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Okay, come on, author [laughing evilly] I hope to be single or lily [laughing]

It's just a name, it doesn't really have the ability of a star singer... Disappointed

Later, I felt that there was no need to hold back on the navy. When I was strong enough to kill generals, I would kill those who were alone! Anyway, being an enemy is something that cannot be changed! Kill one at a time, as long as you dare to go on a mission alone, or do a sneak attack! It's okay to fight with your companions! Kill one and lose one! After killing three dogs, Kaido's mother will definitely launch a siege on the navy!

I have finished the TV version and the drama version (updated to 1096 at this stage), I have also read a lot of derivative articles, and after reading a lot of comments, I still want to write this text. 🌻As for the rhythm of the article, in fact, in terms of rhythm, we must first be able to distinguish the priorities. In the TV version and the comic version, One Piece has always been a group portrait story, so there will be a large number of companion shots to describe the characters through a large number of details, memories and other angles. Because it is a group portrait, the same time period will be divided into multiple clips to fully display everyone's performance, so it is relatively lengthy. However, when there is only one central protagonist in an entertaining novel like this, there is no need to describe it in large details. Basically, identify the main subject and a clear story development line. Skip the details that should be skipped. This is a better rhythm, otherwise the content will appear to be very procrastinating. (One more thing, this book originally didn't write anything about ships, so it has nothing to do with Luffy's and his friends' experiences. The main focus is on the heroine. The development of the story is affected by the experience of the main perspective. Don't compare it with the protagonist's experience and development line in the original work.) 🌻I won't mention the inappropriate comments. Whether it's the original work, the author Da Da, or another author, it's not easy for every author to write. I hope everyone will be more rational and conscience when reading. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. If you think it doesn't look good, you don't have to read it. Don't dislike this or that after reading it. Respect everyone who is giving. 🌻There are still many people (including me) saying that the update is discontinued. Although I am also sad that this is not a complete article, but on the premise that I have not read the comics, it is understandable that the update of the article has been suspended at this point. However, I still hope that the author can continue to update. It is really uncomfortable to have an unfinished article. So author, if you still remember that you have this account, remember to fill in the hole in time [Thinking]

Come on! Keep at it!

Yes, well written.

Want to know what to do in Wano? Will the protagonist reform it himself? And then Momonosukesha? Otherwise, it would be difficult to handle the liberation of Wano country two years later based on the relationship between the protagonist and the Straw Hats.

Updated four days ago? Is this a discontinuation of updates or is the author writing slowly?

Not bad, not bad, very good

Love to watch I get so angry every time I get a review

Come on, author. Don't finish it badly.

I really like this book, but the transition is too fast and it feels like it's almost over. I hope it reaches a million words.

It's okay, the pace is quite fast, the writing is good, it's worth reading

Combat strength is a bit vague

Good! Except the author's update is a bit slow, everything else is okay, I like it very much! It is recommended to write 48 hours a day [Thinking] Isn't the author ready to continue writing? Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Not bad, but there are a few teammates

Not bad, keep up the good work

OK OK Resurrected again

It's a good fanfic

The characters are very good and vivid.

Dear author, is it true that you don't want to update it at all? The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it's unfinished, but this golden finger is quite interesting.

Are you waiting for the ending of One Piece? I remember that Luffy's combat power is not the beating of his heart, but his smile. The happier he laughs, the higher his combat power [eating melon] is, but it consumes his lifespan a bit.

She's pretty. Although she's not the singer I thought she was, she's still very pretty.