enter the trap! They will all carry the heavier and heavier luggage on their backs and travel erratically on the road of life. While building up the wall of the heart, restrain the edge; while provoking the past, while coveting the distance. I stepped through thorns, got stuck in the mud, and became stained with the dirt called "secular". But I still hope that they can finally get their wish and get their hands on the moon in their hearts... [Love][love][love]
I like this book. His plot and characterization are very touching. Brother Xun is calm and calm on the surface, but gentle and delicate at heart. When Ling Mei first appeared, I was really impressed by this character. The sun was shining brightly. She and Xiao Jin really made me sad. Obviously, those feelings were immediately felt. I was able to say it, but I had to wait for three years, and there were siblings Jin and Nian. In fact, I also guessed from the beginning that Nian's marriage was a prison, but people can't always be black and white. They will always make decisions that feel particularly right when they are young and impulsive, and they will be filled with bitterness when they are recalled. Qiu Li is also a cute little girl. Her small body is filled with a calmness that should not belong to her age. Jiang Wan and Shen Qiu are also very upset. There are also many characters, including the Nangong siblings, Zhao Yuzhou, Yingshan, and the very good people in the Xiansu Pavilion. There are also many characters that he has taken on during the mission. The author is really attentive. But the emotional shaping aspect kind of made me laugh. He loves her, she loves him, haha, so dizzy. It can be considered a good book that I read in Yangshizi. The plot is compact and logical. The relationship between the protagonists is like a seasoning. Especially in Chapter 202, everyone has grown up and gone their separate ways, and they will never be able to return to the green years of the past. It is really touching. When I read the next few chapters, I lamented that Jiang Xun had grown up, and at the same time, I couldn't help but recall him in the past, and me in the past. We are always saying goodbye to people, just like Jiang Wan and Jiang Xun. That's enough, I really feel sorry for them both. I also wish the author's book will be seen by more people soon🌹
To be honest, it is refreshing. The content of each paragraph is very delicate. It can be said that the content of each paragraph reflects a certain reality. The character creation is also very good. The author writes Xiao Jiang vividly at the beginning. The characters are promoted according to a certain plot and time, and the character of Xiao Jiangzi is shaped step by step. , Just but not oppressed by reality, considerate and caring for the people at the bottom. In addition, the interaction with friends also deepens the character, allowing us to see a human fireworks Xiao Jiangzi (it feels like raising a son😁😁😁😁). When I first looked at the other character Fu Lin, I thought he was a pure and rebellious character with inherent talents. When you slowly watch later, you will be conquered by his charisma. He is unruly, but he also has compassion. He will not let others bully him and will leave some space for others. And he always wants to save face in front of our little Jiangzi, how awesome is that? [Admiration][Admiration] Finally, the author, come on, come on! ! ! Please don't skimp on the writing, let the novel shine. Those who read the group portrait are not afraid of being abused, but they are afraid that it is not deeply rooted in people's hearts. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
This time I finally found the chaff of the tomato. Although the chapter is a bit long, the relationship between the two is of a steady flow and the rhythm is very slow. I feel that this kind of relationship is more in line with the emotional changes in young people's hearts. Some friends may care about the early stages of Fu Lin and his master. Personally, I feel that Fu Lin's feelings for Wen Ruyu belong to Mu Qiang in his youth, and may not be true. I really like it. The relationship between Fu Lin and the character has been growing. He is gradually distinguishing the difference between Jiang Xun and Wen Ruyu. This is the same as when we were students, we should also have such a good impression of those who are good at studying. So I don't think it is necessary to be jealous. There are many emotional lines in this book, whether you want to read gb, bl, gl, or strong women, everything is available. The images of the characters are more in-depth, with distinct personal characteristics, but there is no flesh, but there is nothing to pursue but pure love, and the friendship between friends is long-lasting. For Jiang Xun, I think this character is a character who has grown up. Although he was a beggar at the beginning, he realized family affection after being taken away by Jiang Wan. I think Fu Lin is an important role in promoting Jiang Xun. The two Some people may find the relationship between people inexplicable, but my personal understanding is that knowing each other for a long time does not mean that I like you, and saving each other many times does not mean that I like you. The relationship between the two is not inexplicable. The author has buried many details. Fu Lin and Jiang Xun are really tied to death [admiration]. I have read more than a hundred chapters now. Can anyone tell me who is Gong [what] Author, please wait for me, I am in high school now and I am pressed for time. I just finished reading it when I came back from vacation this week. I am already asking my good brothers to read it. There will definitely be many people who will read it. The low score is not a big problem now. We need time to settle. I also want to wait for this book to be released and collect it. Wait for me. Also, I want to read the extra [Adoration]
