After Time Travel, I Was Crushed by the Villain's Apprentice

Very good, read a little faster (more! More! More!) Haha, the author should not think the readers are tired, as long as you update, I will stay up late and die suddenly to finish it for you The comment has been changed, I like it

Lily, really nice, I like it very much—————————————————— Half-hidden face, asking in a low voice, the beauty on the porch I am stroking the guzheng, smiling slightly, accompanied by the breeze. The dream of lovesickness is getting deeper and deeper, disturbing my mind inch by inch. Can the beauty turn around and share the beautiful scenery together? Morning and dusk, the man in the moon, who will help her out of trouble? The writing is a playbook, living a life full of ink, placing my love in poetry. Outside the building, there are layers of green hills. No one knows how deep the clouds are. It's like I don't know who I'm destined to be with From dusk to early morning, the sixth watch has passed, the moon sets and the sun rises Berry moss stands in front of me. I listen to the sound of horse hooves. How many times have I passed through the house? The cool breeze is slightly cold, but my heart still has warmth. I no longer have any traces of tears. Who is the guest downstairs? Does he have a sweetheart? What do you think of me Asking is the heartbeat Half-covering your face means being reserved It's a pity that I don't know the result

So beautiful [Adoration] Yu Xiaoluo loves you so much [Blowing kiss] Why is it over? [Crying] I cried to death

Bai Hewen Gaga is good-looking, but the car is a bit lacking and more will be added in the later stage. The author will be bald if he writes too much [angry] The author should update it quickly. These five-star reviews are all bad. It's really sweet [snicker][snicker][smirk]. Also, the quick updates are simply not enough to watch.

It's so beautiful! And it's so sweet! The author is so nice! Very friendly to the people! Really! You can't find many authors like this on Tomato! This book also has two female protagonists (one with a car!!!) It's not a loss to invest in it!!!

I really liked this book when the heroine was the Immortal Jade Wan. But later I felt that what I wrote was not in line with what I wanted to see. Really, I really like this book when the heroine is very powerful and yet cold [I almost cried]. From the part where Wanqing makes the heroine become a demon, it doesn't really suit my liking. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Even so, this book is still my most favorite Lily [I almost cried]. This is also the first time I have evaluated a book so seriously. I hope the author can write more lily stories where the heroine is very strong but has a cold personality [crying][crying]

It's good to watch, but I hope the protagonist and the heroine can develop together quickly. Tamako is the best.

The plot is very good. This book deserves five stars. The author's attitude is a plus. Tomato rarely has such an author who can listen to suggestions. Looking at it all the way , the author's grasp of emotions has also been obviously improved. 5 Stars are no longer enough, so add a few more for the author🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟To be honest, I quite like Panzi. Can the author create a parallel world where the protagonist and Panzi are together? (Extra) If you want to follow up on the review... Wait until this book is finished before writing [Thinking] I will definitely write a short composition for you by then [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's very pretty and very sweet. The knife doesn't count as a knife, but it's still very sweet! You won't find the plot boring either. The point is that there is a car driving process! The author understands the readers' thoughts very well [laughs crookedly] This book is also one of my two favorite books. The author's writing style is very good and it is really worth reading. At first, I was looking forward to a plot where Mo Yurou also had feelings for Yu Wan and started to pursue Yu Wan, and then Mu Wanqing became jealous and her feelings for Yu Wan became clearer! After all, being jealous is good for your health [shy][shy] But the author just mentioned Mo Yurou's thoughts in an essay and then disappeared [almost crying] What a pity! ! [Crying] However, the plot that focuses on developing the main CP is also good, I reluctantly accepted it [Shy] [Shy] The author needs to work hard! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot! (Car, car, car, car! Process~) [Shy][Shy]

Yu Wan and Yu Xiaowan are both good people. They have experienced misery and pain. The ending of the BE version is already a good ending in my mind. I hope Xiao Wan can live a good life and Wan Wanzi can be reincarnated into a good family and live a happy life. I feel like I'm more addicted to Shuangwan CP eh*▽* (personal opinion), overall the novel is pretty good. Big cheers for the author

I will never allow such a wonderful article to be rated so low. It's the first time I write a book review. Hahaha, it's really good. My favorite one now is Yu Wan. She is really a gentle girl. She is simply an ideal girlfriend (hahaha, she is targeted by Mu Wanqing). The daily relationship between Yu Wan and her three apprentices is also very warm. Huahua is really a cute girl. Every time I feel like rua her head. Moreover, the author really writes with a great sense of atmosphere. The night when the two protagonists first kissed was very touching and cultured. Every now and then, there would be one or two verses. I felt that my writing had improved, and there was no situation where one of the characters was too masculine or too fatherly. I really love it! Also, I admit that I am a native and want to see something like Shura Field, which is not about men. I wonder if there will be one in the future? I have said so much without realizing it, hahaha. I haven't found an article that I like for a long time. I will keep chasing it. The author should work hard~

