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It's really exciting. Compared with other Lolo Adventures fan novels, this novel has a much larger world view, and the descriptions are also more detailed, including level battles. It's not bad at all, the author is great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍 🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Come on! ! ! More chapters! ! ! Currently about 100 chapters in, the strength status of Pig's Knuckle is: Red Star C level, corps leader, about 70,000 elites + 200,000 recruits One of my subordinates is Chuanliu, directly under the guard captain, D-level awakening. Second subordinate: Xuan Yao, adjutant and leader of the First Banner, D-level awakening, with rough and fine characteristics. Three of His Men: Feng Yi, leader of the Second Banner, D-level awakening, characterized by strategy Four of His Men: Gold or something, leader of the Third Flag, D-level awakening, with brave characteristics Five of His Men: Weird, leader of the fourth flag, D-level awakening, characteristic of being ruthless and not talking much. Sixth subordinate, I forgot the name, the leader of the fifth flag, D-level awakening, characterized by strategic vision.

It doesn't look like a novice novel. The characters are vivid and even better than the original. Unlike other fanfics that simply write about the adventures of Lolo, this book obviously has the feature of "war", so it is more to my liking. I hope the author will continue to work hard and continuously improve his level. The technology in this book seems to be related to the industrial revolution. Is it possible to create a Red Army or something?

It's okay, the troop sources are reasonable, the level upgrades are clear, and the character plots are quite good. It is recommended that some restrictions be added to later levels, just like in Taoism. If you want to upgrade after reaching a certain level, you need to break through the restrictions, but there are dangers.

How should I put it? This book should be a relatively good one among fan works. Other systems just send hundreds of thousands or hundreds of thousands of soldiers, or generals, which looks disgusting. This book is relatively better. The combat power is not broken, and the plot is reasonable. It is very enjoyable to read. I hope it won't break down in the future (ﾉД`) At the same time, I have to add more updates, it's not enough.

Overall, it's pretty good. Some of the details are quite delicate. I just feel that the protagonist's growth rate is a bit slow. What about the part where the King of Robots appears in the back? Should I write it in detail?

A rare Luo Luo Adventures (Martial War Dao) fan novel. The characters are flesh and blood, and there are basically no poisonous points. The author's second world view is more reasonable and basically logically self-consistent. Among the Wu Zhan Dao (Luo Luo Adventures) fan fiction, I only represent my personal opinion that it is a well-deserved first-class novel.

Very good, ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ Keep working hard, keep at it, don't be a eunuch! ! ! Come on😊, keep updating (づ ●─● )づ The character creation is really good, affectionate and righteous (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ Looking forward to the follow-up content, come on! The author's writing is quite good. Most of them are about the adventures of Luo Luo. There are very few about the martial arts. Although the plot of the original work is similar, the characters in the martial arts are more handsome (๑> <๑) The Adventures of Lolo kinda. . . It looks so crude [laughing]

It's very novel, the writing is good, the characters are normal (I haven't seen the character's character collapse), everyone's IQ is still intact (on the basis of maintaining the character), and the protagonist's outlook on life is still intact. It's a good book and worth reading.

Well, the author's writing is pretty good, but the endless narration and too many adjective modifications are confusing. It doesn't mean that the words I wrote have depth. Enough is good, and it's better to be less clear. There are also three or four sentences that are really painful to read into one sentence. Many of them are inverted sentences (not sure), which makes it even more uncomfortable to read. Maybe it's because of the reasons I mentioned above. It took me four full days to read more than 30 chapters. I was really reading it seriously, so I took my time. However, these chapters gave me the feeling that it was like a year, and I briefly read them later and found that they had no impact at all. Oh my god, I feel like this for the first time in my life. The writing is obviously good, but I can't even read it. Many times it takes me a long time to read a line of words. I want to roughly "translate" the author's meaning with my thoughts. Of course, I may be exaggerating! There is also a passage in the book that many people say is awkward. I think it is because the passage is very complicated and may not be what the author really meant. The words are a bit cliche. It would be great if the author can write as he wants. If all the above are just for the sake of word count, I will not say it. In terms of details, whether it is combat details or dialogue details, it is very rough. The description of the characters' emotions is not good but a bit full. The author is still great. After all, he is a newbie. I hope the author can stick to this path. Come on, author. I hope xdm won't scold me, it's all based on my feelings. (No malicious intent) [Like]

It's really the most immersive and enjoyable fanfic I've ever read among Lolo Adventures! The war was really vividly described, and when I was watching the drama, I was really upset about the black armored beasts [crying] The author worked hard to code the words, and I am sure [please update][please update] Good-looking, really good-looking. Keep following me.

