Rebirth**********

Hehe, there is no doubt that I am here to urge the author to update the book. I think the book is very good, but the writing style is still lacking. When I first read it, the sense of substitution was not very strong and it was a bit awkward. I hope the author will work hard! (No malicious intent, please don't complain. Also, does the author have a system setting? I saw the system in a certain chapter.)

This is my first time writing a prehistoric novel, and I didn't write it well. I'm not quite sure of its poisonous points, so I'm sorry. I hope you can persevere. If you can't persevere, you can skip reading. I really can't stand it anymore. I can only thank you for reading [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Thanks to the author!

Not bad. This novel. Other prehistoric novels. The Chaos Demon either has to wait for Hongjun to become a saint, or the way of heaven is too powerful to suppress it and it is difficult to become a saint. This is the Chaos Demon. Come on, author. This is the second time I've read it. The ending is pretty good. Everyone is like a dragon in the prehistoric era, conquering other chaos, and all ethnic groups live in peace and develop together. This is the best ending I have ever read in a prehistoric novel.

It's okay, but after meeting Wang Shu, this book is not worth reading anymore. Goodbye

Cheers for a 5-star author

Very nice! Come on

The content of this ancient novel is very exciting. The author's writing style is very good, and the author's thinking is also very fresh and refined. Together with "Buddha is the Tao" I have read, they are the two most beautiful books in the prehistoric literature (in my opinion). One bad thing is that the pace is too fast

Very good, free and easy. Come on!

It's pretty sure that I can accept it. It's just that Pangu's death felt too hasty. Overall, I felt pretty good and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck, author. No, I started watching it in the morning. Although I fell asleep in the afternoon, it lasted at least three hours. I was so depressed. Can I change it? It swallowed my time. Although the ending was very hasty, it still left a deep impression.

The time in the front is depressing, but the back part is okay, but if the plot is bigger, Wangshu can be the heroine. It would be better if we add Houtu Nuwa. One of these two is pure and the other is human. They directly make Heavenly Dao into a younger brother [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Come on, come on, come on

I hope to give that time traveler something to do in the end. Anyway, you understand. Alas, the author must not give it to me. In the end, it would be better not to cut it off directly like those authors. It would be better not to cut it off. If you continue to work on this book, and if you ensure that I make it more detailed, I can tell you that your book will definitely become a masterpiece.

Well written, keep it up!

Big cheers for the author! A little short

It's pretty good-looking, and it's not too bad for my taste at the moment. As for the time-travelers, it's been handled very well, at least they haven't been soul-searched. Now I hope that the protagonist will be okay and find other chaotic worlds, preferably a world that everyone knows about. I hope the author can now handle the prehistoric world well and stop fighting all the time. It can be sorted out in one go. I'm working on a chat group or other modern things. It's interesting to do this quickly.

Come on, be a human being and write hard

I hope the author can include Nuwa, Chang Xi, and Xihe

The reason why the 3000 demon gods bred by the Great Dao couldn't defeat Pangu in the early stage. Is there any possibility that Pig Horn's upgrade to the Great Dao realm is just an illusion given to him by the Great Dao. Pangu's half-step Dao is the real level of strength.

It's a pretty good book, I recommend everyone to read it!

The writing is good. At least the protagonist develops slowly and is not arrogant. Later, I hope to accept Nuwa and the four great monkeys to accept apprentices.

Much better than systematic

Good, very good, very good The Only Taste of Honghuang Novels

It's okay. It's okay.

Can you write longer?

Not bad, not bad. I thought there was still an eternal world to fight for.

It's pretty good, the ending is much better than other prehistoric novels!

This prehistoric novel is well written, but the update speed is too slow. I hope the update speed will be faster. It can't be just one chapter every day. No one can insist on reading it.

It's so beautiful. It's my favorite fan of the prehistoric era.

Very good, the first prehistoric novel I have read

It's very beautiful. I recommend you give it a look.