The water flows slowly and slowly.
Tea connoisseur Yang Qingsong VS Lin Yinyin who is sober in the world
Traveling back to the 1960s, there was no script, no system, and she was still married to a poor educated youth.
I was terrified of being exposed every day, so I took my 2-year-old baby seriously and took root in the village.
However, this village became more and more familiar, as if I had lived here before, and when I turned around I saw my young grandfather...
Never underestimate the alertness of natives.
Reader comments
This outline seems to be okay. Under the general environment, the main plot is very attractive. At present, it seems that the emotional development is still a bit far away.
I think it looks good, but the details are a little messy. My feeling is that the author understands it in his heart, but does not write it out. Some words may want to express something, but in the end it is not expressed and becomes a sentence that is not very clear.
That's it!
This outline seems to be okay. Under the general environment, the main plot is very attractive. At present, it seems that the emotional development is still a bit far away. I think it looks good, but the details are a little messy. My feeling is that the author understands it in his heart, but does not write it out. Some words may want to express something, but in the end it is not expressed and becomes a sentence that is not very clear. That's it!
Is the heroine the original heroine?