Yellow Skin************

Wow, it looks good (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

This book has so many lolita, bah bah bah, rich plot, twists and turns and distinctive characters [laughter] [like]

All in all, not bad. It's just this word count that's a bit touching. I really hope the author will update it soon. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] This book makes me want to contribute the reminder that I have saved for a long time.

Among this type of novels, this book can be said to be a rare good book, because it is full of radish... Ahem, anyway, I strongly recommend it, for no other reason than it is good-looking! Come on, author, strive for the third update [laughing evilly] [shy]

That's very good. Update it quickly and don't end with a bad ending. Otherwise, I'll send you some souvenirs.

I really love this LSP book [laughing] (I understand everything I know). The protagonist is very smart and I like it very much. I hope it won't collapse after writing it. Come on, author.

Very nice and nice. In particular, the author's driving skills are very good, and the speed is fast and stable [like] This is very important [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's really good. Dear gentlemen, this is definitely a rare book. Strongly recommended, everyone can feel free to enter the trap [Like][Like][Admiration][Admiration][Sneaky smile]

Come on! Don't care about other people's opinions. Just be happy. Don't just update your novels. You should also pay attention to your body and rest early. 😊 Come on! Go to bed early and get up early, don't stay up late, just update it every day, don't care about other people's opinions. 😊

It's beautiful, whether it's white silk or black silk…ah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, the plot and imagination are so perfect, the ghosts and so on, haha, very interesting, the main thing is that they are all Xiao Luo, no, they are very strong, and the character creation is very perfect, very good, very good🐶

Overall, it's good. The story transition is quite natural, the text is good, and the cars are all there [laughing]. Keep up the good work, author~ Some suggestions: The detailed description is quite good, and it would be even better if you could include some reference pictures of the characters [laughing] The author should pay attention to me. Look at how many hours I have been reading. Can you give me some face?

Come on, I just like this kind of lsp. . . An ungentlemanly novel. To be fair, it was well written [laughter]

It's very beautiful. I like it very much. The author should go code it! ! ! [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Look at my five-star reviews, you don't want to see one-star reviews, right?

Yes, the story has its ups and downs and is eye-catching. The updated chapter can try to set up suspense.

This book is really in line with my appetite. It has both a lolita and a series of plots, especially the story of Susan's family. This has always kept my appetite. Come on, author, your book is super exciting.

I think this kind of sweet article disguised as a horror novel is very good.

I like loli the most, I really like it likes it likes it.

[OK][OK][smile][smile][smile][smile][like][like][like][smirk][smile][smile][smile] Understand? Not bad ╭(╯ε╰)╮little🔥juice! Come on As long as you keep it up, you will definitely get a score of 9.5 Or above! I'll insert my eyes first [laughs evilly] Content: Maintaining an atmosphere that is both humorous and scary, creating your own style [like] (Lolic control is so good [laughing evilly]) Characters: The protagonist feels very bland and needs something to highlight. Youlan is okay, but the others... Barely, after all, there are too few stories at present to reflect it. Location: So far, the location is only the school. I believe there will definitely be other places in the future - 🔥cemeteries, hospitals, mass graves. It can be said that once there are more locations, there will be more character descriptions. I hope the author can master it 🙏🙏 Story: Come on! I don't watch Horror Paradise in one or two days, so I basically know the style of the Ten Deadly Sins, you know? Even poor people must be hateful, and the author can reflect this in the tasks and characters. The last and most important point! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author, please update me soon! ! ! The above suggestions are all reflected in the fact that you have more chapters. If you have less chapters, everything is nonsense! [Angry][Angry] So give me an update! I've prepared everything for you💰💰💰(save money and spend money) Come on! Come on! Come on! Say important things three times! Understand? If you don't like it, don't spray it, thank you

Come on, the author, keep writing. I am now giving you a five-star review. I hope the author continues to work hard and pay attention to your health, otherwise I will not be able to read such an interesting novel. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It looks good [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss], but too short [get it], you know [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile], but pay more attention to your health, because being a writer is a high-risk profession [face covering] [face covering]. Come on!

After looking at so many pictures, I found that I haven't even ordered five stars╭(°A°`)╮. They are very beautiful. Come on.

This book is very good to read [Admiration], it captured the topic [OK], the speed of the car is just right [laughing] It's not too scary at all, I highly recommend it [Like] The plot has ups and downs, and the ending is also perfect [Read it carefully] There are a lot of words, it's enough to read, it's worthy of being the second update, but the last chapter is a bit uncomfortable [smile], I don't recommend reading it, overall it's very enjoyable

I finished watching it. It's good. Although it's not very good, the quality is good. I hope it gets better and better.

Nice! ! ! The protagonist's IQ is online throughout the whole process, he is calm when faced with problems, and can deduce weaknesses through details. The most important thing is that the author and I have the same XP! ! ! Author (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on, it's not enough! ! !

I think, in horror games, rescuing cute little girls is very healing, very challenging, and full of tolerance for girls. Wow, it simply satisfies me, because I like legal lolita very much. I think only legal lolita can make my heart beat in the future. In short, in short, I am a lolita fan, and little lolita are justice. Only love and justice cannot be let down. Justice = lolita, lolita = love, so only little lolita can not live up to it! (Dog head)🐶 I hope it will be stable like this in the future. Just keep this level from falling in the future. Don't seek to go higher but seek not to fall. Support the author. Come on.

Let's put it this way, the protagonist's IQ was online at the beginning. Later, the combat power collapsed and monsters were spawned, and the world map progressed too fast. But I still like it. When I see a lolicon who loves another, I still like this novel [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I personally feel that this book is very well written. I don't see any big flaws so far. Good luck, author! ! ! Strive to update three times a day, and I can consider giving you my inspiration capsule! ! The premise is that you update it as soon as possible. If you don't update it, I will go to your house along the network cable, and then hey hey hey Author, I saved a love letter. I will give you two updates a day whenever you want.

Damn it! Holy book! Divine book! The delicate writing and ups and downs of the plot are simply a great book in Tomato!

Nice! It's just that the details are a little off and there's no process [laughing evilly] And I feel that the description of the appearance is too cumbersome. I don't think it's just about the appearance. I think it's necessary to go into the details and processes of those things. Everyone loves to read [laughter]

It's so beautiful. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people [laughs]

I have to say that this novel is the best one I have ever read in Jinglai (personal opinion). I hope that the author will be prosperous and in good health in the future, and will update ten times a day [please update more][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]