Shock! the Third Generation of the Dark Lord Named Dumbledore

(Personal opinion only) First of all, I think this book is a treasure I discovered among many HP articles. The introduction attracted me in. The beginning with Hermione was really awkward. I don't know if this is why some people were discouraged. But I continued to read later. Some people think that the protagonist is like Long Aotian. He is so powerful that it makes it look like a cool novel. But with the blessing of the two bloodlines of the Black and White Demon King, this is inevitable. The character of the protagonist also has the shadow of the two, and there is nothing wrong with it. The current development of the plot can be said to be very good. In addition, some readers can provide suggestions if they have no female protagonist, two male protagonists, or CPs that support their own addiction. A large part of the role of book reviews is to listen to the readers' opinions. But some people say that it is not the type they want to watch, so they give it a low score or one star. Is it too much? It's strange that the rating is high. Most of the book reviews are discussions about the protagonist, but some of them are really hard to read. Even if the book's rating is low, I still don't want to see the treasure buried. I'm taking it back, I'm taking it back, some problems still can't be corrected, except for the male protagonists who are related to career in the later period, all the others are pretty much broken, especially the female characters.

I'm`still`my`different`fireworks. (I am still me, different fireworks.)

Can the author not have a female protagonist, let the story leave its original traces, and then freely imagine the places that were not explained in the original story [Punch Out]

I quite like this book, but it would be better if there was no female protagonist [shy]

Come on! But you must not have a female protagonist [laughing awkwardly] You can have a male protagonist [laughing]

No heroine! ! ! Is it okay to have no heroine? ! [Angry] As a Palace fan, I don't know why those people rated it so low [Angry], except that the relationship between the male protagonist and Hermione at the beginning was not well written [Thinking], and the author also said it later, but it was really well written in the later stages [Admiration]! ! ! It's basically a career. Although the rating is low, this book is really good! ! ! If you don't watch it, you will regret it for the rest of your life! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Love][Blowing Kisses] Now I am writing well in the later period, and I am not brainless. There is a book next to me that I gave up long ago because it collapsed... The author is so awesome, come on! ! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Looking forward to the next plot, and finally I want to ask the author how many chapters he plans to write. There are already three chapters now, and I can't put it down [Adoration] [Love] @

It's very good-looking, the male protagonist is super cool%>_<%, and his magic power is very powerful. The most important thing is that he is the son of Grindelwald and Dumbledore [Adore]. I just feel that Hermione's notes in the front are more valuable than Professor McGonagall's notes. It's a bit strange?_?, Everything else is very good.

Personally, I think it's very beautiful, and I really like that the heroine is Hermione.

Gekkot next door has fallen out of favor, I'm here to find you [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] I don't have time to read it since school started, so why has the volume of King of Volume been removed from the shelves? Wow woo woo [cry][cry][cry]

The male protagonist at the beginning gives people a bohemian feel. I personally think he is handsome and the content is pretty good. Some of the settings are messy, such as Dumbledore's hair turning black when he was young. However, I didn't understand the explanation later on. In terms of setting, it is not clearly stated that there is no female protagonist. The male protagonist has fallen apart from the original character since he met Hermione. He is a bit of a licker. Hermione also has a broken personality. It is strange that she has a crush on the male protagonist. Let's say she is the heroine. The author did not clearly say "yes", and the relationship between the two is ambiguous. Later, the male protagonist and Grindelwald recognized each other, and a very good-looking maid "Mary" appeared. She was very polite to the male protagonist at first, doing what a servant would do, calling the male protagonist "little master", but then she became rude and rude. The following is a partial copy of the content. [Mary reluctantly carried out the order, but the other party still did not give up the idea of taking advantage. She drank the porridge water from the bowl into her mouth, and then completed the feeding in an extremely criminal way. Then he looked at Augustus (the male protagonist) with an extremely provocative look, and his eyes revealed, "You have to experience it if you want, little brother." This is an extremely provocative meaning. ]

The protagonist is more attractive if he is cold and decisive (not that he is impersonal). Don't be too doting on the female character (otherwise it will feel like a dog licking and the protagonist will appear weak). You can try to remove it from the system (of course, if it is already written, try to downplay the system as much as possible. This system feels a bit redundant). Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it (´ ⌵ `) The protagonist in Chapter 53 behaves like a dog-licker. The girl agrees to anything and is so disgusted to death₍₍ ( ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧ ₎₎ (The five-star evaluation will be directly changed to one star. If there are no negative points, I will give negative points🤮)

I have been following this book for a long time, but I just want the male protagonist to play the career line, and forget about the emotional line, right? If it does happen, I would rather it be a male protagonist and another male protagonist. After all, a son follows his father's footsteps. Author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's so beautiful. Too many emotional lines will affect the excitement of the plot, but the appropriate emotional lines will make people like it. The protagonist is strong but not greasy. The author writes it very well (✪▽✪). Some plots and sentences make people laugh. It is a masterpiece of Harry Potter fan fiction. Big support for the author.

Augustus and his brother Julius are a bit naughty! The logic of this book is very good. I hope the author will update it quickly today without getting stuck. I wish you a Happy New Year ^ω^ I really like this book (//∇//) and I hope you will continue to work hard. Come on (ง˙o˙)ว

It's a great book, but I don't know why the score was pulled down to 6.6. Is there someone maliciously pulling down the score? The author must work hard to persevere, but it would be better if this book had no female protagonist or two male protagonists. ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿)

Very good. Creating this protagonist satisfied my long-standing regret for Dumbledore. My family was lost, I was separated from the love of my life, I gave my life for justice, and I died alone - Dumbledore comes first.

