驭龙师最弱职业？我契约清冷校花

This book is okay so far, I hope the author will get better as he writes more.

The style is rich and the logic is clear. I hope you will get better and better as you write. 👍👍👍👍 Let's take a look at the back, and overall it's pretty good. The structure is not good, the style is good, and the content does not go around repeatedly. Well, you should write more suspenseful or covering paragraphs. In this case, your writing may be better.

This book is quite in line with my taste. Although the protagonist is systematic, he will not turn into Long Aotian all of a sudden, which is embarrassing. Although he is low-key, he does not feel weak, and the daily life with the heroine is also very good. There is no cliche love at first sight in many novels. The author writes it well.

Your labels are very good, and you don't need to write down your strength distribution. If the distribution of strength is required by the plot, I won't say anything. As for character description, it will be better if you practice more. After all, I have read manuscript novels in real life (that is, the novels written by my peers. I am a liberal arts major. My classmates are very good, but I am not good at it. Of course, I have strong analytical skills, but I generally don't analyze it seriously, and I don't even read it seriously.) So on the surface level, of course, the author keeps writing and improves along the way. On a deeper level, if many people don't know that two stars are effectively deducted points, coupled with Tomato's changes in scoring, tsk tsk (I didn't say the book scored high, nor did I say the book scored low, just personal feelings), the development potential is limited (the author should know this) I really hope that this is a good book that opens low and runs high, but it may work just fine if you keep it this way. If it is your hobby, of course you can write it according to your pleasure. I only read it briefly, mainly because I think the label is really good, so I hope it can inspire the author. There are certainly no useful comments or analyses.

I have read all the author's books. Although I haven't finished them all, I have to say that they are really good, and this book is too. Come on, author! [Like][Like]

The quality is very good. It is exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeds expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is also very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with the purchase. I hope more friends will trust me! I will come again. Can it be cheaper next time? I will bring friends to your house.

The writing is very good, but there are a few updates. You know the author, come on.

Seriously, this book is really good, I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it👍👍👍

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to rush for updates, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up or get sloppy, nothing will be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you will be a senior actor, and I will be the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Sha's state of watching "One and Five Eyes of Leohard", one more episode will result in one less episode. I want to watch it, but I am reluctant to watch it. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler who clicked on this novel aimlessly without intending to finish reading it, but you succeeded. I finished reading it "half-way". Now, I can only sigh with emotion! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers

I personally think this book is generally good, but the identity of many characters is unclear, such as the identity of Su's father and mother, and the magma beast. In the end, Su basically cheated directly, such as the dragon promotion card, and Su's own promotion card, which directly increased the level to 36. There are also unknown creatures, which are all directly said to be cosmic creatures. The author actually still has a lot of holes to fill. But the content in the middle part is still good. The part about the treasure in the magma is very good. It is immersive and feels like you are with the protagonist (I will never tell you that I was so scared that I couldn't sleep when I watched that part in the middle of the night.) Although it is said to be unfinished in the end, I still recommend everyone to watch it.

I think this book is a lighter one, the style is quite interesting and the heroine is quite cute.

So pretty! It's the author, please come on and write the words. It's too short. I read it in one go.

It's very interesting, but the sudden ending caught me off guard. There weren't many emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists (it just didn't meet my expectations), but overall it was very exciting.

Support the author, although he is only in the early stage now, but he has laid out the foreshadowing very well, including the power of the dragon, the power above armor, the secret of the secret realm, the male protagonist's parents, the treasure chest that I don't know what to find, and the author who often makes jokes [making faces]

Let's review it. I really like this book. From the plot to the speed of the car, everything is very satisfying (the emphasis is on the speed of the car). As for other minor shortcomings, in terms of character creation, both Pig's Feet and Fatty have a slight flaw (there are two things about Pig's Feet that I don't like, and Fatty has many things); from the structure of the novel, the novel is indeed unfinished (but I want to emphasize that 85% of the author is complete beforehand. It should be said that the author has accelerated the ending for some reason, and may have omitted a large section, but some major pitfalls have basically been filled in)

It's really beautiful, the setting is very novel, the hierarchy is innovative, and many of the designs are very independent. It's a very high-quality work. The only pity is that it was unfinished in the end, which is such a pity.

This ending is not simple. It not only fills in all the previous pitfalls, but some of the previous props also pave the way for the ending. [Like] [Shame] It's just that this chapter is too small. Even if there are more than ten extra chapters, it will be fine. [Laughing] [Thinking] The content of the novel is also very rich. It's the system of this ending... The overall writing is not bad [Like] [Laugh] In the last few chapters, the protagonist and others have improved so fast [face covering] The situation is almost over [laughing] Before the end, let me tell you about the protagonist's parents. The protagonist's parents are still a mystery.

Not bad, not bad, very good-looking, but the male protagonist in the early stages felt a bit effeminate for some reason.

It's really good to read, the author is great, but the ending is too fast and I finished it in two days. It's really good to read. Although this book is more than two years old, it's really well written [Like][Like][Like]

Looks good, let me see it 3 Daji can stun me for 1.5 Seconds, and Zhang Liang can control me for 2.2 Seconds. Donghuang It can also control me for 2.2 Seconds, and Mozi's ultimate move can stun me for 3.3 Seconds. Yihuang The ultimate move can restrain me for four seconds, and the old master's ultimate move can trap me for five seconds. Yes It's the charm of your book that has trapped me all my life

I know why the writing of this book is okay, but the score is so low. It is said that the writing is not pleasant. If it is not a refreshing writing, but it reads like a refreshing writing, but the plot is not bad. The author has the heart to write a good book, but he is not very good at it. The two more stars are considered encouragement.

Come on, look forward to new works

I quite liked the story, but the ending was sped up later, so I deducted one star. It's also well-written later and I think it can get a score of 9.2 Or higher. It would also be good to write more stories about male and female protagonists, but it's a pity that the ending is too hasty. Life is not easy. Come on, author! [Sending Hearts] -2023.2.2 16:29

This is my favorite novel to read. Now I only read this novel and nothing else. It's just too short. When will there be an emotional drama or is the author not planning to write it at all?

It's pretty good. There are no problems with the overall route or anything, and the rhythm is okay. If I can maintain this, I will definitely get better in the later stages.

The novel is very good. The plot of both the treasure hunt and the battle is very rich and specific. The characters and plots are relatively coherent. It is a good and underrated article. However, the ending is a little sloppy, and the main character's parents wandering around in the whole text have no part at all [laughing]

I really like this contrast between the cute heroine and the steely straight man. It's great and I like it very much. The author has to work harder. It's best to have 4 more movies in a day. It makes me enjoy watching it! ! !

Hmm... How can I put it this way? I think it looks pretty good and suits my taste. I don't think the score should be so low. A score of 9 is normal.

It's very beautiful. I hope the author can write more than a million words.

Very promising, looking forward to the next work [top post]