The better category is not watery. I feel that the protagonist should not be too powerful. Small sections can be lowered, but large sections should be smaller next time. Electric cars cannot be faster than motorcycles. I use metaphors. I don't mean anything else. Come on [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] Dear author, come on, it's just a bit lacking. There's another problem. The energy city is built next to magma. You can fly in or out by flying or on a bridge. It's impossible to have no people at all in the war. Then you can take down any beast tribe. You can only enter from the front. If there are people above, you will see people. Come on [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

I love you so much, author. I have read so many books and finally found a good book besides God-Slaying. Come on! It would be better if it can be updated [Adoration]. Don't care about the ratings. Someone must be maliciously brushing up the ratings, so I give you a five-star review.

The writing is great, many characters have brains, and it has a strong flavor of Blue Fox. It's great, mainly because it's true. This book is really great. Why can't it be rated 9.5? Well

After reading so many fan stories, this one is still well written (the one with Wolf Howler is also okay, but I still think this one is better). The characters are well drawn, the levels are reasonable, and there are not too many brainless ones. At least I didn't complain about it. Looking at the follow-up development, the author should come on, just one request. The best thing is to write 25 hours a day, eight days a week, 32 days a month, and 367 days a year.

[Crying][Crying][Crying] It looks good. It's a rare combination of excellent characters and reasonable secondary design. The new characters will not feel inconsistent. Although the protagonist matches the beast tribe at the beginning, he will not take the initiative to kill the opponent for leveling (for example, killing an aboriginal to absorb experience or something, I have no impression of it/PS Laolong's subordinates). We meet in a war, and it is very reasonable to fight and kill. The three views are very upright and respect life. All Chefs will chase [cry][cry][cry] Yin Tie Ya is very logical and has no betrayal. Readers who like him can rest assured to read it. There is nothing to say except that the Battle Dragon King, Purple Dragon Beast, Blue Demon Scorpion is dead (although I am a dragon chef, I feel that these two are in a reasonable relationship, not to mention Scorpion, dddd)

It's very good. Unlike those robot books that have been recommended all the time, this one really has a plot, content and details. The writing style is also good, which makes people feel comfortable to read, and the secondary design and golden fingers are also very reasonable. I hope the author will work hard~

The story is exciting and reasonable, and the characters are well-described. Overall, it is one of the best among the martial arts fanfics. Although there are not many long-form fanfics about the martial arts, come on, author, I will follow you as long as you update it.

It's really good. I've only read The Adventures of Luoluo. Although I haven't read The Way of Martial Arts, I can imagine it based on the world view described by the author. It's the best fanfic of The Adventures of Luoluo that I've read so far. I hope the author can work hard and don't write about Beng or Eunuchs😄

Good! The protagonist values ​​emotions and is not like an outsider like the protagonists in other books. The plot is also super exciting and worth watching! [Love][Love][Please update]

The plot is exciting and full of personality! I think it's very good, it's new, right? It's not good enough! The pace is a bit slower!

To be honest, the writing is good, but the pace is a bit fast. I hope the author can control the pace. It is easy to collapse. In the early stage, it is almost invincible. I also got a little excited when I was writing the siege section. That sentence should have been quite passionate when I read it, but it changed as soon as I wrote it, which was a bit embarrassing. It is not easy for a 21-year-old college student to write this kind of article. I can only say that the author should study more and look forward to better articles [Like][Like][Like]

This book is better than all the martial arts or Luoluo adventures I have ever read. This book has novel ideas and is suitable for combat. It is definitely a new masterpiece this year, but... There are too few chapters in one day. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. I don't ask for more, just ten chapters in one day! Otherwise the author! Rocket launcher!! Firingーー!!!! ＿∧_∧＿＿＿/／ ≡(_ ( ･∀･)＿＿( ● (ニつノ｜｜＼ _⌒|｜｜ し_(＿) ｜｜ ¯¯¯¯

This is the best adventure book of Lolo I have ever read [Learned]

The author writes well! This is the real person I saw who rose from humble beginnings and led the troops to fight!

