"Susanoh + Psychic + Taijutsu"
In the ninja world, awaken the body of nature at the beginning!
Why are you struggling?
Just because... A dream! !
Uchiha Madara: The ninja world is too small, only enough for me to do it alone!
Dou Chenguang: It's really too small. Let's try it in another place! ! ! ! !
Reader comments
Dear brothers! Little sister!
Please correct me if I write poorly and I will work harder!
First!
I sincerely thank the following brothers and sisters!
Including there are many friends who I don't know but are reading this book silently!
………
Kettle leaking electricity
Team Chen who loves coconut curry crab
≥QBS
Author stvrb3
User 24889189
Another world dragon evil
Yingbao feeds you shit
Xiaoyu Ling's poem
ÖÍÍÉÉÌÉ
Yuan Bao
Luoshan Ji
Qu Tian, who loves to eat colorful pepper and pork belly
Keeper
User 34432700
Taiyuan Wuji Daojun
Blood Yu ①
Dongshui Riyang vs Yuer
Slime Oh
Killing Golem
Attacked in Jiangzhu
Brother Lu who loves eating colorful vegetables and yams
lazy total site
Looking for Qiqi's walnuts
Xuan
Shengtianmen----Weasel
Two boys in a sandbox
Mo Xiu, who loves egg yolk rice cereal
fallen light
Penguin (Have you redeemed Q coins?)
Guardian of Dawn-Kai
Has this wind ever met you?
Zaizai who loves steamed carrots
Has your name been taken over by your family?
Weird royal island
Eat shit and don't forget the shit of the person who shitted you
soft fruit
Lone Girl.._
Forgetting each other
Douluo Baichen Xiyuan
Luo Wen, who loves fucoidan
symbolic piety
User 35452925
Why can't I change my nickname?
Fermented cherries u
Uchiha
Mulberry
A little Ayu wy
Xu Tingxi
Prayer
Spring cat ≥ w ≤
Take a sip. _
Bright moon song
Did you miss me?
Don't like to eat Kun meat
Washed clear sky
Osiris of the Spirit River
calf day
Red Dust·Immortal Lord
………
Since I started writing this novel, I have had more than a hundred friends accompany me, and there are about 10 reminders every day.
At that time, I always wanted to finish writing this novel!
The original intention of writing novels at that time was really to use love to generate electricity, because after reading a lot of novels, I had some ideas, and then I wanted to share the stories I thought about with everyone with my pen!
I think this situation should happen to many people.
Until the 100,000-word debut, I suddenly felt nervous, always thinking about whether it would become popular? Will the results be good? Is anyone watching? How did you write it? Wait for various problems to arise!
Then I went to Baidu to see if the first 100 people could hold on!
The result is obvious, everyone is talking about it! Give up! Wait for another one!
At that time, my head was pounding and I felt very depressed!
I thought that I might not be suitable for this industry.
Until the third day of the first show, those friends who were watching silently, and the above friends whose names I know, continued to speak, send gifts, and comment!
Let me know that there are so many friends who have been supporting me by my side, but I have ignored them!
(Sorry! Everyone!)
Your corrections make me better, your suggestions make me happy, and your presence suddenly reminds me of... My original intention of writing a novel!
At that time, I didn't think about how good my results would be. I just wanted to share the story with everyone.
I don't know when my original intention started to change!
I don't deny the idea of making money by writing novels.
But!
I will never forget my original intention of writing a novel!
Thank you everyone for letting me find myself again!
Thanks!
I will continue to persevere and finish writing this novel with all my heart.
Thanks again for supporting me and all the new friends coming later!
I wish everyone: all your wishes will come true! Dreams come true!
………………………
What does this book say? He is as good as he is. The fast pace of the plot is in line with the trend of fast food in today's version. The protagonist has personality, but he is also inferior in that the protagonist has personality and personality. Although it can indeed attract a group of readers, it also means that a large part of the readers will be abandoned. Many people marry the protagonist to a cynical and broad personality. This can enhance the sense of substitution. I hope the author can do this I will correct it in the next book. He also has a shortcoming, that is, the plot is not so ups and downs. People like me who listen to novels and play games at the same time basically don't remember anything. For current affairs, just read the novels and don't do anything while on the job. And this advantage is that there are few people and he can write well. This kind of character quality is very good, but he will not be easy in the future. Even if the update is discontinued, he will start again in the future.
