Sour Fruit

[Learned] In terms of content, the character creation is very good, but there is no focus. However, the heroine is okay. I just briefly touched on some places. In fact, you can pay more attention to some details in the front, such as the relationship progress or the pull between men and women. The later part is too fast and the relationship is inexplicable. I didn't jump to see you. It seems that I wrote more than 100 pictures. The real male protagonist and the female protagonist only knew each other for a few photos and then hurriedly confirmed their relationship. Or in addition to this, the male protagonist was sick because the female protagonist saw the second male lead. The female protagonist expressed that she was more afraid of losing the male lead than the second male lead; that she would not be able to fall in love so fast at first sight even after they had only known each other for a short time, or that she would give up so quickly even if she let go of someone she had been in love with for more than ten years. I didn't read the later part, but overall it should be okay. Recommended for those who pursue a fast pace; be cautious when pursuing details.

I light incense with the gods, but it's hard to calm down my feelings. It's a pity that Chen Ziwang didn't care at first, and he regrets that he didn't care at all. The second regret is that Bai Xiwei's love is not available, one step is wrong, and every step is wrong.

Good-looking but hard to resist the man's idea

It's true, no one will be where they are, and some people will miss it for the rest of their lives.

Very good-looking. The ending of Chen Ziwan is a bit sad.

Good intentions are hard to deny, but they are still good

Pretty good, I like it

It's really good to watch. The male protagonist is not a scumbag, but the fate has not come yet. After all, he will die. The second male lead is very good to the female protagonist after he takes over. I prefer the author's writing style. It's a very good novel I've read this month. I'm looking forward to your next work.

The storyline develops too fast. I love it if I like it. Besides, you can't hear the game on the other side of the mic. How can you say the sound sounds good [face covering], I think there is still room for improvement.

This female protagonist is really good. Although she loved the male protagonist at first, she also wanted to be strong. She gave up when she knew that she would be humiliating herself if she couldn't get her. Later, it was quite satisfying to abuse the male protagonist.