The best of the best! The author is very creative, has greatly improved the ambiguous system of the original work, and also given the armored beast clan a perfect ending. But there is also a disadvantage, that is, there are too few! The author doesn't even look at how many chapters you write in a day. Good guy, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. How can you sleep at your age? Get up and type quickly.

The writing is wonderful, I feel like my childhood is back ٩(๑òωó๑)۶ It's a great book, why doesn't anyone notice it? 😂, Cheers to the author💪

No matter what, no matter what! ! ! I was really spoiled. I read Teacher Xidong's book on the first day I entered the school. After reading it, I became picky about other books [crying][crying][crying] I've never seen it before, I've never seen it before, everyone has brains and logic, the original characters and designs, the second setting is reasonable, the protagonist's outlook is normal and has his own ambitions, and occasionally is not serious (this kid is wilted and bad - the old captain speaks). The first time he laughed was when Chi Liaoxing and Feng Yi physically heated up the sleeping Black Liger captain hahahahahaha There is nothing else to say except that the Dragon King and the Purple Dragon Beast are gone! Moreover (in a weak tone), the marshal was so "excellent" lucky, "good at strategy" and "loved his soldiers as much as his life", so it was understandable that he was justly beaten and laid down. (Marshal orz, don't hit me) I originally wanted to vote five stars when I saw the Blue Scorpion lying down, but I didn't expect that I forgot about it until now [laughing] That's right, that's right. Our Blue Scorpion was gone in the first fifty chapters, which is very satisfying (General Orz, don't hit me) The silver teeth are whitened! It's rare that someone didn't get killed, but this one has been perverted in silence for more than 100 years... No, he's not appreciating his talent, it's very logical! On the other hand, Marshal Hu Sha Tian's thirst for talents is also written super well! For example, he gritted his teeth and clapped his hands and applauded, mentally scolded the crazy orangutan for treating talents like cabbage, and was happy to see Jin Chayu. Until later, he did not write about his pure psychology and was silent when his subordinates asked "Someone died? Who died?" I probably guessed the marshal's thoughts! It's probably something like "Jin Chayu, when will your injury heal?" Hahahaha! Provide other branches: Blue Steel, who has been heartbroken over and over again, The pitiful armrest of Marshal Orangutan's seat is cracked, Chi Chi's six men were playing tricks (you were beaten and buried in the mountain by more than a dozen generals, you are also a role model for our generation), The friendship between Fengcheng and Chichi develops, Yin Tiejia's psychological changes (and his interaction with the Golden Claw God), The tiger is looking for talented people, The interaction between several war kings (the tiger and the eagle asked the orangutan for the token and the tiger gave the orangutan a big fight, I really stopped laughing) There are others that are fun too! It's okay for everyone to explore on their own! It seems like it only takes so long to read, but actually I started reading it in the first half of last year! (As a student, seeing such a good book with my guardian's mobile phone is almost my salvation.) * I have read the entire book several times. Except for the fight against the Twelve Tribes, I only read it once and I remember the other plots very clearly. I can also easily list the timeline! Especially when Feng Cheng and Ao Cheng appeared, I almost remembered the chapter names. I really liked their interaction with Chi Chi (the protagonist). I almost laughed out loud when they formed an alliance. The last moment of Proud City: Forming an alliance with the Beast Clan? What a good-for-nothing guy, Feng Wanli! Next moment: Hahahaha, Chi Liao Xing, if you don't mind, I, Ao Changkong, am willing to be your brother! * （. Jpg）（orz） * Before the fight with the Sacred Heart Alliance, I saw the mobile propulsion device (which can fly) and I knew that Lolo would show up in the later stage and I would complain. Just throw it, throw it, and the Crazy Split Ape can fly. (

There is a pattern, which allows me to see the divided world of martial arts. Instead of just inserting old plots

My evaluation: A good book. First of all, the writing style is very emotional. It is not a novice in terms of usage. It is full of ups and downs and exciting. The characterization of both the protagonist and the supporting role is profound. What kind of academic qualifications do you have, author? [Laughing] Let me help you [thinking]

Very exciting I have read more than a dozen novels about the adventures of Luo Luo. Most of them feel that it is a bit poorly written. . . But this novel gave me a different feeling I hope the author will not collapse and write as much as possible. As long as he is not dead, he will write until death.