National Games: I, Qinglong, Was Summoned by the School Belle at the Beginning

Author, your book is really good, but the only drawback is that the number of words is too few and it's not entirely enjoyable to read.

It can be a very original article about the national destiny. Come on, the author. There are too few words now. Please use more words. Your story will become popular as long as it doesn't collapse.

I was a little curious after reading the title of the book and wanted to complain about it, so I came in. The introduction seemed interesting, so I read it, and then I sent it. I didn't know who the protagonist was. Logically speaking, the protagonist in a male channel's book should be a male. Why are all the descriptions about women? It can be said that there are almost no men. There are so many chapters where more than half of the chapters are spoken by the audience, which is very boring. It feels very watery. So far, men have only appeared in two or three chapters, but seriously Be careful, in fact, it is less than one and a half chapters, and the plot is too procrastinating, and the word count is serious. There are more than sixty chapters in one day. I guess there are many people who want to quit. If the plot is tighter, not protracted, and the audience's perspective and comments are less, it can retain some old bookworms, and then listen to their opinions. This book will have a longer future. If you are a book with a female protagonist, then the description of the heroine should be more rigorous, and the female supporting role should be a foil. The heroine should make the image of the heroine more perfect. Don't just rely on the audience to set it off. If there are two protagonists, and the other protagonist is the so-called green dragon bug, more plots and techniques should be used to describe and perfect it. It should not almost never appear, and it is easy to be forgotten. I saw that some people posted comments, thinking that the so-called male protagonist is dead. This shows that the establishment of this male protagonist is very failed... I won't say too much. Having said that, seeing that the author is also a newbie, he gave some suggestions for this book. I hope that the author can make corresponding improvements and perfections in the future plots and descriptions of this book. These words may be a bit harsh, and I know this, but the author, I think you should remember that if you want to achieve something, you must listen to other people's opinions and suggestions. I want to give you some advice: good medicine is bitter in the mouth and good for the disease, and advice that is harsh to the ear is good for action. I barely give it four stars for comfort. I know I posted it much later, but this is what I just saw today.

Four stars First of all, the protagonist is not obvious. The title of the book seems to be the protagonist Qinglong, but more than half of the content of the book has nothing to do with Qinglong (at least for now) and the protagonist's B level is a bit low. Then there is the official performance here. When I saw the weekly 100-word prompt, I thought about it. My Dalongguo classical Chinese language crushed everyone. It turned out that what the hell was the prompt he gave? It was incomplete and a waste of words (I wonder if the author is not good enough). There is another bug here. The author said that symbols do not count as words, so wouldn't it be invincible to use emojis? (><) (๑> <๑) ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ I originally wanted to give it three stars, but considering that the content of this book is still a bit short and it may become stronger in the future, I'll give it four stars for now. I over-read this book, it's too watery. The heroine in the foreshadowing is very dio-like. In order to highlight the heroine's IQ, I pressed my IQ on the ground and rubbed it, and the result was like a piece of trash.

I finished reading it in one night, and I was shocked when I saw it finished with more than 20 words. After reading it, I thought it was very well written. Why was the ending scrawled? It suddenly jumped from B to unknown, to god level, two levels higher than it. It was very helpless. I liked it very much. It's a pity, but it is well written. I look forward to the new book. Don't let the new book be unfinished.

It's good to watch, and the subject matter is also very novel, but the pace is a bit slow. Only now does his dragon come out. You're not kidding me. Is the protagonist Qinglong or something else? I feel like Qinglong is just a supporting character. The author is faster.

Let me realize again what equality between men and women is

Come on, author, the code is too short. No wonder so few people watch it. Super beautiful, super exciting. Don't mess up.

Can the protagonist be transformed into a human being? Everyone should understand what I mean when I say this, and there are two women. You should understand. If you don't understand, I'll tell you later. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Although it looks good, it looks pretty good. What about the protagonist? Where is the protagonist? Is the protagonist lying dead? Alas~ But, as long as you look at it as an ordinary national destiny article, it is really a good-looking batch. I don't have much to say, I hope the protagonist will appear more often.

I think it's pretty good to watch. There's no slap-in-the-face plot, there aren't many barrages, and the protagonist is strong enough. There's no bloody plot, and it's not cliché. As for the protagonist? The protagonist has appeared. We just need to know about it. We know there is a protagonist. He is a blue dragon. We only need to see it. What we are looking at is the whole. It is meaningless to just look at the protagonist. The number of guest appearances by the protagonist is quite high now.

I would like to ask if this is a male channel or a female channel? It feels so watery

This book is completely different from what I've read before, but it's still good to read.

Update soon! ! ! Not enough! Short and weak! ! ! Come on, author! Twenty-four hours a day, You work eight hours during the day, Wash for an hour, Sleep for six hours, Two hours of thinking, There are still seven hours left to code, Fifty words in one minute, 3,000 words in an hour, and 21,000 words in seven hours. One chapter costs 2000, so there are already 20 chapters! ! ! So author, don't be lazy! ! !

The reason why I gave it four stars is because the main character didn't appear until more than 50 chapters in. It would have been nice if he had appeared earlier.

It's a good book with good writing. There is no protagonist in the early stage, but the plot is coherent. The two women are also well-characterized. The two women are also relatively independent. After seeing how powerful the protagonist is, they do not blindly rely on it and still have their own opinions. That's why the comment area is full of people scolding you for being a female boxer. It feels like someone else is ganking you, and some people say that you come to the male channel to make money. . . . My friend Tomato writes a book that has been read by 23,000 people and has a rating of 9.4, But he can't make much money. Come on author, I love it.

The author's book is indeed very good, but shouldn't this book be I am Qinglong? Why is it all about the heroine?

Hmm... It's pretty good-looking, but too short. It's super beautiful, but there are too few dragons (insects?). I hope to see the interaction between dragons and their hosts soon.

Not bad. It would be nice if the male protagonist appeared more^ω^

Come on, author, give me 5 hearts [laughs] for your meaning.

I thought girls were the protagonists, but then I realized that boys are the protagonists [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Who is the protagonist in this?

Let's talk about who is the protagonist?

Such a beautiful book, why does it have such a low rating? 😳

I started to be confused, who is the protagonist?

I really hope that the heroine accidentally or is forced to swallow the hero due to some accident.

And if you meet... Even if you eat this thing, it probably won't be of much use, right? If you don't eat it as soon as you get it, what's the use of eating it when you're in danger! Eating as soon as you get it can help you develop skills and practice them. If you encounter danger later, you will have a chance of survival. Therefore, eating has no effect when you are in danger.

The writing is good, the only drawback is that the male protagonist is missing!

Thank you for staying with me for this book for a few days. Keep up the good work, author. [Top post] [Salute] [Thinking]

It's so good, I almost missed it because of the title. But I still have a question after seeing this? Is it a male channel or a female channel? However, I personally hope that this book can be written in a female channel. The male protagonist is similar to Goldfinger, otherwise there will be no freshness and it will become an old routine. There are few authors who write this kind of national destiny stories in a female channel, so you, the author, should write it in a female channel. This way more people will read it and it will be fresh.