Xiuxian: I Have a Spirit-Gathering Bead

The writing is quite good, and having the Soul-Gathering Pearl is also an opportunity. I suggest you not to be too concerned about it, and not to write it as a cool article.

I hope I can keep writing! Thank you for your support!

The writing is quite good, but I feel like something is missing. I should learn about medicinal herbs, and is there a communication group? Also, the writing is too bland. This should have something to do with the villain, the events should be written and the protagonist is plotted, or there are some opportunities for the protagonist to have disputes with other people, etc. . .

It's not bad, but it also has its shortcomings, that is, there is a little more writing about other people. I think it should be shortened a bit to speed up the plot. Otherwise, not only will the plot seem draggy, but it will also affect the reader's reading experience. Also, the writing style is indeed a bit immature.

Very good! After watching too much indiscriminate killing, Xiao Yong feels very cute [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Xiao Yong does not take the initiative to harm others, but he is not the Holy Mother at all. He has revenge, complains, and trustworthiness. I hope Xiao Yong can ascend to the spiritual world as soon as possible! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This book is okay. I have some suggestions from the author. Can't you reorganize the training system and create your own training system? I would like to give a suggestion. I think the first step in cultivating immortality is to introduce Qi into the body. This should be the most difficult. How many acupuncture points of the human body are affected by the warming and nourishing spiritual energy? In my opinion, realm is spiritual power. The most important thing in cultivating immortals is to study a set of immortal practices by yourself. Immortal thinking is what modern netizens need. Treasure hunting is also the same old thing. After many years in the secret realm, my elder brother's style has become dull and unattractive. I apologize for the bad writing, but your literary talent is not bad. I hope you can compile a worldly immortal cultivation system like the three-body system and create a generation of pioneers.

Well, it's not from Wulinggen. It's a five-star review.

It's good, there's nothing poisonous about it, and the heroine isn't very decisive. If you like to read cool stories to show off, don't read it. It's good, but it's a little less.

I like the rhythm of this novel very much. There are also non-fiction and mortal novels. Those who are always in their 18s and 20s building foundations and forming pills are so boring.

The writing is very good, the protagonist is no longer a loser, the writing style is very good

It's very good-looking, very good-looking. After watching "The Legend of Immortality" for so long, this "The Legend of Immortality" can be ranked in the top five in my mind. It's very good-looking. The protagonist is capable. He has wisdom, strength, heart, and a bit of a holy mother's heart, but it's not that serious. It's quite interesting, but it's too short and not enough for me. I hope the author will update it soon.

It's pretty good. You don't have to go out to fight and kill and be chased, ridiculed, and slapped in the face. You don't just meet all kinds of beauties on the roadside, accept genius disciples, and go to the monster forest to receive divine pets. It's good to see this kind of plainness. The above ones are all disgusting.

It looks good, not too Long Aotian, and stable

Step by step, worth watching [eating melon]

The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow and the plot becomes a bit boring later on. Everything else is okay.

This novel is very slow-burning. If you can endure it, you can read it slowly and appreciate it slowly. And this novel has very good advantages, which can get rid of other shortcomings that other novels bring you. 1. Even the most popular supporting characters can be killed as long as the plot requires it. 2. The ultimate mortal, Han Li is here, and he has to take it one step at a time. 3. There is no crazy plot, and what the protagonist gets is almost standard for ordinary geniuses in different novels. As for why this is an advantage? (Because I can't think of it. [Laughs crookedly])

The writing style is really good. Unlike other Long Aotian-style immortality novels, the protagonist is quite immortal and mediocre. The back is very average

It's great, come on, author

The writing is good. The reason why the rating is not high is not because the writing is not good, but because on the Tomato platform, cool writing is king. It does not mean that the work is not good. I hope the author can work hard!

This novel is very good

It's pretty good. Why are there so few people? Tomato slow-burning articles are really waiting to die. There are even fewer authors like this, the pace is slow, they are just trying to endure it, if they can't endure it any longer, there will only be fewer and fewer people just GG [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

The writing is very good. I love reading it very much. Why are there so few updates? The writing is very good. I love reading it very much. Why are there so few updates?

The wording is exquisite, the plot is not obtrusive, and it is fascinating. No clichés, no routines, no pretense. It's just that there are less updates. I'm worried that one day I'll stop updating.

Compared with Tomato's other human-like novels, this novel is quite good and can be regarded as a good book.

The author's writing style is sophisticated and the plot is exciting. Five-star praise for the time being. Come on😊

The writing is quite nice. After all, I am no longer a fire refiner. I have never participated in a large auction since I got to Jindan. The good things are all obtained from outside. The protagonist does not resort to any means to revise it like in other novels. Nowadays, no one writes even remotely decent novels, and all of them are dark. This one is quite nice. The score given is too low.

The plot is really good and quite in line with my taste, but there are too few updates. I have saved it for more than a month, which is not enough to read in one day. Is the author still here? Your updates are too casual. You haven't saved 10 photos in a month. . . Are you still writing?

It's average, but nothing serious. It's just that there are spots of ink sometimes.

Coding is hard work! Pay attention to rest and drink more water [laughing]

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on