Very good, to my liking, come on!
The plot is exciting, but it's easy for people to overlook the hidden thread (but as long as you read the previous chapters, you can basically find the cause and effect)
The character arrangement is okay, the changes that need to be changed, the damned deaths... Although some arrangements are a bit biased, they are acceptable (Gaara was beaten to death by the protagonist?!)
This book needs to be more serious so that it does not appear to be inconsistent. The quality is between average and above (unfortunately, it is a Long Aotian template and lacks emotional drama. Without emotional drama, you can only watch the whole process from God's perspective, without a sense of empathy)
This is a treasure story discovered by accident. The plot is not procrastinating and the pace is fast, but there are too few. I look forward to the author's subsequent plots!
Come on, author, you'd better start a harem. How can you not feel happy in a different world?
The writing is good, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง
I really like the style of this book. I wonder if the author can control the emotional line well. If he can't control it well, it would be better not to write the emotional line.
Can the author add a female protagonist, just Benizakura and Kaguya, please?
Ouch! Not bad.
Can you suggest a new cultivation system, such as star power and light [laughing evilly]
The plot was a bit fast at the beginning, but overall it was pretty good.
It's beautiful(•́⌄•́๑)૭Come on!
Why did the rating get so low?
Did I remember it wrong?
I remember the previous ratings were pretty good.
It's not bad. Chapter 90 or so begins with the protagonist's original plot. Although it's different, the process is the same! If you are impatient, you can skip to chapter 145 [laughs]
A very good novel
To be honest, as for the heroine, the author can make the decision himself. After all, there will always be two groups of people (I agree)
Well, it looks good. Come on, bye.
Behind-the-scenes development personal favorite
The content is novel and interesting, and the characters' IQs are online
Yes, it's the best Naruto fanfic I've ever seen. [Smile][smile][smile][smile]
It's okay, I have ideas, but it starts to go downhill later, I hope the author will take a rest.
It's okay. If you don't mind so many suggestions, you can take a look.
Really 666, but why is there a second time traveler?
Haha, that's right, there's some logic, it's not the kind of thing that relies solely on imagination.
Very good 1jijigugu logic high
The subject matter is very novel, and it's still pretty good-looking.
Dear brothers! Little sister! Please correct me if I write poorly and I will work harder! First! I sincerely thank the following brothers and sisters! Including there are many friends who I don't know but are reading this book silently! ……… Kettle leaking electricity Team Chen who loves coconut curry crab ≥QBS Author stvrb3 User 24889189 Another world dragon evil Yingbao feeds you shit Xiaoyu Ling's poem ÖÍÍÉÉÌÉ Yuan Bao Luoshan Ji Qu Tian, who loves to eat colorful pepper and pork belly Keeper User 34432700 Taiyuan Wuji Daojun Blood Yu ① Dongshui Riyang vs Yuer Slime Oh Killing Golem Attacked in Jiangzhu Brother Lu who loves eating colorful vegetables and yams lazy total site Looking for Qiqi's walnuts Xuan Shengtianmen----Weasel Two boys in a sandbox Mo Xiu, who loves egg yolk rice cereal fallen light Penguin (Have you redeemed Q coins?) Guardian of Dawn-Kai Has this wind ever met you? Zaizai who loves steamed carrots Has your name been taken over by your family? Weird royal island Eat shit and don't forget the shit of the person who shitted you soft fruit Lone Girl.._ Forgetting each other Douluo Baichen Xiyuan Luo Wen, who loves fucoidan symbolic piety User 35452925 Why can't I change my nickname? Fermented cherries u Uchiha Mulberry A little Ayu wy Xu Tingxi Prayer Spring cat ≥ w ≤ Take a sip. _ Bright moon song Did you miss me? Don't like to eat Kun meat Washed clear sky Osiris of the Spirit River calf day Red Dust·Immortal Lord ……… Since I started writing this novel, I have had more than a hundred friends accompany me, and there are about 10 reminders every day. At that time, I always wanted to finish writing this novel! The original intention of writing novels at that time was really to use love to generate electricity, because after reading a lot of novels, I had some ideas, and then I wanted to share the stories I thought about with everyone with my pen! I think this situation should happen to many people. Until the 100,000-word debut, I suddenly felt nervous, always thinking about whether it would become popular? Will the results be good? Is anyone watching? How did you write it? Wait for various problems to arise! Then I went to Baidu to see if the first 100 people could hold on! The result is obvious, everyone