All Heavens: as a Female Sword Fairy, I Just Want to Ascend

[Smile] Someone please leave a comment. I've been playing alone. I stayed up late and revised some of the contents and paragraphs of the first few chapters... Alas, the data was not good, and it was too slow to heat up. I was afraid of dying suddenly, so I had to tearfully pick out a dozen hidden lines... Also corrected some typos🥺🥺

The beginning felt really uninteresting [that is, less than five or six chapters], and later on, I almost gave up the book because of the soul fusion part where I was almost discovered. [Actually, the description was on point, no problem, and not toxic, but it was very worrying. I was afraid that the protagonist would be discovered, which was not a good feeling]. After that, the book added some reasonable thoughts and speculations, and everything started to look better... ——To be precise, this paragraph is written very realistically and has a strong sense of immersion, which makes my uneasiness overflow directly. ——I admit that my description of this paragraph contains strong personal subjective thoughts. Then the book started to become interesting, and the corners of my mouth kept rising... The world view is opened up, and the characters are basically determined. The most important thing is to make it comfortable and comfortable to read... Orange! Who could resist a book like this? [Eat melon] I admit that I'm a bit of a bitch, but you can't deny that this kind of book with an orange flavor is really great, isn't it?

It's a good book. The author has rigorous settings and lots of foreshadowing, but you need to read it carefully. You may not understand it if you skip a paragraph. It will be better after reading the first few chapters, but it is not suitable for people like me who want to relax. Come on.

Um... Can I say that I can't understand the first few chapters? (／_＼)

It's very interesting. The first few chapters may be confusing, but don't worry about it. As long as you understand the key points and clarify some of the character relationships, it's basically OK. In addition, the author, don't be discouraged. This book is just the beginning, and its popularity will definitely not be too high [top post] [please update]

The story background design of this book is quite good, but the identity and background of the protagonist made me a little confused. Everything else is very good. Come on, don't be a eunuch.

Uh⊙∀⊙! Who can tell me what to do with the protagonist's wife before time travel? The protagonist wouldn't have lost his virginity before finding his wife in his previous life, right? ! ! I think this will become a big poisonous point, after all, I am pregnant with the child, just after giving birth. . . (Another point is that pregnant women may not be in a good mood during pregnancy, which will also affect the child.) It doesn't make sense. I think this needs to be dealt with urgently. Maybe it would be better to dream and use dreams to enter the world and let the two of them meet. Anyway, I think if it were me, I wouldn't want to see a husband who would disappoint his wife💔. This is a kind of irresponsible behavior. You must know that they are two people who are destined for life at first glance! (It is also possible that they are twins) I haven't finished reading the article yet. I mainly read the title of the table of contents. If there are any questions, please don't worry. Thank you for your understanding! I just couldn't help it, and I finally came across a better article, but the one above was like a knot in my heart, making me always feel uncomfortable. Although there is a time difference, for a pregnant woman, it is equivalent to another sense of living like a year!

Is the protagonist single, Lily, or married?

Very good, but the world background is a bit complicated, and my brain capacity can't keep up.

The author is amazing. I admire [like] [like] [like] those historical realm divisions are so detailed.

To be honest, the first few chapters are really a bit discouraging [face covering], but the rest is still very good, the author will give you a lot of support [please give me more updates]

Great author, come on!

The plot is twists and turns, with strong twists and turns, and unexpected things happen in the ordinary. The narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvaceous beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

Sorry, maybe my IQ is not enough and I am confused.

It feels pretty good, but the character introduction feels better at the beginning. It doesn't matter if you don't understand the first few chapters. It just introduces how the male protagonist becomes the female protagonist and some background. I hope it won't be unfinished.

The author worked hard and was so persistent.

The story and style are good, but it is best to develop the background as the story progresses. It is not appropriate to put the complicated background at the beginning. The beginning of a story-like article must be close to the whole book and attract readers. This is especially true for online articles. Literary literacy is not enough, and systematic literary narrative skills are also needed.

Author, I have a question... That is, this book should not be about the harem...

Have you revised the previous chapters? I can't even look at the stickers. After reading Chapter 40, will the protagonist grow taller? It's too long and it doesn't fit the title of the book. I just wanted to read it [laughs evilly]

Come on, author. I hope the heroine can be upgraded faster

A little boring, but her harem lily makes up for it But it's really boring

After listening to it intermittently, the writing skills have improved significantly, and the plot is getting better and better. Come on.

The writing style needs to be improved, the plot needs to be improved, and there is a lot of room for improvement. Testimonials from a bookworm.

Is it multiple heroines? The author, although I read the introduction and it says there are two heroines, but I still want to ask (is it multiple heroines), if there are two heroines, is the heroine Bai Ling'er?

Just don't abandon the book, give it a thumbs up to the author.

Fulfilled some of my strange fantasies [crying]

Personally I think it looks pretty ≥ ≤

Can he go back? [Crying] Earth

Very nice. Do you have a group?

Come on, author, it's not a bad idea to watch it in the middle of the night. I'm so energetic now.