It's really beautiful. The closer you get to the back, the better it looks. The young man's growth is vividly expressed. Everyone has an independent personality. In Ji Langran's story, they are not victims waiting to be rescued. He is also resisting and planning for his own rebellion. It is undoubtedly worth revisiting again and again. The most important character in this story is Jiang Wan. At first I thought she was plotting against Jiang Xun. She was plotting but from a good angle. She was a gentle person and her death may be a pity, but this is the best ending. It can be said that we accompany the protagonist Jiang Xun on his journey, and we see the story through him, and we also see the growth of them (Jin, Xun, Li, Yue, and Dong). It is undoubtedly complicated to say, and the complicated emotions cannot be explained. Don't care whether Fu Yue likes Wen Ruyu, because they are both very good and worthy of being loved. This story may not be perfect. Jiang Wan, Zhan Hui and others did not survive, and it is not known whether the antidote was developed in the end. But it's also good, nothing is perfect, because imperfection and perfection cannot be forgotten. I don't know how to write about my feelings, but I think Xiao Qingshan needs my book review [Sending Hearts]
It's so good to read, I've only read a few chapters, and the feeling of this group portrait is so good! Although everyone has different personalities, they are having fun together. I really like Jiang Wan, I feel like a heroine [Adoration] PS: Who are the two male protagonists? Didn't see it [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]
A book that should be read twice is not "worthy" but "should". The story line is very smooth, and the details are well handled. The five-person group has a fateful friendship, and they have a road of growth together. There are many sub-CPs but they are reasonable. But there are a lot of foreshadowings and they are revealed very slowly, and the protagonist's emotional line is not to my liking (there must be some who like this). I learned from the author that the original protagonist was Qiu Wan. I feel that if the author had not changed his mind, this book would have been more popular, because it is very heroic, very sad and angry, more ups and downs, and more able to affect people's emotions. But this also shows that the author's writing style is very good, and each of the supporting characters is impressive. It is more like we have traveled through the world through Jiang Xun's eyes. Finally, this may be difficult to implement, but I still want to say that there are many elements in this article, so please sort them out on your own.
The teacher's writing is really good. I haven't read such a long article on Tomato for a long time. The long flow of water, the group portraits above the rivers and lakes, this is the real rivers and lakes, with parting and growth, the original intention and dream of the young man, and the phenomenon of each character is vividly shaped, which is the real destiny! Once again, the teacher's writing is really good!
It's so beautiful, so beautiful [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] The writing style is exquisite and the literary talent is amazing. Every little character has their own wonderful life. Little Xun'er has grown up without knowing it [crying] [crying] Just like this book, I finished it before I knew it. Despite the low rating, it's actually really good. I don't know why. Because, it's too overwhelming, but I thank the author for persevering, so that I can see and feel their extraordinary life (the reason why I saw it is because I don't follow novels constantly, and I always feel that novels without endings are always imperfect [laughs awkwardly]) I wish Qingshan readers a smooth journey, smooth progress, and everything goes well!
The author's writing style is really good and has a strong sense of immersion. The love line hasn't reached that of the protagonist yet, but the couple of CPs that have appeared so far don't feel that difficult. I don't know if it's because the author is not good at writing love lines or for some reason. I'm really at my wits' end. I've read almost half of the 1 million-word novel. Only then did I find out that I liked someone else in the early stage of the novel. My emotional mysophobia was really serious when I was reading the novel. If the two protagonists liked each other before they met, it would be okay. But when the two protagonists met, he liked someone else, and then the two protagonists fell in love. I really couldn't accept it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] It really broke down. It gave me the feeling that my feelings were in vain.
The book is very good. I have read more than 70 chapters so far. I really like the author's writing style. The three views are also very upright, but it is difficult to comment on the cp. At first, Shen Yixing's feelings for Jiang Wan were very abrupt, but later they came around. The second one is Qin Zaijin and Dong Ling. I didn't think there was any sign that Qin liked Dong in the first place, but then he suddenly fell in love after they met again? In order to balance the protagonist group, it's not like this, right? The introduction also says that feelings are gradual, but where is the gradual progression? There are also Fu and Jiang. Fu cares a little too much about Jiang. This is a bit more than a senior brother. Fu is not so enthusiastic in the introduction. If Fu only cares about Jiang because of Wen Ruyu, it is a bit too much. It can also be understood as foreshadowing the emotions of the two people behind. After all, this pairing is better than Qin and Dong. But the author does a good job in shaping the characters, at least in the roles of Qin Zaijin and Jiang Wan. Apart from the protagonist, I like Qin Zaijin better so far. The above are all points that "myself" didn't understand after reading Chapter 70, and it's just "my own" opinion. The writing style of this book deserves 5 stars, but the cp is really... Of course, after all, I only read 1/4 of the book, maybe the descriptions of the characters and cp are in the remaining 3/4.