is talking about it! Give up! Wait for another one! At that time, my head was pounding and I felt very depressed! I thought that I might not be suitable for this industry. Until the third day of the first show, those friends who were watching silently, and the above friends whose names I know, continued to speak, send gifts, and comment! Let me know that there are so many friends who have been supporting me by my side, but I have ignored them! (Sorry! Everyone!) Your corrections make me better, your suggestions make me happy, and your presence suddenly reminds me of... My original intention of writing a novel! At that time, I didn't think about how good my results would be. I just wanted to share the story with everyone. I don't know when my original intention started to change! I don't deny the idea of making money by writing novels. But! I will never forget my original intention of writing a novel! Thank you everyone for letting me find myself again! Thanks! I will continue to persevere and finish writing this novel with all my heart. Thanks again for supporting me and all the new friends coming later! I wish everyone: all your wishes will come true! Dreams come true! ………………………
What does this book say? He is as good as he is. The fast pace of the plot is in line with the trend of fast food in today's version. The protagonist has personality, but he is also inferior in that the protagonist has personality and personality. Although it can indeed attract a group of readers, it also means that a large part of the readers will be abandoned. Many people marry the protagonist to a cynical and broad personality. This can enhance the sense of substitution. I hope the author can do this I will correct it in the next book. He also has a shortcoming, that is, the plot is not so ups and downs. People like me who listen to novels and play games at the same time basically don't remember anything. For current affairs, just read the novels and don't do anything while on the job. And this advantage is that there are few people and he can write well. This kind of character quality is very good, but he will not be easy in the future. Even if the update is discontinued, he will start again in the future.
Very good, to my liking, come on!
The plot is exciting, but it's easy for people to overlook the hidden thread (but as long as you read the previous chapters, you can basically find the cause and effect) The character arrangement is okay, the changes that need to be changed, the damned deaths... Although some arrangements are a bit biased, they are acceptable (Gaara was beaten to death by the protagonist?!) This book needs to be more serious so that it does not appear to be inconsistent. The quality is between average and above (unfortunately, it is a Long Aotian template and lacks emotional drama. Without emotional drama, you can only watch the whole process from God's perspective, without a sense of empathy)
This is a treasure story discovered by accident. The plot is not procrastinating and the pace is fast, but there are too few. I look forward to the author's subsequent plots!
Come on, author, you'd better start a harem. How can you not feel happy in a different world?
The writing is good, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง
I really like the style of this book. I wonder if the author can control the emotional line well. If he can't control it well, it would be better not to write the emotional line.
Can the author add a female protagonist, just Benizakura and Kaguya, please?
Ouch! Not bad. Can you suggest a new cultivation system, such as star power and light [laughing evilly]
The plot was a bit fast at the beginning, but overall it was pretty good.
It's beautiful(•́⌄•́๑)૭Come on!
Why did the rating get so low? Did I remember it wrong? I remember the previous ratings were pretty good.
It's not bad. Chapter 90 or so begins with the protagonist's original plot. Although it's different, the process is the same! If you are impatient, you can skip to chapter 145 [laughs]
A very good novel
To be honest, as for the heroine, the author can make the decision himself. After all, there will always be two groups of people (I agree)
Well, it looks good. Come on, bye.
Behind-the-scenes development personal favorite
The content is novel and interesting, and the characters' IQs are online
Yes, it's the best Naruto fanfic I've ever seen. [Smile][smile][smile][smile]
It's okay, I have ideas, but it starts to go downhill later, I hope the author will take a rest.
It's okay. If you don't mind so many suggestions, you can take a look.
Really 666, but why is there a second time traveler?
Haha, that's right, there's some logic, it's not the kind of thing that relies solely on imagination.
Very good 1jijigugu logic high
The subject matter is very novel, and it's still pretty good-looking.
I personally think it's very good