One Piece: Starting from the Drifter Samurai

Not bad, not bad, pretty good. What should I write next? Become a naval officer all the time?

Although I can't understand the back, the front is pretty good. ? ? ? ? ? It's over

Not bad, keep writing

Overall, the author's writing is indeed good, but it is obvious that the author was really a bit watered down in the end. A very good feature of this book is that the story line written around the protagonist is truly about the world of pirates. It does not revolve around the protagonist group like other books... It has a novel feel and is always written realistically, giving an overview of the darkness and reality in the pirate world. The protagonist's strength is quite normal except for the last few chapters, which the author wrote about water, and there was no discomfort in the battle. I like the character of the protagonist very much. He has retained modern thoughts from the early to mid-term. He truly upholds justice and has a very obvious contrast with those hypocritical justice. But in the end, the writing really makes me unacceptable. It is infinitely close to being unfinished. The author must be criticized for this! ! ! But as I rated it, the writing is pretty good and I hope the author's next book will be better and better! Come on💪!

I don't know what to say. I feel like I don't understand the protagonist's character. I still don't know what he wants to do. I'm confused. In the first few chapters, I almost asked me to quit. But Killing Luffy brought me back again. Wuhu, I've long disliked Luffy's mindlessness. Come on.

The author's writing is quite good, but it's a bit unreasonable to promote him to a general too early, but it's still very interesting. Come on, author.

It's been two hours and there's still no update. Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

Personally, I feel that once you learn domineering, you can become a wandering swordsman. Because what you are saying is, be unrestrained and be a wandering swordsman

The story is short but exciting

Life is like grass and trees in autumn. Words often float like dreams, and it seems that life is just a cup of tea. It's a very nice book, but the ending is too haphazard.

It's a very realistic description. The protagonist in the early stage is a fool. After experiencing countless hardships and pains, he realizes that he is just an arrogant person. He is impulsive, angry, and arrogant, all to the extreme. But later he slowly wakes up and the description is really interesting. However, I still feel that the early stage is depressing, and it is only in the middle stage that I start to feel more relaxed. I don't know how it will develop in the later stage. I hope it will be smoother, but it feels like it is hanging... Come on...

Obviously what you wrote is pretty much the same, but I always feel like I've been poisoned for some reason. It's okay. Keep up the good work.

Hope there will be a next one

I replaced it with sad songs throughout. The emotion of this book

Well written, don't pay attention to the comments.

It's very beautiful, the ending is so tearful [crying][crying]

I give you a five-star review. I hope you understand something and update it soon.

I think those are pretty good

Dear author, please keep updating! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] tmd This is the end, I'm really confused by the author [angry][angry][angry]

Come on, come on, come on

Very good, but it ended too quickly

Even so, I still give you five stars [smile]

Not bad, justice for ordinary people

It's well written, but it would be boring if Luffy died.

I still think this is a very good book

Although the author is a novice, I still feel that the novel he wrote is quite good. There are also some flaws. For example, the protagonist is not familiar with the plot of One Piece. As a result, during the crying battle, he did not know that he needs to be armed with Haki to hurt the natural system.

Come on more quickly! I wonder how many more pictures the author will make in half a year [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's so beautiful. It's simply the most beautiful pirate novel I've ever read. It's clearly certified that the evil thief in One Piece is a thief.

A very good book, good luck to the author! The quantity is a bit small

It's very beautiful, and it doesn't matter if it's a knife or something. Old thief, you actually stabbed me! I still hope it doesn't end, but if I can't, I'll start a new book.