Maid************

Finally, finally, there is finally a book about playing with a maid~The author writes well~Ganba Daddy~(ノ^_^)ノ

Finally a good-looking Kaguya-sama fanfic! And it's so touching to read, isn't it? The picture I imagined was so funny! Come on, great author!

It's so sweet. The maid lady is so cute. The author's writing is really excellent. It's considered to be of high quality among the Kaguya fanfics I've read. It doesn't tear down the cp, doesn't overly interfere with the main plot, has its own original content, and the protagonist's involvement in the plot is very appropriate. It's a rare high-quality fanfic.

It's a very good book. It does follow the plot in the early stages, which is annoying, but there is still a lot of sweetness after chapter 30. The protagonist's personality is very stable (in front of outsiders), and he has short hair (I like to imagine it to be similar to the king Han Xin's long hair but shorter), and nothing too disruptive to the original plot. But made up for it some. For example, "Cat Poop" where Shirogane and Kaguya kiss indirectly. Personally I think it's wonderful, but the author came in owed a chapter and paid it back without interest, which pissed me off!

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update. Because, I believe I can see it in my lifetime ending. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up More, no water, nothing is a problem, you and I will read it faithfully Readers, please wait together. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and Seriously, to put it bluntly, if you were included in the article, you would You are a senior performer, and I am the audience watching the video. The performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han I am in the same state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", watch more Episode, just one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. It's contradictory and... The mixed emotions drive me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, aimlessly clicking on this short article Said, I didn't have the mood to finish reading him, but you succeeded, I finished reading it "half-way". Now, I can only express my emotions! Yes, leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my heart at this moment. I hope you can see it by chance. Come on, do it I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers first.

Come on, author. Since what I want to say has already been said in my mind, I won't repeat it. I hope that the maid lady and the young master will get together soon and stimulate Kaguya and Shirogane. I look forward to seeing the daily dog ​​food of the maid lady and the young master ()

It's a fair review. The book is good, but the main plot is lacking. The focus of the story is on Kaguya and the president (personal opinion). But now that the protagonist has more roles, I hope there can be more interaction with the maid.

In the original work, Xiao Ai, as a tool trained by the Shinomiya family, can be said to have no freedom. She has been playing various roles, such as maid, male butler, and student. She has written many settings for herself, which is very distressing. The real side may only be seen by Kaguya. She wants to have her own life, not to be constrained by the Shinomiya family, to have someone she likes, and to experience her second year of high school. She said that if you don't pretend, you won't be loved, but in fact, she really wants someone who truly understands her, instead of being a tool. She envies Kaguya and Shirogane's experiences. This book is very well written. Ming, as a man with a script, reveals Xiao Ai's identity when they meet, so that Xiao Ai doesn't have to pretend and act. Ming also wants to see Xiao Ai's real side, and Xiao Ai's real side touches his heart. The story between them is also very complete, and Xiao Ai finally experiences sweet love [Love] The second brush was successful!

The front part of the book is too similar to the original work, which was the reason I was discouraged from reading it in the past. Recently I read this book in Shuhuang Square and I was a little confused as to why it was so close to the original work and why the score was so high. After reading the back part, I felt it was pretty good [Like]

The author does take the spotlight a little bit at the beginning. The author mainly writes according to the original work, introducing the characters step by step. But there is a saying that if you read this novel, you should basically have watched the anime. There is no need to place too much emphasis on the plot of the original work. The emotional line of the protagonist should still account for the main part. The author later listened to everyone's suggestions and the plot is gradually developing for the better. I hope the author can also introduce some stories of other characters later (the male protagonist's gay friend who only appeared once [face covering]). Finally: Someone finally brought Hayasaka Ai to play, the author sprinkled more Hayasaka Ai candies [crying][crying]

Comments after reading the confession: Anyone who has read the first 30 chapters or so will basically know the plot. After reading it once, I will find that the author has changed his ways (the content he wrote later is still very satisfactory to me. The author maintains his passion for writing, and don't be knocked down by small setbacks. I wish you 3s in a row (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Advantages: The only one I can find so far, completed, barely readable, in which Hayasaka loves to be the heroine. Disadvantages: It feels too faithful to the original work, which makes it a bit like the copywriting of a love game. There is sugar, but I wish it could be denser. There could be more description of the character's mentality. Everyone is reading this article because of Ai Hayasaka. The plot of other characters can be reduced. After all, people who are not familiar with the original work will not be able to read this.

It feels more like a Japanese light novel when I read it. It looks very relaxed and the emotions are described very delicately. It is not the refreshing feeling of eating ice cream in summer, but the quietness of autumn, night, and rocking chair, slowly overflowing. The maid is a character that I particularly like, and I am grateful to the author for giving her a young master that belongs exclusively to him. By the way, give me more candies, please be sure to kill me [shy]

Generally speaking, four stars is a relatively comprehensive score. One star less is indeed because in the early content, most of the anime has been skipped directly, but skipping directly will also affect the reading experience, so I give four stars. It is undeniable that the following chapters are indeed good-looking, except that there are fewer chapters and they are a bit short and weak😢.

It's still very interesting to watch, but there are only a few main issues 1. In the early stage, the protagonist looked like an outsider and was completely inserted into the plot. But now it has been changed a lot and it is already good. 2. It is too close to the original work. The author can actually write some original plots. Although the family rules of the Shinomiya family are very strict, but according to the article, the protagonist's family background is not inferior to Shinomiya. It should be no problem to do it a little bit (but the original ideas can be left for later, so it is not a big problem) 3. The encounter between the protagonist and Hayasaka is a bit abrupt... Maybe it is limited by Kaguya's personnel issues in the early stage. After all, Hayasaka rarely appears in the early stage, and he always follows Kaguya when he appears, so the problem is not too big, just be patient with it a little bit. 4. It's too short... It's so short... And the updates are not very regular, and sometimes they don't update... There are only one chapter, which really makes me feel sad... Other than that, there are no particularly obvious problems, and the above problems have little impact (except for the presence of the protagonist in the early stage, which may poison some people), so I will deduct one star.

