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As an old bookworm, this newly-opened book really resonated with my recent pursuit of HP. Who wouldn't cry about the always-Snape? My dears, I was really looking for books that gave him a good ending. (I'm incoherent, brothers, don't worry about me.) I really felt sorry for my Snape. His family environment has shaped his character since he was a child. His hidden thoughts about Evans also made him more sensitive and inferior. Finally, in the grandson The atonement-like protection of Harry for generations, and the infamy of everyone, I really feel sorry for him. Maybe there is a better sun that can influence him since he was a child, and he may also change his miserable life. Thank you to the author, and I hope you can try your best to write according to your own outline (just try not to ruin the plot, really~), come on, those of us who like to read this book will naturally support your fighting [note]

This is a treasure! I don't know why I like eating Asta and Ace's cps. Isn't it good for girls who are fragrant and soft? 😂

Hahaha, this book is really good, but why doesn't anyone read it?

Dear little friends, please rate it lightly. It's my first time writing a novel. Please forgive me. I will read every comment and take your opinions into consideration. [Blowing kiss]

Like it very much! I have read a lot of articles about Snape's Redemption series, and I really don't know what to say to most of the heroines who use too much force as soon as they start. This article makes me feel comfortable! I hope I can persist through it [face covering] (Also, I knew this article would be popular as soon as I read it [shy])

I think the author's writing is pretty good so far, but I don't know why the score is so low and there aren't many readers. Ace comforts everyone who needs help like a spring breeze, and I also like the emotion he treats like. He likes but does not indulge in liking, has his own goals, and feels like he has great love. Asta is also portrayed very well. She is a arrogant young lady who is very cute. She supports Ace unconditionally and gives her unconditional trust. They are each other's best friends. Although they are usually very outgoing, they can also be very shy when it comes to liking her. I was pleasantly surprised by Diane's transformation, from a timid and shy little girl to a royal sister, really, a sister, give me a Jihui. Come on! Author Dada, your book is really great. There are some high-scoring HP fan fictions, but I didn't get it, but this one really suits my liking. The heroine's character is great, and the male protagonist's emotional change is not sudden. I feel very comfortable just looking at the relationship between the two of them. It feels like the tranquility of time. I am looking forward to the author's next article [Blow kiss] [Love]

The heroine is a very gentle person, but not weak. She does not travel through time like in many novels. She is really just a teenager. Facing death and Voldemort, she was very scared, but she was able to escape quickly with the help of her friends. She also strengthened her own ideas to fight against Voldemort and do what she can. I really like Ace's character.

In fact, I didn't know much about Harry Potter at the beginning, because I had never seen the movies or read the original books before. I only got into it because of the fan fiction. After gradually getting to know each other, I found out that in the whole series, the one who felt the most distressed was Sijiao, who was unable to love him and always protected Harry silently. The most touching thing was Sijiao's words "always". And this fanfic is just right, it makes up for all my regrets. In the original novel, I actually didn't like James and Sirius because school bullying is really scary. All in all, it was super exciting, but ahem, the progress was a bit slow. We only kissed a few times, but Teacher Sri Lanka was too shy. [Blowing kiss]

The plot is smooth and the plot is reasonable. I will continue to follow it! I'm really looking forward to how Lao Fu will die in the end [Thinking] Every HP fanfic has a way to die [laughing evilly] hia hia hia [making faces]

I quite like this book so far. But it's not very fresh because I've read too many books about Sri Lanka. But one thing I still hate is that I don't really like the character of Lily very much. Because to be honest, the movie beautifies the character of Lily. She does love Harry very much and is indeed a great mother. But from my point of view, Lily is not worthy of the affection of the teacher. When Sirius and the others were fighting with Sri Lanka, she not only did not dissuade her, but after the fight, she told the personal trainer that I would take care of them in the future. But it's very speechless. Why do you do this? If something like this happens, you should tell the teacher. Although my point of view is indeed a bit mandatory, after all, we cannot use our modern theories to put them in that era. But no matter what, I still don't like it Of course, this is just my own opinion and does not represent everyone else. If you don't argue, you will win.

This scene with Sif is my favorite! ! It's so comfortable, like lying on a big soft sofa and watching the sunset, with potato chips and milk tea on hand, and a kitten in my arms or in the arms of the person I like. Wow, I really like this cozy feeling. In love forever! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Sif, who is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, and Ace, who is gentle, are both so cute! ! ! ! 🥰🥰🥰

This book is very good, 1. The storyline is very reasonable and super sweet 2. The character of the heroine is great, she is someone who can heal Si Jiao in her heart. 3. Our Sri Lankan teaching is really super happy here, which completely makes up for my regrets about Sri Lankan teaching. 4. The author's writing style is superb! ! ! ! 5. The other characters are also very well designed, and their personalities are very popular. 6. In this world, Sirius is also loved by someone, which makes up for my regret of leaving Sirius after being in prison for many years.

