Quickly Travel Without Becoming a Short-Lived White Moonlight

Mainly focus on career? I felt that the protagonist's transition point in the previous story was a bit abrupt. Um, is there a relationship between her and that Buddha? The first meeting and the second meeting really felt like the meeting of the hero and heroine in a romance novel. Overall the writing is good, but as for the new story, I think the plot structure needs to be improved. For example, the heroine's first senior sister completed the mission and lived for 30 years. In the previous article, it only took about a year to survive the death disaster and not survive. Is this world not worth the heroine's complete life? This theme of White Moonlight is, how should I put it, difficult to deal with. I hope that all the worlds will not kill the male and female protagonists with one stroke, so that the small world will be richer. Of course, the idea is still based on the author's idea. I am just a passerby. I read the novel and the writing is good, but I just felt that the first world was a bit ordinary and bland, so I couldn't help but comment on it.

Oh my gosh, there are so many mats in front, but if they are gone... It's over?!! The previous heroine relied on her acting skills to make others think that she was a poor girl who was rescued by Fozi and secretly had a crush on someone with a big background like Fozi. In fact, the heroine was very clear-minded and gradually became more wary of Fozi. People like Fozi must have their own purposes in doing whatever they do. When the heroine was still weak, she could only pretend not to know and silently grow up first. And there is Lal Naga. What she revealed seems to have some hidden secrets. For example, the Buddha does have some conspiracy. I once read a novel in which there is also a very powerful and compassionate monk. His strength has reached a very high bottleneck period and can no longer make progress, so he designed a disaster, and then appeared like a savior. In the whole process, he even deceived the way of heaven, which made it appear how great and merciful he is. But in fact, this was just a repeat of his old tricks. Many years ago, he discovered by chance that as long as he could deceive the way of heaven when creating disasters, he could gain merit by saving people. This was recognized by the way of heaven, and he also used this to become a saint and enter the eyes of the world. Also, the heroine happened to encounter a world where Larnaga had done something wrong twice. This was the Buddhist kingdom of Buddha, but there were loopholes!!! Also, the heroine ruined Larnaga's good deeds twice, and it was obvious that there was a rift between them. It feels like the big world has just revealed the tip of the iceberg, but it's gone, and the heroine ended up in the novice village!!! I still give it 5 stars. It's not easy for the author to write articles. Come on, come on, come on. It's also good-looking. The above is my complaint. Is it possible for the author to continue writing? O(≧口≦)O

I hope there won't be cp in the small world, come on

I like the style of this book very much. The heroine has no cp. I also like the character of the heroine. She is independent and has her own thoughts. She knows how to self-reflect and wake up. She has her own opinions and understandings on everything. I like the first world very much, but in the later period, the heroine may have experienced more worlds. The character creation is not as good as the early stage. I like it. The ending is too sudden and many things are not finished.

It's so beautiful. Please give me more updates. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I like such independent and self-reliant women. Your article is very popular with me.

I think it's good that the ending has an open ending. [Thinking] The small world in the future may be full of things. I don't want our eyes to continue to shed tears [I'm about to cry] I want to bear it myself [I'm about to cry] All in all, I think this ending is not a bad ending [Sending my heart]

This book has a good idea, but why are there some holes that are not filled in, and it is obvious that this book has no ending. Is there a second one?

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that I don't know what will happen between Manman and Fozi Mojie in the end. I feel like there is some kind of conspiracy. Anyway, the ending is uncertain. You can imagine it by yourself.

I haven't finished it yet, but the content is quite interesting.

Very pretty, not bad

Very good, great, super nice [laughing]

It's a pity that I haven't finished it yet

It's not a bad novel.

I was just looking at it out of boredom, but I didn't expect it to be pretty good.

A world full of every experience, every growth, what kind of story will Hui and Mo be when they are truly strong?

It's very beautiful, but I'm uneducated, so I can only describe it as beautiful.

It's very beautiful, why are there so few people watching it? [Laughing and crying]

Let me take a look at them all. It's very beautiful and the writing is very good.

It's quite exciting. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. The author's imagination is quite big [laughing][laughing]