Reborn: The National CP Is Real

Awesome [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] 2023.05.03.23:57 This book is well written, but there are too few emotional scenes.

Personally, I felt that the first part of the movie was very exciting, but why is it all about one side in the back? The emotional line is not so obvious. I was a little tired at the end of the movie. Don't blame me, it's still good. I just can't do more scenes with two people in the back 🤭

It's okay. The general never appeared later. I didn't like the death-defying variety show at the end. The time travel and system didn't seem to have any effect. It doesn't seem to have any impact. PS: The best part is the part on the general's Weibo, it's so cute.

The emotional line between Yan Shao and Lu Ke is a bit hazy. Then when I started my career in the later period, I felt that the details were not captured well. There's just something about it that's just like going through the motions. It is suggested that the author can describe more details and expand and write about it. Make the article richer and more detailed, so that the sense of logic and the feeling of reading will be improved, but as the author's first book, I think it is still good. So please give it a try, the author, and look forward to the new work.

It's good-looking, but Yan Shao doesn't appear much later, and they propose to each other in a daze. It would be better to have more details and transitions about being together, but this is the best one in the new book I started this holiday. It's good-looking, so keep up the good work! Looking forward to more exciting novels ^ω^ Anyway, just four words: good-looking, like it

Haha, Admiral Yan appears very rarely in this book. Most of it, especially the second half, is actually about Lu Lu's career. The main body is the career line, which comprehensively shows the life of an artist. The whole network blackmail in the first part is very realistic. Physical and psychological attacks such as online violence exist in reality and in the book. I guess the reason for Yibo's low rating: there are not many emotional lines in the main body, and most readers prefer to read the emotional lines. But because the main body of this book is the career line, it stood out to me. Then the ending of this book is quite unexpected. If possible, I hope there will be a sequel.

Okay, okay, but Admiral Yan's role in the back part is a bit small

Overall, the novel is well written, with a bland plot but not lacking in beauty. The emotional line is not prominent, highlighting the protagonist's personal beauty. Suggestion: You can write more emotional lines to enrich the emotional color of the work and enrich the beauty of the protagonist's life.

Very sweet, just a cookie! Although it is a bit brainless, hahahaha, for example, the admiral was obviously in a coma, and Lu Ke was sleeping next to the admiral the whole time, but the admiral found out about Lu Ke's red eyes from the adjutant the next day, which is very good in a serious sense.

It looks good (○`ε´○) Can the author make a side story?