I just finished watching the ending of be, which is great. Then I hope that there will be more wheels and be bolder ∠( ᐛ ∠)_Since we have already reached the point of extra hair, why don't we be bolder [laughing evilly] Come on! When I saw 179, I felt that development is too fast now. There are only about 10 plots in modern times, which feels so little. Come on.

Among the Lily novels I have read so far, the quality of this novel is relatively good. Unlike some of the novels I have read before, it is completely impossible to read with your mind (I am not saying that the writing is not good, I just don't like it). In short, I still like this novel very much. And the author's bacteria, apart from a little bit of cooing, is really active. It would be nice if updates could be made faster [Thinking][Thinking]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Say important things three times! By the way, you can go to the author's Douyin to read the content that Tomato is not allowed to write. It's called: Yu Xiaoluo, hehehehehehehehe[sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh] The author asked me to score a lot, so I'll do it. Although I don't know why, I have always been an obedient and good boy! @ Hey, I changed it back again, hee hee @

Nice! The plot is slow, because the master and the apprentice have a bloody feud, and there is no emotional line because they are the protagonists. Therefore, some people should not think that the emotional line of the two protagonists is too slow just because it is a Lily novel. One of them is incompatible with the demons, and the other is the demon lord, so the emotional line cannot be too fast.

The writing style is very good, long live Lily, I just want to see if the late Qing Dynasty can gain some momentum, A up! After all, Yuwan is so simple.

Babies who come in must watch "Yi He Wen Wu". It's really super good-looking. The ending is either "be" or "he". Leave it to me. If it doesn't look good, I'll rip off the head and send it to you. The update is also very diligent (although it's not enough to watch). Changedoooooo

The writing is good, the plot does not drag out, and there is no bad ending. It is a bit sadistic, but I always feel that the ending is the most beautiful. Then let me talk about some of the problems I think this book has. This is a short story, and the emotional foreshadowing is more or less insufficient. That is to say, there are not so many chapters to make the emotions in the text more delicate and real. Of course, this is a common problem in short stories. If it is placed in a short story, the author of this article has handled it very well. Overall, I would give it a 9.5, And if it were a little longer it would be a 10.

The author's writing is so good, ah ah ah, [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] This is the first time I read a novel that touched me deeply. The writing is so good, especially this sentence: "A white head does not need snow to replace it, I only need you to grow old together. How can a white head be replaced by snow? The acquaintance is already a sign." I will never forget it in this life. It's such a pity. I just read this novel yesterday and finished it today. I love Wan Wan Zi very much. I don't know why, but I just really like her character, so I want to ask, did she spend her whole life Pei Xiaowan? Just watching Xiaowan and Wanqing get married and have children?

It's really super, super, super good-looking! This is the first book with two female protagonists that I've come across! But I didn't expect to find such a wonderful book! Ahhhh, I love it so much! The plot of this book is wonderful and cliché, rich in imagination, some places are ridiculous and some are very touching, I really recommend you to read this book!

[Spoilers included] The heroine Yu Xiaowan has a silly and sweet character. He is easy to deceive (mainly deceived by his disciples) and gets lost. He is a road fool, and he is probably quite silly and cute. Unexpectedly, such a heroine was blinded in her previous life and was abused by the organization every day. Later, she was "rescued". In order to take revenge, she trained hard and became a gold medal killer. Silly daytime heroines who can become killers are rare [face covering] The character of the apprentice is not likable, but it is not annoying either. It's a little annoying to see the apprentice bullying (abusing) the master. If you love someone, you will abuse him every day, and you will insist on the death of the heroine once and for all. The heroine died once and came back with the intention of imprisoning the heroine. Although it is understandable that he wanted to highlight his possessiveness, the apprentice's behavior was not pleasing to him no matter what. When the heroine dies and the apprentice finally bursts into tears, watching this scene makes me feel happy. Normally when I see this part, I want to tell the apprentice that he deserves it. If you stop here, there will be an ending of be, and the author also said it. But even though it has the ending of "be", it still belongs to "he" if you insist on watching the final ending. In summary, you can read it when you are out of books. This is also the first time I have read Master and Disciple Lily. Although the sense of CP between the two heroines is average to me, it is probably due to the unflattering behavior of the apprentice in the later period. In addition, I would like to say that the author is very enthusiastic and the writing is very good. Don't give it a low star before you finish reading it. If you can't stand it, just look for other books. The author is also very hard-working. Basically, it's like this. Let's briefly talk about my personal impressions [Sending my heart]

