HP Player's Ruined Salty Life

Finally, I met a heroine who wanted to be a good person but knew that she had to improve her strength first. I read that some female protagonists in fairy tales said that they wanted to be bad and be bad. However, that is the world of immortality, where strength is the most important and the degree of danger is maximum. If you don't have the strength, you can only be slaughtered by others when you are in danger or bullied. If you still want to be bad, isn't this a dream? Only when you are strong enough can you have enough freedom to be bad.

Surprisingly, my favorite Hogwarts novel and my second favorite are actually by the same author! Beautiful writing, exquisite layout, warm stories, and thought-provoking philosophy are all quietly infiltrated into the author's words, becoming a white moonlight-like existence in the Hogwarts novel. I really like the bright moon-like Anna in "Butterfly Storm", and I also love the microscopic whiteness like the breeze in the forest in this book. Gentle yet pure, wise yet firm, I think this may be what attracts me most about the two heroines in the author's works, right?

I really like Xiaobai very much. He is one of my favorite characters in the books I have read. Xiaobai in both worlds is very good. Whether it is Wei Shengbai who chooses to fight the world in order to maintain her humanity and obsession, or Xiaobai who makes a true inner choice in order to protect her seniors and prevent herself from regretting, they are all very good. Their love for the world and for Xifu is very touching. I really like the author's capital words describing love, "It is deeper than despair, more passionate than hope. It is difficult for the consciousness of the world to stop it, and it is difficult for the wisdom of gods to understand it. It is the most noble existence in the glory of human nature." I feel that only this kind of love can compete with the entire world. And although there was a knife, the final result was really good. Xiaobai and Sif were back together. Sif was no longer trapped in regret and loneliness. Harry also had his parents by his side. GGAD was also complete. Sirius did not spend more than ten years in Azkaban (and his brother was still alive). Everyone was really good. I believe that all the knives have been inserted, and there will be a beautiful relationship between Xiaobai and her senior. Finally, I hope Da Da can update it soon. I stayed up late and read it all at once. It was really not enough. It is my first time to write a long review (I guess it counts). I hope I can see more wonderful stories written by Da Da. [Love]

It's super pretty, very suitable to my taste, and the heroine's setting is very good [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The author's other book is also very good and very interesting. I have finished following the story of the girl Anna who made a contract with the God of Death and the reborn Sect. I came to read this book and saw the updated parts. It is also very suitable for my taste. I really like the author's big book [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

After reading Butterfly Storm, I was attracted by the title and introduction of this book. This book has been gathering dust in my favorites for a long time. Recently, I have saved more than 70 pictures before reading it. I finally finished this book tonight [shy] The plot is really exciting and very friendly to players who like GGAD and Grindelwald. Nowadays, it is really rare to bring the author's characters on FB to play. The characters in this book are not OOC, and the writing is very vivid and real. I really like Xiaobai's character, and I express my gratitude to the author's heroines and characters! [Love]

After reading it, I feel that it has great stamina and I haven't recovered yet. Although the author said that some readers think that Xiaobai is not as good as Anna, but in my heart, Xiaobai is the most perfect heroine. Xiaobai's obsession and persistence really touched me [crying] [crying] [crying], so grateful I feel that more than 100 chapters are too few, and I haven't read enough, but I am also very satisfied [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]. I hope the author will write more HP novels like this. I will definitely support the author. Come on, author [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's a wonderfully written book, and I was really moved by it. I only recently became obsessed with Harry Potter. I haven't even finished reading the original book, and I'm still looking up two movies, so I'm looking up names while reading this book. In the original book, I had a lot of feelings about Sri Lanka, so I was looking for a fanfic to comfort myself. As a result, I fell in love with the first fanfic. Not only did it give the original character a good ending, it was also very innovative and opened up a whole range of ideas. Of course, I guess the knife almost killed me, so much so that I was thrashing about on the bed. The writing is great, but I don't feel the venomousness of Mr. Si's words. After all, Xiaobai is so good, Mr. Sri Lanka can't bear to part with him [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] To sum up: highly recommended and worth watching

The writing is very good, the emotions are delicate, and the setting is novel. Highly recommended! ! ! This article is completely different from Anna. Xiaobai went from being a bystander to being involved in the game, but found out that this was a game set by himself in the parallel world. This foreshadowing is really deep. I believe in myself more than others. I think I have no better ally than myself. The description of Snape in this article is also more profound and complete. People can clearly see his indecision and his painful struggle. This is also another side that many people cannot discover. We must look at each character from multiple perspectives. The world is never black and white. While trying to catch the bright sunshine above his head, he couldn't leave the abyss that could make him stronger. Even if the world is dark, even if the sun doesn't understand what darkness looks like, it doesn't matter, because there is always a breeze around you. He is no longer alone. It is easy for people who have been living in the sun to chase the light, but it is difficult for people who have been stuck in the quagmire to get out. On the contrary, it is easier for them to fall into the darkness. No matter how muddy the swamp is, the sun will shine, flowers will bloom, and butterflies will fly. I think you should see these too. My world is divided into half of yours. "You too, my number one."