This is a very beautiful article that made me wet the pillow with tears. I found this article last night, spent the whole day reading it, and have finished it now. Generally speaking, it's hard for me to read long e-books. Maybe I've read too many short, enjoyable articles, and I'm not willing to waste my time reading them (long articles with too many details may make me tired of reading them, but "Green Mountains Covered with Snow" doesn't). There was a time in the middle when I couldn't bear to read them. After reading other people's comments and knowing the ending of Xiao Wan, I really hoped that it was fake. Later, I read the novel honestly. I wanted to cry when I saw the plot related to Xiao Wan, until Xiao Wan fell from the Star-Zhaing Pavilion (I didn't cry so much at that time), but but! When I saw the small bowl inside the soul bead singing a song, I couldn't help it! I really like that ballad and the author's writing style. (Compared to the emotional interaction between Brother Xun and Brother Lin, I prefer the master-disciple interaction between Xiao Xun and Xiao Wan. Hehe. I cried later and shared this book with my friends (I can't be the only one crying!)
Madam's writing style is really good. I feel very comfortable while reading it. Everyone has their own story. Madam has created the characters well and can clearly see each person's image. It's beautiful! Love watching! Madam, please update soon👀 [Send heartfelt message]
It's very interesting to watch, and the missions are also very interesting. It points out many problems that have existed forever, such as rkgm, but there is a problem with the emotional line of the protagonist. There are too many emotional scenes between Master Gong and Gong. I can accept the impurity of feelings. , But in this way, more emphasis should be placed on the protagonist's relationship, emotional experience and changes. Anyway, I have read more than 140 chapters. Now every time I see the way Fu and Jiang Xun get along, I want to punch his head off (although I can't beat him, but it doesn't stop me) I think) Flirting or killing, right? A lot of the jealousy is inexplicable, but it is deliberate. The main reason is that the protagonist's emotional line is too little described. In addition, the emotional direction of the person named Fu is inexplicable and he has a preconceived condition of "liking the master", so it doesn't seem very reasonable. , But Brother Xun's emotional line is quite reasonable. At the beginning, his senses were not good, but then he went to great lengths to take care of him, and things improved. Well, the problem is not big, and from the perspective of improvement, I think Brother Xun may be grateful to He Muqiang. Well, at least Brother Xun will suffer less. I really rarely write book reviews. Yes, I don't write long book reviews, I just write book reviews. I usually just finish reading the book. This time, I mainly write about the emotional line of the protagonist. The plot is still super interesting, awesome, okay. It's three o'clock in the morning, and I endure the pain in my tenosynovitis hand while typing to write a book review. I didn't want to write it, but I can't sleep without writing. . Good night and sweet dreams
The plot is relatively novel and the characters of the two protagonists are also relatively likable. The group portraits are eternal gods! I hope the author can update it faster. It's not enough! I hope that when the snow covers Xiansui Mountain again, everyone in Sange can still gather together to eat roasted sweet potatoes, drink Yangchun wine, and talk about the affairs of the world. I hope that when autumn comes and the first ginkgo leaf falls, we can get what we want, with less regrets and more satisfaction. I hope that at every disciple conference, they can sit in the guest seats as promised and watch Xun'er being in high spirits on the competition stage.
The group portrait is the greatest existence in the world. We stand at the beginning of the story and look at the ending of Xiao Wan'er and the others' inevitable death. Even if everything is settled, we will still feel empty in our hearts. Don't seek success and fame, but seek people like you did back then [crying]
Every character in this book has his or her own characteristics, but Jiang Wan is Jiang Wan, and I can't help but cry because of what happened to Jiang Wan. This book made me laugh and cry. No one would hate Jiang Wan and Jiang Xun. In fact, from everyone's perspective, we can understand their choices. But I will still feel heartache and joy because of them, and I still hope that all of them can get what they want. This book is really good, highly recommended. Their long-lasting love is also very good. Sometimes I feel that their fate should not be like this, but at the same time I feel that this is the best arrangement for them. When I think of Jiang Wan, I want to cry. I feel so sorry for Jiang Wan. I also feel sorry for Brother Jin. Why are you so stupid? Does it hurt when you dig up the spiritual bones? That episode really made me cry. I don't understand why it happened like this. My eyes were really swollen from crying because of that episode. But this book is very good-looking. I also like Sange very much. The atmosphere of Sange is really great. Brother Xun is really well taken care of by Jiang Wan, and the friendship between Fu Yue and the others is also very good. I will be moved by their friendship. There is also Shen Yixing. I really thought he and Jiang Wan didn't know each other in the early stage. When I learned about their relationship later, I was quite shocked. When I saw Fu Yue and Jiang Xun's misunderstanding, I really didn't want them to be estranged because of it. This book is really wonderful. The plot of the mission is also very good, and the character creation is also very good. The author's writing style is very good.
