Azur Lane: Commander's Code of Conduct

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I think this is an excellent Azur Lane novel, at least the most exciting Azur Lane novel I have ever read! But it's a bit uncomfortable if the updates don't show up. Also, I hope that I can get more than 100 million points every day [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on! I only played the game after reading your novel, but I feel like I'm quite European, 15 six-stars a week hahaha (ಡωಡ) hiahiahia

High-quality Kanji fanfic on Old Tomato!

I caught up on the latest chapter in one breath! I can clearly feel that Crystal Palace must be opened, but it is not a clumsy and mindless Crystal Palace novel. The author has obviously put great thought into the evolution of the world background, plot conception and character control. The work has the potential to become a god. I look forward to more updates!

A very good Bilan novel, with a sense of immersion. The slow plot can effectively prolong the viewing experience for daily novels. However, looking at it now, I suggest that the author try to expand the scope of activities with ship girls. I have also read other stories about ship girls, and appropriately reduce the scenes where a group of ship girls appear, and write more content about alone actions with ship girls, and don't excessively spend time alone at night. The ship girls can all talk about their own treasures. It doesn't feel so good to focus too much on the night. During the day, you can go on a date with a single ship girl. While sublimating the relationship, you can also add some small jokes. I don't know if the author has read "Guide to Survival in the Guarded Mansion North". Although it is written by Ship R, it is really interesting to write about daily life. If you haven't read it, I suggest you read it. Of course it takes up too much time. Finally, I really like this novel and hope it will go to the end beautifully. Come on! Come on! Come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

So pretty! A rare Azur Lane novel

Let me make a small comment: There are currently very few books on this book. I have to support it. I, Da Bilan, can still fight again! The pace of this book is slow. The first part focuses on the relationship between the commander and the ship girl. (I have finished reading the first volume) and I haven't read the second part since the establishment of the port area. The characterizations so far are pretty good, keep up the good work!

Good books, truly good books do not need words to embellish them The plot gives you really swinging emotions. Just now, I felt very heavy, and then suddenly I felt boki. Then, I laughed with relief. I like this feeling very much.

To be honest, it's a very good Bilanwen.

The writing is good. The quality is much better than that of certain AI writers.

The author's writing style is very good. Don't give up just because of the subject matter. This book is really good. The characters and environment are described very delicately and comfortably. The content is also very good. If you like farming articles, you can read it [Like][Like][Like]

Don't ask for anything else, just write it down smoothly. Don't be too aggressive. The Goddess of Kanniang has already left a shadow in my heart. T_T. There is no need to write about the world view too grandly. If you write it shorter, you can write extras. If you write it longer, don't dig holes. Give yourself and this book a way to survive.

It's good to read. I went back to Azur Lane after reading this book. I can drive a little faster and the details are well described. Let's give it five stars. Although the author already wants TJ a little bit, many of the descriptions really poked me. I won't say anymore, I will marry Ron soon, and my sister will tear me apart [licking the screen]

The writing is very good. I don't want other Bilan fans to see me confused and uncomfortable. I give you five stars. Come on, author, Bilan will last forever.

Grandma, there are too few Azur Lane books in Tomato. This book is good, but I don't know if I can add Yukikaze (whisper)

Finally there is another Azur Lane book on Tomato

This is the first time I read Bilan's novel, and I find it quite interesting, but there is also an obvious shortcoming. Each ship has its own setting. If you need to complete the character setting of the previous ship girl before each construction, then this novel will be difficult to write, because there are nearly 500 main characters, which is too difficult to control.

This book is really very rare. There are very few fan fictions about Azur Lane, and there are even less well-written novels. Come on, author! ! !

After watching it for so long, I suddenly remembered that I haven't commented yet. Let me talk about the conclusion first. I have no favorite ship girl novels. I started following it from around chapter 100, and then the updates became slower and slower, and then I stopped updating for a whole year. I cleaned the bookshelf several times, but I couldn't bear to clear out this book. Just because the author said that no matter how busy you are, it will never be unfinished. Fortunately, I finally waited. Although the updates are still very slow now, and they are constantly interrupted, but it doesn't matter, I believe the author will definitely come back.

What can I say about this book? [Pause face] It's very good, but I was a player in the early version. I got a Glory at that time. After that, Mrs. Glory's strength was gone, so I quit the game and went back to play Ship R. It was a bit familiar. A novice said that reading it with the illustrated book was a bit unimmersive [laughing and crying], but it's very good.

The writing is pretty good, but a bit lacking. I hope the author can work harder and write more.

Brother cute! Musashi Poike, everyone graduated, didn't they? I graduated from 20 and came to show off [laughing]

For me, it should be Tomato's best Azur Lane novel. Unfortunately, the update is too slow. I have been reading it for too long and I have forgotten the previous plot. I will read it again.

I feel like it's well written, but it's a pity that the author is half-dead now. Please support me every time the author updates.

The description is quite good and the writing is good. The descriptions of things like Dajiajia and others are basically the same as in the game, there is nothing particularly OOC about them. It's good, but the update is too slow (but understandable), I hope it doesn't have eunuchs.

Author, update soon! It's a very nice book. The author's writing skills are very good. Even a newbie like me, who has just been in the book for 7 days, can read it with gusto. Don't you understand? Come and see! This will give the author the motivation to update!

Other than being a little annoyed, everything else is fine

There are only two books I've read: "Bilan": "Space Captain" and "Your Come on" author.

I seem to have found the original idea After reading some novels and adding knowledge, I discovered that I had expelled the three pioneers (Xilu, Lafite, and Mang) from Enterprise, Nagato, and Unicorn (all married). Huh?