Pirates: Two Fish-Fruit Phantom Beasts at the Beginning

The subject matter is novel and great. If I can go back to the ghost clan later and recruit some people with potential. Then, all the Devil Fruits obtained during the Rocks era were hidden, and there were one or two not-so-powerful phantom beast species, and then the ancient species were released. The pirates took off directly, and no one wrote about the ghost clan.

5 Stars, looking forward to bringing the aunt and the cute and cruel black beard in the future [laughing]

After such a long time, this is the most passionate Pirates fanfic I have seen. Every character has a soul and the image is three-dimensional. The protagonist is domineering and strong, it's really exciting to watch, and he also has a car, hehe. The taste has changed. It has changed since you started collecting green pheasants, and you are no longer decisive in killing them. I feel that the style behind it is similar to the original work, and it is like playing house. I don't understand what the purpose of collecting the blue pheasants is. If you don't help, what's the point of still forming gangs? There is no shortage of strong men. As long as the opponent's strong man dies, it means that your own strength has increased. Isn't collecting the blue pheasants just disgusting? A good and refreshing article, written by you into an infernal sense of déjà vu

It looks good. The subject matter is something I have never seen before. Great ps. Momonosuke must die.

The writing is so good, I would like to call you the orthodox sequel to One Piece [Adoration]! Oda is nothing! [Anger]

Personally, I think this is the best pirate novel I have read in the past two years. It can be seen that the author has his own understanding of the pirate world and related characters. This article is not a cool article, but incorporates many elements, including the breadth of the complex world of human nature, into it to form a unique pirate world, which is very worth reading. There are also some small suggestions. The protagonist is too strong and the protagonist may have too many women. Of course, these are just predicted development trends. Come on, author💪

The perspective is novel, but it's worth thinking about whether it will be unfinished.

This fanfic is different from other fanfics in that the protagonist is a pirate from the previous era, a native creature, not a time traveler, and knows some past events. Some readers say that the combat power has collapsed, but in fact the original work is messy to begin with, and the author is trying his best to pull it back and restore some of the combat power settings. The growth and death of the protagonists in the original book are not brainless. Some people say that the author is licking Sauron, but in my opinion, he is not. Sauron may seem to some people to be diligent, but in my opinion, Sauron is indeed very, very diligent, but his fighting talent and talent cannot be denied. Many of the settings in this book can actually be found in the original work or have some similarities, that is, regarding Sesel, probably because the original work is not just for adults, so some of them are not very obvious in the original work, but they are indeed too obvious in this book, but this enriches the content of the book. After all, the characters in the book are almost all adults, and they are pirates. It is normal to burn, kill and loot. I like this book very much. Of course, veteran fans of the original novel may not be able to accept some aspects of it, which is inevitable. Finally, I have to say, very good

The author's speed is five stars, and the writing is very good. I feel that the author is so humble. He keeps saying that his writing is not good [cover face][cover face][cover face][like][like][like][like][like]

Objectively speaking, the protagonist was well written in the early stage, but later on, the role of the protagonist was intentionally or unintentionally reduced a lot. It is okay to write other characters, but the focus should still be on the protagonist. Describe the protagonist more, and focus on the protagonist's first perspective. I have not said that I will not highlight other characters for you, but the focus is on the protagonist! ! ! Keep up the good work, author, I will always support you [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

This book is interesting to write. It's at its peak from the very beginning. It's awesome. It's awesome. There's no system. The phantom beast species it cooperates with are also the strongest in One Piece. They can go to the sky and go to the sea. Kunpeng is invincible in One Piece. When will I write a book about it? The species of forgiveness of Taichi Donghuang. Author Come on, keep blowing

It's very exciting. I really like the fighting part in it. The description of Lingling is also very humane. The plot of the food hunter is also very creative, but I don't know why it didn't write about the Tianlong people.

It's good-looking. I feel that the combat power is too great, but I still give the author a five-star rating! It was okay at first but then it jumped so much that I kept jumping while watching it. I hope the author wouldn't make it so jumpy. No, I'm jumping to watch, it's a mess

Although the ending is a bit hard to accept, it is really wonderful overall. The protagonist in the author's works is a reflection of the real pirate in my heart. It is the best pirate question I have read in recent years. Come on, author, waiting for your next book.

I want to say that the subject matter is very good and the characters are well drawn. It is a work that can become a masterpiece if it is written seriously, and it is still a masterpiece now. Some people can't stand it because they feel it's too cruel to treat the protagonists like the Straw Hats, or maybe it's because of problems with the character development of the protagonists. However, for a novel, if the author does not portray the protagonist in such an image that he is a character in the world of the novel, it will look very fake. So I think the author may be scolded by many people in this regard, but I like it very much. It makes me feel that the protagonist is a flesh-and-blood bastard in the world of pirates. The reason for giving one less star is that I like to see the clear-cut depiction of combat and the precise control of combat power. However, the author obviously only has a vague concept of the strength of combat power in this work. It is said that it is based on the original work, but it is a bit different from the original work. In general, I hope the author will work hard and will always support you as long as it doesn't end badly.

I wrote all the plots I wanted to see, please come on the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I really like it, it's much better than those who are crazy about Luffy. The pirate era should be full of blood and killing. Luffy is not like a pirate but like an adventurer exploring new worlds. Anyway, the beast god Caesar is the eternal god

No matter how it is written, the author's attitude in this book is really good, and the plot design also seems to have taken a lot of time and thought. It has his own ideas in it, which is better than the same template novels repeated over and over again.

This book is well written. It is one of the best in the Pirates category among Tomato books. I have read more than 500 chapters. Many of the contents are made up by the author, but they are quite reasonable. However, some of the emotional scenes of the supporting characters are a bit difficult to handle. Overall, it is good.

Harmful! The book is good to read, but Sengoku died. When Garp returned to the headquarters, he felt very pitiful. Roger, Ace, and Sengoku were all gone, and he was the only one left. Although I know that this novel is written by the author, there is an indescribable feeling in my heart. The author writes well!

It's well written. Caesar is flesh and blood. It's better if you give more details [smile][smile][smile]

I finally found a novel that doesn't follow the story line of Luffy and his gang. Compared to the original Pirates, I personally feel that the depictions in this novel are more realistic and more in line with my taste. The pirates in which Luffy is the protagonist are fairy tales, while the pirates written by the author are real life.

You can eat it with confidence. Let's give a brief introduction. The setting is strong enough and the protagonist's humanity is very strong. So far, it seems to be very close to reality, and the plot is also very close to reality. The protagonist is not coy. In short, it conforms to the logic of normal people. You can watch about 30 pictures first to taste it. It is really good.

The book is quite good, and the writing and details of the book are quite good. Come on, the author. I hope this book will continue to be written. I will continue to follow it. [Top post][Your fine taste][Your fine taste][Your fine taste]

Very good. I am a pirate who is decisive in killing and doesn't want to lose any family members. I still have some chapters that I haven't finished yet.

Wonderful, very good, keep writing. The setting is very good, and the space battle is also very exciting. It can be written by directly integrating the world of Naruto, One Punch Man, and Dragon Ball.

It is the most perfect setting of One Piece that I have ever read. After reading the One Piece chapter, the story is very exciting, and most importantly, the setting is very good. It is the best setting I have ever seen.

This is a novel that tells the protagonist that being a pirate is not just a house act.

The writing is good, but as a Sanji fan, the author feels that it is too exaggerated to say that Sanji is ten thousand times better than Yamato. Now, what's ridiculous is that you can only get a high score of 9.5 If you write about Navy.

It's very good, but the writing is a bit lacking.