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Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tu Su Jiuer waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for J Fengxi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update. [Make a face][make a face]

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue, etc. Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a man was lying weakly on the bed, with an unconcealable paleness on his face. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

The writing is good, I hope the author will work hard💪!

It's good to read but there are too few updates. It would be great if there were more than 6 chapters a day.

If you can update me within an hour, then I will recommend books to you in other posts every day and promise not to regret it. Author, you can carefully weigh this condition.

Personally, I think this book is quite good. However, one of the 90 to 110 pictures made me realize that this is a harem story. However, harem stories should not appear in the form of forcing others. I just started reading it yesterday. I thought this book should be very good before. However, because of the previous one, many people gave it a very low rating. They didn't like it. I don't like harem very much, but I don't dislike it. Personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

I just want to ask if the author is a brother or a sister? I am astonished to be able to write this book. It has been a long time since I went from chapter 1 to chapter 100! ! ! ! Stand up, brothers and sisters! ! !

My five-star review is to let the author see that if this is a good article, judging from the introduction of this novel, why do you want to suppress this VIP level? Just get some money and then recharge it, as well as the colored equipment, just sell it. Isn't your VIP upgrade very fast? Why do you want to be so willful? There is no sense of crisis at all, and there is no crisis written in it. I don't want to make money by selling equipment. Is it because the author didn't think it through, or is he deliberately lowering the VIP level? If it is deliberately lowering the level, then you can write it. You can only use what you explode from the dungeon or other additional conditions to upgrade the VIP. But his sister gave him the opportunity to upgrade, and his conditions are also very good. He can definitely get to a very advanced level. If the subject matter is not well thought out, then you should still think about how to write it, right? Then I haven't finished reading the protagonist's character and so on, so I'll just say this much [smile]

If the main world is regarded as an extremely safe Garden of Eden, this is a good book, but this is too exaggerated. As long as everyone in the main world is a good person in a realistic sense, there is no problem with anything else.

What about the new book? If you haven't posted it yet, do you want to try it for five hours?

Except for the last few dozen chapters, the first part is very good, but the logic does not make sense in some places, and the data is wrong in some places, but it is very well written. Almost two-thirds of the way through, I felt that it was going to be unfinished. I didn't expect the end to be too fast, and I came from the book that the author rewrote according to this book. That book was very good-looking, much better than this book, and the most important thing is: that book is not unfinished! ! ! No mess! ! ! No mess! ! ! It is recommended to read: "The Invincible System Sends Me a Goddess as My Wife at the Start", this is the book that the author rewrote without a bad ending! ! !

The author's writing is very good, and I like it. I don't mean to say that I don't respect him. I already have the ability to communicate with my mentor or even surpass him, and I also very aggressively accepted the school belle of Shanghai University. Why am I still cautious with mentor Chu? I don't understand. Isn't it better to have a normal relationship or be more forceful?

I have read about 30 chapters so far, and after thinking about it for a while, I feel it is a bit strange. The first one is the ID, which is said to be dangerous if exposed. Anyway, I feel weird, mainly because others can try it one by one, although there is some explanation in the following content. The second is that friends can check their own equipment attributes, characteristics, etc. I personally think it is easy to be exposed, and then someone may deliberately target them in future fights. The third thing is that every time I update my equipment, I also remind my friends. I really don't like this setting. It feels a bit funny. Overall, actually, this book is okay, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's well written, and the main character can be read. It's not a bad plot. Don't follow the rules, do what you want. If you follow your ideas, you'll know the ending when you read the beginning. If you can write it, give it a try and support the author.

Yes, the logic is clear, but the setting of not being able to use force in this reality is a bit bad. In the end, cultivation will be the same as if you don't work hard. Doesn't that mean there is no reason to make progress?

Generally speaking, it's pretty good. The last few chapters are like changing authors. Just feel good about the book. Whether it suits your taste or not, I don't care. I've stepped on some mistakes. Some pitfalls are still there, or I haven't seen that place yet.

This book is really very igniting, and I also feel that this book is also very special and has a sense of national pride. I really hope that the author can write this book well. Although there are many pitfalls, I still have to work hard for the author's words.

Let me express my opinion. First of all, as a Tomato bookworm, I like Tomato novels very much. For the books that come with my mobile phone, I can't read them without paying dozens of reading coins every time, which is very frustrating. I have seen more than fifty pictures in this book. As for the comments about the content, I don't know what the evil points are. I read a book with curiosity. I have read so many books about cultivating immortals. In the early stage, it seems to have become the norm for the protagonist to be insulted by the supporting characters in the book at every turn. At least in the first fifty or so pictures of this book, except for some language to heighten the atmosphere, there are no supporting characters to provoke the protagonist. This is something that interests me. Overall, for the books in Tomato Fiction. I won't make any comments, I will just read it silently. Anyway, it is free. Why not? There are thousands of books in Tomato novels. There is always a novel that is your own and interests you. So just read on patiently. The above is my own opinion, please forgive me if there is any conflict.

A book with a high rating of 9.3 A long time ago has such a low rating now? I finished watching it at the end of 2022. I think it's pretty good. Why is the rating so low?

Although some details can be said to be poorly handled But the ideas and content of the book are relatively good. Hope it doesn't end badly I hope the author will pay more attention to details in his next book Come on! ! ! !

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After reading dozens of chapters, I more or less understand the framework of this book. Generally speaking, there is no problem, but the details are not handled very well. For example, the calculation formula in terms of experience, and the description of the teacher, just that bright and clear, always feel weird. As for the system, it feels a bit like a legend. I'll have to read the rest for a while and then come back and comment.

I don't even play the king anymore, just watch this

It's super pretty. It has a lot of foam, most of the time it's 4+1, and it's not very watery. It's just very pretty.

I just know that I feel very comfortable reading this book. [Pout] [Pout] [Pout] Looking at the comments about this and that, it seems that they are all good at writing. Yes, I didn't see which book was written by you. A bunch of yelling...[Staring]

The early part of this book is quite good, but I feel a little bored after reading it. There are some, and it actually has some supplements, so I gave it four stars. Come on, author, keep working hard, the books you write will get better and better (✪▽✪)

After listening to the last few chapters, I fell asleep while listening at noon. I thought I had finished listening when I woke up. When I woke up, I didn't expect it was still the same chapter. I thought he paused while I was asleep and started again when I woke up. When I looked at the text of this chapter, it was over 10,000 words. This chapter lasted more than an hour (I didn't finish it in the end and skipped to the last two chapters). In the end, I thought you were not serious about the "three-year agreement", but I didn't expect you to come back in the end. Goodbye.

The writing is okay. Come on, author, and take care of yourself.

In reality, all the people giving one star are "Brother Lezi", right?