I really like this book, the plot in it is really exciting! When watching the plot, watching the protagonist do tasks outside will make me feel insecure, but once I return to Sange, I really feel like home. It is very warm and warm, which can make people let down their guard. Just watching them bickering while eating makes me giggle happily. Moreover, I really cried and laughed while watching the plot, and as I watched it, I unconsciously thought about problems with the characters (unfortunately, my brain is not smooth [laughing]), and each character handles the emotional scenes differently, some do not hide their likes at all, and some carefully hide their thoughts. I really like the characters in it, each with their own characteristics, and the children in it are also very cute and very, very well-behaved! Looking forward to the next plot, author, I am very optimistic about you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The author writes it very well. The relationship between the protagonists becomes deeper as they travel all the way. The best friends are the family members you choose with your own hands. Sister Wanwan gave Xun'er the opportunity to choose his family with his own hands, and also gave him a bright future. She is Xun'er's most cherished relative! The plot is very good and compact, and the transitions are smooth and smooth. The writing style is crisp and clear, and the passionate rivers and lakes are full of passion. However, there is too little description of Fu Lin's emotional transformation, and the emotional transition will be a bit blunt. In fact, I don't quite understand why Wen Ruyu doesn't accept Fu Lin's affection. Is it because of the relationship between master and apprentice? However, the whole text does not feel like criticizing the affection between master and apprentice. Yes, is it because of the special relationship between Yusha Pavilion? In short, there is too little description of the relationship between the two. In fact, I am not a master-disciple relationship, but their relationship is a bit twisted. But this is the first book of Dada. It is really well written. It is better if the emotional interweaving is smoother and clearer. I believe that the emotional connection in the next book or the next one will be more exciting! [Laugh]
Except for Young Master Fu Yue's early emotional wobble, everything else is good. The writing is good, the concept is good, the plot is good, and everyone in the group portrait is also very good. Come on, author, I hope to see more good works. Ah, I forgot to mention it, so I wish you all a smooth journey, smooth success, and everything goes well
The rhythm of the plot is well grasped, each character is portrayed with subtlety, and the relationship is smooth and smooth. He is cautious but blatant, and carefully protects his own likes, but everyone around him can feel that both parties care. Group portrait yyds!!!
It's super, super, super good-looking. I like Ah Wan, Brother Xun, and Da Linzi. Everyone in it is very vivid. The story looks like I am in it, especially Xiao Wan'er. They are all stories of young people. Everyone is in high spirits. Although they have regrets, they are still considered complete. Brother Xun has his own lover and friends who can be close to each other, so he must do well. "I have a dream town, where people come and go, and it is bustling." You will be fine too, Xiao Wan'er, the most perfect heroine in my mind. Finally, I wish you all a smooth journey and success!
The writing is exquisite, and you can taste the atmosphere of Jianghu from some text details. The emotional line is long and thin. I don't really care about Shuangjie. After all, I just like it but haven't kissed or even been together. I don't care. The plot is also very compact. The more you watch it, the more you want to watch it. You can't help but wonder what will happen next. Some of the foreshadowings will also make people daydream and want to know the truth urgently. I love everyone in the story! Long live the group portrait! ! I will always love group portraits! ! ! ! Finally, I wish all my fellow Taoists a smooth journey, smooth progress, and everything goes well!
I was really surprised and happy that Jiang Xun grew up as a beggar and became a master of the pavilion. I also got a glimpse of his high-spirited youth in the book, and also saw the good and evil sides of the world in the intense plot. I felt sorry for Song Qi and Sang Ruo who were "eaten" by the Tang Dynasty, and for The loving friendship between them moved me. I was also sad that Qin Nianshu and Xiao Min's passionate love in their youth rotted in time. At the same time, I also felt complicated and speechless when I saw the new order born in the rotten and smelly interior of Lingxia Village. I was also moved by the gentle but bitter Jiang Wan. In fact, when I first saw Fu Lin's wavering emotions, I felt angry and unfair for Jiang Xun. I thought that Jiang Xun, who was suffering, should have a love that was exclusive to him, not a "new love" or an alternative. But then I figured it out, like when I met Wen Ruyu when I was young. Of course, when he was a teacher, he would fall in love with such an outstanding person because of his first love, but as time passed, he gradually became indifferent and let go, and it was reasonable to fall in love with Jiang Xun, who was resolute and reserved. From an emotional point of view, Fu Lin was not perfect. As the author said, no one is perfect, and perfection is a bit boring. Even if the emotional line is thrown away, I like it very much whether it is the plot, the shaping of the world view or the shaping of the characters. I hope the author and this book will be seen by more people.
Nice! ! ! The sense of group portrait is so strong! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking group portrait article, and the plot is very coherent and compact, which is really good. Strong recommendation, strong recommendation! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]