There's Something Wrong with This School Beauty Girlfriend!

Come on, I feel like this book will definitely be popular and very few people will read it now. I feel that the love between the protagonist and the heroine is very sweet. I can only say that in the whole tomato, only the love between Zhang Ye and Bai touched me the most. Now Lin Qingyuan and Yiluo are also a natural couple that makes me shine. Love.

It's a rare urban single-female protagonist, it's really sweet! Sisters, come and watch Qingyuan duck with me! !

A very exciting novel, whether it is the main line or the emotional line, it is a win-win situation. 1. The plot is compact, fast enough, and ups and downs, but there are less descriptions of daily life and more descriptions of battles. Of course, this is not a shortcoming, and the division of combat power is a bit vague. This article only divides it. Talent levels are not divided into growth levels, so readers lack some intuition about combat power, and the presence of teachers in the whole text is basically zero. As a campus article, I think this is not very good, but it is not a disadvantage. There are a lot of pitfalls, and I need to fill them in quickly. 2 . In terms of character creation, I personally think it is somewhat lacking. First of all, the male protagonist is affectionate and considerate of others. This is quite good. After all, the whole text describes how the male protagonist grows up in a large amount of space. However, in comparison, the female protagonist is slightly lacking. The early stage is very good, but the length of the female protagonist is greatly reduced in the later period (about 200 pictures later). Basically, the male protagonist fights alone. I hope there can be more scenes later. In addition, although the female protagonist is said to have extended her lifespan, the deputy The effect does not seem to have diminished. I hope that there will be a setting in the later stage to solve the side effect of the heroine, and I also hope that as I grow up, the seal can be solved step by step. Of course, the following are all personal thoughts, and the second is the shaping of other supporting characters. To be fair, it is relatively poor, such as the teacher I mentioned in the first point. However, considering that the article itself is not long, this is unavoidable. This can be regarded as the reason why this book has such a low rating. 3. In terms of emotional drama, this is a very successful part of this book. The male and female protagonists go in both directions. However, it is a bit lacking in that the latter part seems to violate the label of dual strength. The combat power system itself is very vague, so the female protagonist's combat power gives me the feeling that she has been standing still, gradually falling behind the male protagonist. It is a pity that this book has come to the end. I hope that the male and female protagonists can face the final challenge together. Finally, here are some of my personal thoughts. Up to now, the final step should be to solve the darkness and get the truth. To be honest, I can see that the author wants to extend the life of this book, but I personally feel that instead of extending it all the time, it is better to finish it all at once. This way, it is better to invest in new books. After all, this is This book has been limited to this. Of course, don't criticize your personal opinions. Also, I hope this book will not be a bad ending. Although the rating is low, I really love reading it. I hope it can have a perfect ending. Finally, I hope to get a reply from the author and hope it will be helpful to readers who read this book!

It's great. In fact, I was very disgusted with this kind of writing that is all the same and has nothing new. But the person who wrote it was really good and quite interesting. At least it makes you want to watch and keep watching.

I am quite picky when reading novels, but this work gave me the feeling of being clean. I'm still young, so I should read a novel that is clean and refreshing. This novel has a wild imagination and a very youthful atmosphere.

I like Yiluo and Qingyuan. It's so frustrating. I came to the game even though I was sick. How important is it in your heart?

I read twenty-five chapters in one go. It's really a treasure novel! The style of college superpowers is well grasped [OK] The author's private goods and details are really interesting. What kind of cutie does this have to have so many whimsical ideas? [Shy] And after reading so many novels, I feel that this book has the best book closures I have ever seen. The ending of each chapter is so hooking that I almost couldn't stop! Moreover, the interaction between the protagonists in the book is very detailed and has a strong sense of substitution. The supporting characters are not stereotyped tools. Overall, it is very comfortable to read. Family members who like this type of writing can feel free to read it! [Please update]

Although this book is not too experiential, I can really feel that the author is deeply invested in it. The fake characters in the book seem to be standing in front of you alive. (The following is my personal experience. The content in the book provided me with new ideas. It allowed me to see the way forward. It dispelled the fog ahead for me.) Really really. I hope this book has a perfect beginning and ending and doesn't want it to end badly. Although I probably have a mental problem, if this book is unfinished, then there is probably something really wrong, right? [Laughing][smiling]

The male protagonist Qingyuan and the female protagonist Yiluo, one is as steady as fire and the other is cold, they get along very harmoniously.

I really want to have a blue friend like this, it looks so sweet It looks too high-spirited

The author's portrayal is meticulous and has a strong ability to control the environment and story. Each character is not rigid, but very rich, and the human nature is deeply described. The sense of immersion is very strong. Big thumbs up. A rare good book.

It's very well written, and it's easy to make sweets without a knife. But it may be that the previous thinking problem caused some problems with my perception of certain characters, but it does not affect the reading fluency. After all, everyone reads differently. On another note, it seems that the author of the current story line wants to describe the story of a young boy who slowly grows up. If you like this type of story, don't miss it.

Nothing to say! Except for the character problems of the protagonist, it is worth recommending Question: In a family without parents, how can a child be so dull and always blush when it comes to relationships [face covering] Another problem is the principal, the surname should not be Zhuge. I don't know why, the surname Zhuge is more suitable for a positive character. (Maybe it's because of the influence of the historical figure Zhuge Kongming) Index: Five-star recommendation Scored twice, what a turnaround [smile]

It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. I can only describe it as good-looking. I didn't plan to watch it originally. As a result, I couldn't control myself in an instant, especially on top. I really like every character in it. After reading the first half, I instantly felt better.

I like my domineering and flirtatious Yiluo, and her cute but awesome little boyfriend

Awesome⊙∀⊙! I like the characters of the male and female protagonists, the plot context, a bit thin and long-lasting, and the feeling of passion and blood. I like it very much [laugh][laugh][laugh] The author will continue to work hard [upvote][please update][love]

Similar to Rules and Ghost Stories, but good at martial arts and good-looking

It's super beautiful. Every character comes alive. Reading the novel made me excited and shocked. The author's writing style is so good that all the pitfalls are filled. I really like the shock this book brought to me, and I hope you all can enjoy it together when you have time. The story is fascinating.

It's a bit interesting, looks sweet, and very nice!

Updates are so slow! Don't waste my patience, it's really beautiful! I hope that the male protagonist can soar to the sky and be invincible. His ice powers are really cool~

A great subject matter, which is very rare in today's library. The content of the story is good and incomparably novel. I have added it to my bookshelf and will continue to read it.

An anti-routine, sweet and doting story about a single heroine~ I like it~ Come on and update it!

This book is beautiful to read, the characters are well drawn, and the structure is rigorous. What should be described is quite clear, and what should be omitted is also very clear.

This novel is excellent in terms of conception and framework, especially the brand-new structure system. It is beautiful. I give this book a five-star rating!

The writing style is relatively immature, and the dialogue is more obvious. The subject matter is quite good, keep up the good work.

I'll give you five stars. I just ask you to update faster. I'll give you a minimum value of five chapters a day. [Pouts]

Wonderful performance, perfect reasoning, five-star praise

It's real, the protagonist has a brain, this book is a treasure, and it's wonderful. This author is the first and only one I recommend. It would be a pity not to read it.

It's very good, but in terms of relationships, the progress is a bit fast. Five-star support, in vain~

The opening chapter is amazing, the ideas are interesting, and the rhythm is well controlled. The various weird stories in the book look very interesting.