The author's writing style and settings are really good. When I watched it in the early stages, I just thought it was okay, but it gradually got better. Especially when the world settings were revealed, I was pleasantly surprised. I originally thought it was a time routine that I was used to, but I didn't expect that I was shallow and the author was on the next level. There is not much abuse. The relationship between Xiaobai and the professor is very natural and makes people feel soft. There are still knives, but it can only be said that family knives are fatal. The chapter where "she" saw her parents again was really unbearable. Fortunately, everyone in this world can have a bright future. This is our common wish [Sending Hearts]

Very, very beautiful. They really love the heroine. The one who is redeemed is the heroine and Severus. Actually, there are no knives. They are all very sweet. There are a lot of foreshadowings. I think it would be a kind of satisfaction to go crazy rationally and then get what you want. In fact, I also want to have a wedding episode. In fact, I have never liked the kind of procrastinating novels about fighting monsters like Voldemort. This one is very efficient in fighting monsters. Everyone is clearly arranged and very happy. It is a very happy ending. It is really great. Severus is the best. He had a happy school life. He didn't need to be a double undercover. He was walking on thin ice. He didn't join the Death Eaters. He was tortured. He had a lover who went both ways. It was really great.

It's really very beautiful! ! When I saw this paragraph [no matter which world he was in, Albus Dumbledore would never regret meeting Gellert Grindelwald that summer. I cried just watching it! ! ! !

I have always disliked reading very heavy novels. After all, I am a mortal and come here for the purpose of entertainment. Reading novels actually means that I hope to see content that is not so mortal and struggles to make me feel that the world is too heavy. This fanfic is thankfully not that heavy. The core idea is very attractive to me, I rarely see it, and the writing is not bad. The patron saint is great, and so am I. He is such a kind child. In addition, indeed, he must be his best ally. Despite its flaws, it's worth watching and I recommend watching it. Regarding the concept of time travel, especially the setting of traveling through books, which truly defines this world as a derivative world of books, I personally feel that it is well presented and is in line with the awareness that everything in our culture has its limitations. That is, since it is a derivative, it is not completely independent and free. There must be restrictions, just like when creating fan fiction, the original settings will be followed, and if the settings are changed, you need to be clearly informed. This is good. Of course, in the final novel, the protagonist's ideas and operations are very consistent with our spirit of "I can only conquer God, and I can't help but control my fate." Fine. Although I personally like it to be more relaxed and can't bear to be sad and sad, I still think it's good. Thank you author.

Delicate, foreshadowing, logical, the story of Xiaobai and Si Jiao will not only be in the story, but will also continue in the other world. Dear author, can you please stop being so harsh? I feel so sorry for Wei Sheng Bai in the other world, let alone Xiao Bai and Si Jiao.

Very good! Unlike other works that deviate too much from the original settings, it is simply a joy for fans! ! !

At the end, I realized it was the same author as the previous book. Just tell me why the writing styles are so similar! The ideas in the middle of this book are very novel and eye-opening. Noobs in another world, noobs in another world are making efforts. This one is that your novice is also working hard for the people around him. Bai and Anna are indeed different. As the author said, Xiaobai is completely human, and she feels more approachable. She has her own unique insights on things, which makes me feel like I suddenly understand. Overall this book is really good! Highly recommended! Furthermore, I hope the author can write more books. I can't read enough, I really can't read enough!

Sakura and Serpent are a destined pair I like the long history of this book, every bit of it, the daily plot, and everything it tells. Compared with the author's previous book, this book is indeed a little more salty, but I think it's just right. This kind of slow flow is what I yearn for, a real book that can touch Sever's heart step by step. He did not redeem himself from the beginning, but chose to go to school and experience the choice between Lily and the heroine in Severus. Finally, he firmly chose the heroine. It was influenced by his own love. I think this will be more appropriate. I like this book very much. It's not in vain that I watched it over and over again I hope Wei Shengbai and Severus can be together forever, forever and ever... Further than forever Slytherin will always be loyal to the people he loves

It's really good to watch. I like this hp very much. The character design and behavior of each character are very consistent with the original work, and there is nothing uncomfortable about it. In particular, Snape's inner emotional changes are described very delicately and not abruptly, and his little quirks are also very vivid, and the emotional lines are not forced, not protracted, and very sweet. The heroine has a very good character, she is great, stubborn, and touching. She is so lovable. The happy ending is quite beautiful, but it's too little. I really can't get enough of it. Will there be any extras? The wife is hungry. It's just that the first few chapters have a bit of a sour taste to them, but it gets better in the later chapters.