Yes, Taiyang can often see the corner of my mouth recently. The author's writing is much better than at the beginning. The plot between Ming Shao and the maid has gradually increased, and the character image has become fuller. It's just that the author is particularly short.

This score is still too low. Except for the beginning, this book is still very good. It does not use the comprehensive title to seriously tell the story of an infatuated young master and a maid lady. Moreover, this is a Hayasaka novel. The only shortcoming is that it is too close to the original work and the protagonist's role is seriously lost. However, it was changed later and made up for many regrets of the original comic. I personally think this is a very excellent fanfic.

I'll give it five stars first. The author's writing is not bad, mainly because there are too many scenes with the original protagonist. Most readers read comprehensive comics to bring the protagonist into the second-dimensional life, and are not too interested in the original protagonist. I saw the author mention the beginning of the main plot several times before, but the protagonist's role was pitiful. The writing is good, and it is considered a good comprehensive comic on Tomato. I hope the author will write more stories about the protagonist and Hayasaka Ai in the future. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

I've read half of it, and it's pretty good. At least the Kaguya fanfics I've read so far are pretty good. The first 20 or 30 chapters are too boring to follow the plot, but the rest is quite interesting. Thank you, the author, keep up the good work [Sending my heart]

If you like the character Hayasaka Ai, I highly recommend this book. After all, there are really very few fan fictions written about Hayasaka Ai. Although the first part is all the content of the original work, and there is basically no protagonist, but after chapter 38, the author revised the plot and it is very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I personally listed some parts that I think need to be read: the first thirteen chapters, and after chapter 38. I think the middle part can be read or not. If you don't want to read the original work, you can skip it and it won't affect the plot. In addition, the author's book will definitely become popular if he continues to write in this style.

Oops, the main plot is over. It's so sad. This is the only fanfic I've read where the heroine is Ai Hayasaka. Can't the author write more? Hey, it feels so uncomfortable. Let me go. I personally like Hayasaka Ai very much, and I feel so empty after it ended like this. [Crying][almost crying]

It's okay. The first part is almost the same as the anime. If you've watched the anime, I suggest you skip it. Anyway, I started reading it from Chapter 40. The latter part is pretty good and sweet. From the second volume onwards, most of it is about Kaguya-sama and Shirogane. If you don't want to read it, I suggest you skip it. I don't recommend abandoning the book. After all, the latter part is really good.

I finished reading it in three days, and it's a low-end and high-end, but it's very suitable for people like me who have only watched the anime but dare not read the original work because of the reputation of Akasaka. I watched the Kaguya anime a long time ago and I have mixed feelings about it. In short, this is a short, warm and relaxing book. It is a good choice to relax and read.

Overall, it's okay, but I think this book has a little bit of substance in each chapter. The author prefers to describe the content of the series. Most of them are stories about Shirogane and Kaguya. The protagonist has less intervention, which makes the protagonist's presence even lower than that of the supporting characters. It's like adding a character to the original series. The supporting characters are almost the same; and most of the perspective of the book is not on the protagonist but on Shirogane, which made me feel like I was reading the novel "Miss Kaguya"; and the author added a lot of translations and explanations, resulting in the plot of each chapter being reduced. In fact, the author could have The explanation in the comment area is that this eliminates the suspicion of a low word count. The small theater may be a shortcoming or a feature, so I will not comment on it. Although there are such shortcomings, it is also for some people like me. But in my opinion, this book should be more oriented towards people who rarely read this type of novels and those who have never read the original series. According to my many years of experience, this type of novels should not be many in Tomato and are not popular, so many people will find it bright, probably. Finally, I would like to give a suggestion to the author, daily comprehensive comics may be easier to write.

I really like it. It's rare to find a fanfic that doesn't break the cp, but it is a little too close to the original work. The author can not completely follow the original plot. I personally feel that it is not bad when there are more student unions. The protagonist will not participate in the plot or is absent. There are too many main lines. At least let the protagonist participate. It is not unacceptable to change the plot. In fact, it feels better. I don't know how many times I have read the original work. It is actually more interesting to read something I haven't read.

In summary, this book is overall very good. It is recommended to start from the end of Chapter 29. The first part is mainly a retelling of the plot, and then there are more scenes between the protagonist and Hayaba Ai. Since there are very few novels in which Hayabusa Ai is the heroine, I highly recommend this book if you want to read Hayabusa Ai.

Whether it is the yearning for love, the expectation for ideal parents, or the love for the lively relationship between classmates, they are all yearning for life, and they all beat perfectly in my heart. The detailed description and plain narrative explain the perfect image of myself as a parent in the future.

Okay~, although the first part is a bit too close to the original work, the author quickly realized and got back on track in time. There are few love fanfics that are so attractive. Come on, author Sang [Thinking][Thinking]

It's so short, but I like it very much. I hope the author can write more. Don't stick to the main line too much. It might be better to try more innovations. The male protagonist can be more proactive in his "attack" on Zaobao Ai.

It's very good, it's very good, it's a good fan work, but you have to be a little patient. The author is not very mature in the early stage, and most of it focuses on the main content. It's like reading another text, but I still learned my lesson later. Overall, it's good, no regrets. (I haven't seen the "road to godhood" of the president and Kaguya, although it's not that fast according to their characters, but I still want to watch it, and hope the author will give a spin-off to godhood)