I have finished reading them all, but I skipped reading because it was really difficult for me to read more than 600 chapters in one go. What I said is my personal experience and is for your reference only. I don't care what kind of cp I get, as long as it's not evil. In the early days, the male protagonist had an affair with a little girl. I didn't care about the ambiguity. However, he had an affair with two little girls at once, so I couldn't accept it. But I like the subject matter of the article very much. I I didn't have any other stories to read, so I continued reading. The latter part became less ambiguous (about a hundred chapters or so), leaning toward no cp. Finally, "Julius" appeared. I didn't notice anything at first, but in the end, I discovered, holy shit, there are two male protagonists. Because there is no cp in the introduction, when I read it I thought it had no heroine or heroine Hermione. This is a poisonous point and can be easily dissuaded. Because of the issue of ambiguity with girls I mentioned above, and the fact that many characters are a bit OOC (I didn't feel it, I looked okay, but many people said OOC), many people gave up after reading about sixty or seventy chapters at the beginning. This is true, I think about it carefully, but I just read it, but I can't think of anything (the zombies opened my brain and returned in vain) The feeling of the whole article is that I wrote this article because I was interested in HP. The first few dozen chapters gave me a really amazing feeling, but there was no inspiration in the middle. Chapters from fifty to more than a hundred were very ordinary. At this time, I can see that the writing is okay, but there is no inspiration, there are not many interesting points, and it is unremarkable. But there is no mention of whether there is a "female protagonist" in the middle. Instead, the writing is pretty good, with good logic and a fun plot. Then I felt that I don't know how it ended. A "Julius" came out, and then the two male protagonists were written. I wrote hundreds of chapters to match the whole article and then finished it. But I have to say that the best feeling about the entire article is the first dozen chapters and the two male protagonists at the end. The writing is really good. If you want to read more, you can just read the back. Because of the HP background, you can understand it even without reading the front. Finally, to summarize, the writing style is okay, but it has some poisonous points, and in a novel with almost 700 chapters, there are quite a lot of poisonous points, but they are just big and small. Moreover, in fan fiction, it is inevitable that some characters will be OOC. I think the most toxic thing is the ambiguity with the little girl in the early stage. I can accept the rest. Anyway, it will be over after watching it. There are still other highlights. (Some people say that in the early stage, the male protagonist is still young, so the ambiguity is ambiguous. Why is the male protagonist young and the author also young? Sometimes I can't accept falling in love at the age of twelve or thirteen, so I was almost persuaded to quit at that time. I also had to bite the bullet and read it because I didn't have any books to read.) If you don't have a book to read, you can read this one. It's almost like reading directly from the second volume. At least in my opinion, the writing is not wrong, and this subject has a large audience (the subject of Dumbledore and Grindelwald's children) And for the author's writing style and this subject matter that I like, I give five stars, because whether it is Dumbledore and Grindelwald or Augustus and Julius, the emotional lines are all very well written and very delicate! ! ! It deserves three exclamation points (gives me the impression that the author is extremely good at writing about emotional entanglements. In comparison, the plot is mediocre) (I forgot to mention that the emotional entanglement between Snape and Lily is also very well written. There is no direct love-love, it is really just "entanglement". I really like the delicate and gentle writing style. Reading is really like bathing in the spring breeze.) (The hero resurrected Lily, but in exchange for Snape's love and affection. I won't go into the details, because I didn't read too carefully) This is just my personal experience. I basically only read fifty chapters out of every hundred, so I may not have noticed any poisonous points or anything else. You can say whatever you want. But I still have to say that the author's emotional writing is really good! !

I am very satisfied with your writing of this book. The author is great. Also, can you serialize the remaining two books you wrote as soon as possible? The names are really tempting to me. I want to read them.

No? Those who wanted to see Hermione's cp and those who wanted to see without cp were silent...

I feel like the author has changed the outline. The first fifty-five chapters are just a routine of the second generation ancestor Long Aotian. Later, it gradually became better and less exaggerated. Overall, I am glad that I have read it all the way. Building a career is the real thing~ (You can swish through it in the front, but it's exciting in the back)

I really like it, I hope the author will stick with it [crying]

This book is still very beautiful. Is it better to be beautiful alone without Hermione.

One of my favorite Harry fanfics. I laughed out loud when I saw Harry and Draco dressing up as women. Later, when I saw the protagonist talking to Zheng Bledo, I also felt a plot that I couldn't see in other Harry fanfics. I really liked it!

It's super good-looking. I hope Onii-chan and my brother are a couple.

It's very interesting. Although one chapter is very poisonous, the other chapters are very exciting. They basically have everything I want to see! It also made up for a lot of regrets, especially Harley! ! ! Harry becomes Harley! ! ! Awesome! ! !

We are all used to seeing happy endings in novels, but we forget that regrets are the norm in reality.

Augustus is a tyrant, cool and handsome, he refreshes the perception of the protagonist group, and brings together two fathers. The original title was originally called "The Forbidden Son of the Black and White Demon". I really like it! ! !

If there is a female protagonist, I hope the author can carefully consider the choice of female protagonist. I don't really agree with Hermione and Daphne. The sense of cp is not strong, and the protagonist also said that he is not interested in eleven-year-old girls. If possible, I hope to have an original female protagonist.

It's okay, but without cp, is it equal to 1v2? And is Ron really transformed by the devil? Originally, I came here just to compete with GGDA, so it doesn't matter if there are any flaws. Come on! Author! ＼(`Δ')／

The setting is very good, but there shouldn't be any emotional lines. Let's take a look at it before making an evaluation. It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away