The author's writing style is really good. After watching Anna, I immediately understood it and I am very happy with my decision. Anna's moon and Xiaobai's breeze are both impressive. This book gives people a more gradual feeling, perhaps because of Xiaobai's humanity. The previous foreshadowings are all matched one by one. It can be regarded as a small knife. If all the parallel world Xiaobai's stories are written, it will be really a big knife. It's obvious that the author likes GGAD very much. I haven't seen such a good GGAD in a long time. When you fall in love like Anna, your two parents will see you [laughing]. Both books gave everyone a good ending [I almost cried].

It has been updated to Chapter 71. The plot logic and dialogue settings are not confusing. The secret love between the protagonists makes people want to read on. I hope the author will not be lazy and work hard!

It looks good, the male protagonist is awesome, the story line and emotional line are well written, but the update is very slow.

It's really super good-looking. I used to think that I wouldn't read articles about being in a relationship with Severus. Before, I thought he would definitely love Lily. This is really redemption, mutual redemption [crying]

Very interesting, I really like the plot. The emotional line is relatively average, maybe because I have such good feelings for the heroine, so I feel that Sri Lanka is not worthy of the heroine [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Although I actually like Sri Lanka very much. . . But the book is still very interesting

This is the first time I have read an article about the male protagonist Professor Snape, and I am surprised that the author can write it so well. This is the best one I have ever seen about the male protagonist Snape. There is no OOC, and every character is in line with the description of the original work, especially the original female protagonist. She is a typical idealist who is willing to sacrifice everything to keep her ideals from being shattered, even if it means risking her own soul. To be honest, I have never admired a paper man so much, not even Dumbledore has made me feel this way.

It's really good, forming a perfect closed loop. In fact, even if it was a dream, I was still very moved even after I woke up for a long time. It's great that the heroine can achieve this level. The connection between people and souls, souls and magic is indeed wonderful. I hope that every ordinary time can have a different kind of excitement.

My goodness, the structure, logic, language, and in-depth plot of this book are really great. And there is very little OOC, and in the end it creates a lot of different ideas, which is worth watching [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

Ahhhhh, it's so well written! ! ! I like Xiaobai very much. Dumbledore's evaluation of her in the article is really apt – "What a crazy and sensible, gentle and stubborn child." Compared to the previous confusion and struggle, I personally prefer the content of the heroine helping little Harry after success. Maybe it is the more relaxed atmosphere after the victory is in hand (don't hate it if you don't like it, thank you). In short, it is a great book. I am going to read another one by the author [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I love it so much! The original plot is great, and the author's writing is also great. It's rare to write such a mature article in Tomato! The emotional line is also well developed, not too abrupt or awkward. The heroine is a proactive type, but she will have the temperament of a Ravenclaw scholar. The whole book is on the sweet side, with a bit of a knife edge, but I felt more shocked. The only regret is that Draco is barely mentioned. I've fallen in love with Sri Lanka ever since!

Nice! The author wrote it really well, and the part where he revealed the origin of the heroine Goldfinger and the knife was so shocking. All have good endings except for the villain. The heroine's eyes are both foreshadowing and blessing, with a knife in the middle. The heroine is amazing, and the love between her and Severus is very touching. It's a bit regretful that I didn't see the two of them get married and have children (the author didn't write it). It would be great if there were extras about marriage and life after marriage.

Wuwuwuwu Xiaobai is really as gentle as the breeze, and the characters in the book are all very good, especially for her obsession, she will sacrifice her own soul at all costs, and she also wants to bet on a happy ending for everyone [crying] She is really too tired, but fortunately everything has a good outcome. Xiaobai, you can finally rest and have a good sleep.

The author's imagination is so big, it feels like it has its own system. The logic is very smooth in HP fan fiction. Many foreshadowings in the front are completed later, and there is also a very logical way to change the original plot. Cp is a Sri Lankan teacher, their relationship is also very smooth, they don't fall in love suddenly, the heroine does not lick, she has her own persistence and her own destiny. Overall, a great article.