I watched it a long time ago, and I'm just rating it now. Overall, I like the subject matter and the plot very much. The only thing I didn't like was that I shouldn't have read the extra story about the original owner's previous life, because it described the original owner being raped in a brothel. I didn't feel particularly comfortable watching it here, because I actually liked the original owner quite a lot. In addition, maybe mentally I didn't particularly like to see this kind of thing. So when I finished watching it, I felt uncomfortable and had insomnia because of it. Well, but of course this is my personal problem. The author's writing is still very beautiful [blowing kiss]

It's nice to look at, but my little immortal 😭😭😭 was thinking about the ascension of the little immortal, and he turned into a demon. Wuwuwuwuwu But this also shows that the author's clean character portrayal of Yupa's Immortal Lord has been very perfect, so perfect that I will feel that the Immortal Lord has been defiled after seeing him become a demon😭😭😭😭

It's very good-looking. It's not like other novels where the author will give you two choices at the end. If you like be, you can read the first one. If you don't like be, you can go straight to the back and choose he. The ending is very satisfying.

This book is very well written! The content is lively and interesting, and sometimes I can't stop laughing. [Pause face] The author is really funny. [Blow a kiss] The author is not only funny, but also very talented! After reading this novel, you will not only learn new knowledge! I can also review the texts I have learned before. I can only say that I am awesome [face covering] The story between Mu Wan, Qing and Yuwan is very sweet, very easy to laugh at, just lock it up [sending my heart] Of course, the other deputy CPs written in big letters by the author are also very easy to like, very sweet! The main text is very well written, and the extras are also very well written! Finally, I would like to sincerely praise the author, my dear, you are really awesome (//∇//) [Blow kiss] Then I hope that all the lovers in this book can happily join hands and move towards a bright future, and I wish her/them a hundred years of happiness [Sending my heart]

It can only be said that the author is very trendy. The whole article follows the trend of the times and is dedicated to every pair of CPs. It is not enough to read. It is really good [like]. The protagonist's thoughts are very practical. The author has done many comment activities. It is the first time I have encountered an author who is so attentive to readers. Finally, I wish Wanqing and Shuangwan success and safety [OK] [like] (The author didn't forget to add extra chapters, I can't wait [laughs] [exploration]

The plot is okay, but not particularly original. But it does a very good job in portraying the characters, especially Xiao Wan, who is cute and cold, but still healthy, sunny, and positive even after being tortured for a long time, which makes people resonate and sympathize. However, the most interesting thing is the author himself. Even though I have never posted a comment, I often click on the comments to see the interaction between the author and the readers, and the author's intention for this book. Where can I find such a good author? If it weren't for my boy friend, I would have wanted to post with the author [shy] I really like this book and the author too.

You have to watch it, you will regret it if you don't watch it, it's super sweet and the front part is so funny! There is a deputy CP in it, as well as unexpected sweetness

To be honest, this book is the first Lily I have read in its entirety. The author is really great. I want to kiss the author in person, come on, let me kiss him [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] To be honest, when I first read this book, I was a little resistant, because I thought that the author was foreshadowing some of the male characters at the beginning, such as Mr. Yuanfeng, and how the senior brother, second brother, and third brother all like the female protagonist. But after looking back, I found that this is not the case at all. The further I read, the more interested I became, and the author's writing style is really very delicate. In fact, I have read a lot of sweet pet articles, but articles that are sweet but not boring like the author's are really rare. In fact, unlike some book friends, when I read some interactions between masters and apprentices, what I think of is not some strange things, but some very beautiful things, because I personally think that girls posting is really beautiful and wonderful, and I will always like girls~~~ But when Mo Yurou fought with the heroine, and then the master accidentally knocked the heroine down, I was actually very confused, because I felt that there should be some trust between the master and the disciple, and I felt that the misunderstanding was a little bit blunt. Also, I'm very curious about what happened to the original owner, Yu Wan, and Mo Yurou? The author's final confession is a big one, coming from a girl's kiss. [Blowing kiss]

It's so sweet and so good. This is the first novel with two female protagonists that I've read. It's super sweet. Mu Wanqing is the gong and Yu Wan is the shou. There are also two male protagonists (Mu Jiao & Qingxiao, Xiao Wangshu & Dai Yuanxiu). [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]