What a fairy book this is! What a great fairy! ! So pretty! ! ! I love Da Da! Work hard to update! Mwah! Don't miss it if you pass by, you'll earn it if you see it! If you don't watch it, you'll be at a loss! Everyone rush! !! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, this book is so good! ! Beautiful as a fairy, looks like a fairy, a fairy descends to earth, has a flower-like face and a moon-like appearance, a flower-like face and a moon-like appearance, jade is clean and ice-clear, the ice and snow are smart, bright and moving, the moon is shy of the flower, a beauty in the world, a flawless white jade, unparalleled beauty, charming, charming, beautiful. The beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the purples and reds, the stunning beauty, the beauties of the 28th century, the beauty of the crowd, the stunning beauty, the lotus in the water, the confidante, the beauty in pink, the little jade, the bird is in love, the peerless beauty, the beauty is delicious, the beauty is beautiful, the warm and fragrant jade Moth eyebrows and white teeth, curved eyebrows and plump cheeks, red lips and white teeth, apricot face and peach cheeks, natural jade, rich and beautiful appearance, natural beauty, celestial beauty, fine skin and tender skin, fragrant and refined, orchid-like heart, bright eyes and white teeth, Qihua Yaocao, cricket-headed moth eyebrows, icy skin and jade bones, celestial jade color Stunning beauty, gorgeous shadows in the willow sky, rich peaches and plums, warm fragrant jade, gorgeous beauty, peerless beauty, graceful elegance, beautiful flowers, beautiful flowers, willow flowers, willow flowers, weak flowers, willow waist flower state, graceful lady, Zuo family's sweet girl, I still feel pity for the graceful eyebrows, distant mountain hibiscus, Zhangtai willows, the attractive author is greatly appreciated

Professor Snape must be given sweet redemption! I will never let it go if I use it for generations to come! Highly recommended😱

It's really good-looking, but it's also really good. վ'ᴗ' ի The cover has been changed (ง ˙o˙)วThe new cover looks good (I didn't say the old cover didn't look good). I really like this book!

The writing is super beautiful. Pictures 91 and 92 are so sweet. I like the author's great description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Ace is like a white moonlight. The girl who takes care of others gently and lovingly falls in love without being angry. The warm feeling is well written. Little Snape, at least he is not only Lily's best friend. I really like the Hodgepatch scarf that the heroine gave him when Snape saw him for the first time. Keep him warm, and answer his questions. Big sister, ah, sister and brother love😎, not awkward at all. It is inevitable and natural for them to be together. Later, Snape joined the Death Eaters because he found out that the heroine was doing dangerous things and became a spy with her. Snape's detailed description in it is very touching. He can clearly distinguish what is possessiveness for a friend (Lily) and what is liking (Ace). I haven't updated it in a long time, and I've been waiting for a long time, hoping to finish it. Ever since I started looking for fanfics from HP, I've been short of books. I don't think there are many fanfics that fit my taste, so I finally came across one that was written by Dada, but I read it too quickly and finished it all at once.

Marvelous! Forgive me for my poor literary talent. The biggest feature of this book is that it is warm and peaceful. Feelings flow naturally like running water. I really like the tolerant character of the heroine! I love the sex change potion so much! ! I have to say that the two female friends of the heroine have really touched my hobby. The friendship of the Hufflepuff one and the Ravenclaw one have directly touched my hobby. I love them so much😍I can do what Sirius can do, so look at me, little sister, what attracted her to the boyfriend of the Ravenclaw sister, maybe I can do it too hehehe

I don't allow anyone to not know this novel [learned]

I love little Ace, and little Ace must love me too.

Love it, love it, Sri Lanka has always been my regret. It's so touching and sweet. If the author has no idea, he can consider adding Harry Potter, hehe [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

The whole writing will not make people feel embarrassed, the character structure is very vivid, the supporting characters have their own characteristics, and the characters feel alive. It can be said that it is another side story, so what are you waiting for? Come and take a look

It's really, really beautiful \(//∇//)\\(//∇//)\. It's very comfortable and smooth to watch. But I hope the relationship between Ace and Snape will come soon. It's really nice [love] [please update]

This is the author's first time writing a book. As someone who has read novels for more than ten years and has written novels for several years, I would like to give the book three stars, but the author is really good-tempered and has potential. I would like to support it with four stars. I hope the author can work hard on character creation and plot tension, otherwise it will be too simple and without content. However, sisters who like cookies can come and watch it. There are both cars and cookies. I hope the author can work hard

Why hasn't it been updated? Wuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] The novel has not been updated since I came back from school. It's so sad [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] I go back to school tomorrow and have to wait another week [cry] [cry] [cry]

It's not my fault, this book is really good. Just the setting of the heroine is enough to make me fall in love with this book. Anyway, it fits the type of books I like to read.

It must be five stars, it is really good-looking. The protagonists in many HP fanfics are professors, but not many of them are well-written. This article is really good. The author needs to work hard. Finally, I want to say that in this darkness, it is really good that Ace and Sif can accompany each other, move forward together, understand each other, push aside the darkness and move towards a bright and beautiful future.

Great writing! ! Don't look at the ratings, it's really pretty No loss in investment

There is a novel where the heroine is Snape's kid from the Badger Yard. It's a fantasy crossover.

It looks good, why does no one watch it?