Reborn as Haruno Sakura

The direction interests me, but there are typos, different word order, and the logic is confusing in some places. When the protagonist asks the supporting character questions, he only asks questions, and there is no corresponding plot for subsequent answers. Instead, it describes the protagonist going home to check the panel or take a shower.

To be honest, the author, you have so many typos and wrong sentences that it is difficult to understand what you are going to write. I hope you, the author, can read it again after you finish writing, otherwise the book will be really difficult to become popular. I feel that the setting of this book is still very good, that is...

In the article about changing marriage, I ran away first, and obviously went to flirt with Hinata, and then married Naruto. The author has read too many peerless she-mon development systems or other two evil books.

Feeling a bit out of touch

There are many typos, which is understandable. Is this like picking up other people's past all the time? Trouble comes from the mouth, assassins should know this, right? If you want to make it a masterpiece and a masterpiece, typos are a mistake that shouldn't be made. The protagonist is not very smart either. He gives people a kind of God's perspective (?) Which is very strange. He always reveals to others whether he knows something or not, which makes him look stiff.

Five-star praise sent.

It's great୧( ⁼̴̶̤̀ω⁼̴̶̤́ )૭It's true that many people don't like Sakura very much_(:з∠)_It's rare to see a non-sexual Sakura as the protagonist. Sakura's character may not be very friendly to the two-dimensional world, but it's actually very common to show it. _(:з∠)_Mingying cp can be regarded as the end of Nutuo's dream.

Except for a few typos, everything else is pretty good. I hope I can stick to this pair of CPs. Don't stop updating.

The order is all wrong!

I feel like the plot is a bit confusing, but the writing is good! (ง •̀_•́)ง