Konoha's Clear Ninja: Wind Festival Toji

It's very well written, it doesn't cheat, it doesn't change the troubled times, it just wants to survive, it's also a very good plot

There is no system, grandpa, golden finger, incredible talent, and bloodline. In Naruto, it is written from the perspective of an ordinary person. It allows me to see a different kind of fan fiction. I am not invincible, and even if I have a chance, I don't necessarily have to be very real. The battle is also written from the perspective of an ordinary ninja. , The various cooperations of the ninjas in the war are also very reasonable, and the combat power is also very reasonable. There will not be any scenes where genin explode and defeat jounin. I think the protagonist's mentality is very good, stable, stubborn, and good at doing things. I don't understand why the score is so low. Do they all like to read cool articles now?

It's okay, the writing is very real, and ordinary people without golden fingers can just go through it. However, it is suspected of betraying teammates. You definitely don't want a teammate like the protagonist. Even if you are a coward, he may still run away at critical moments. 😂

It's a very good book. I read Brother Ying's book before, but gave up on it halfway. This one is more in line with my taste [Learned]

It's very good. I've read too many novels with a halo of protagonists, and it's so comfortable to read this kind of ordinary life novel about ordinary ninjas. In addition, can it be updated in two days or three days or twice a week?

The content is quite good [like][like][like][like]! This book is not about cheating. Although it is about time travel, according to the author, it is the story of a small character? If you watch it calmly (not recommended for those who are impetuous, prefer to watch cheating, and don't like ordinary?), You will feel... Emm, it's pretty good anyway [Like]

The writing is very nice. In fact, the narrative perspective mainly focuses on the growth of the protagonist and the people around him. It also solves the conflict between Uchiha and Konoha well as an ordinary person, and also affects the depth of thought, value and future direction of the main characters such as Shisui and Itachi. In this process, the protagonist gradually changes from living an ordinary life for a lifetime to contributing to Konoha, truly understanding and interpreting the will of fire. The plot is also good, making up for some minor regrets in the original work. In addition to not being able to save Minato, the protagonist is also at the Kage level and can kill Scorpion alone. It is enough to defeat the slightly stronger Kage. The protagonist's decision-making process from an ordinary genin to survive in Konoha to an elite Jonin is also exciting enough. I hope the author will not give up and keep writing [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's good to read. I like this kind of logical and slightly refreshing writing. Five stars.

Different from Sister Juan's works, the author pays more attention to restoring the true personalities of various characters in the original work, and does not deliberately fill in the confusion of Naruto. No one dislikes a happy ending, but the reality is often unsatisfactory, but it is the many unsatisfactory tragedies that constitute our various lives, and the unyielding people who continue to fight have become a hymn to human courage.

I don't know how many people have read this comment, but I have read more than a hundred Naruto books. If I say this one is the number one, there will always be someone to refute it. Everyone has their own opinion, but it is also the top three, and it is the number one in my heart. I have already found the other protagonists after reading half of it. I don't have the desire to continue watching. What about Touji? Is he different? No, he is really different. Maybe he was very ordinary in the early stage. He had no cheats, no talent, and no extremely high resourcefulness. The protagonist was very timid and afraid of death in the early stage, but he watched Dongsi grow up step by step. He continues to get stronger, and watching him survive in the cracks, I can't even dislike him. The emotions progress naturally, and the growth of abilities is traceable, not abrupt or false. Dongji has always been the same Dongji, it's just like watching him grow up. You said this book is more enjoyable, more, A lot, but it's not a fool's errand. Is Dong Si strong? He's so strong that even looking at him step by step, he feels that he deserves to be strong. He's not invincible, but he's accomplished and has abilities that make him want to live, but he's still moving forward. It's the present and the future.

Except for the later period, the setting is very good and sophisticated. The problem in the later period is that it has accelerated. But it is understandable that it was rewritten after stopping. The author must have an outline, otherwise it would be difficult to continue writing, but I guess the feeling of writing again will definitely not be the same as the continuous writing. The status of the continuation is the same. Due to the platform, the creative momentum was lost due to the discontinuation. It is a pity. In my opinion, the late period of returning to writing is an explanation of his own work, with a beginning and an end, and no supervision. This is really good. Although the pace of the later stage is fast, it is understandable. It's a pity that there is no heroine. The main reason is that during the viewing process, two characters had the feeling of being a heroine. The result was not. It would be wrong if I didn't give hope at the beginning.

The rhythm is quite good. I read five or six hundred chapters. The protagonist gradually transformed from a little person who just wanted to lie down and protect himself, to a "little person" who has the courage to take on responsibilities [smile]. And these changes of his are not the kind of rigid personality changes, but the kind that are traceable because some people slowly start to choose to take responsibility for certain things. From what I've seen so far, it's well worth watching.

I finished reading the whole book. It's such a good book. I could read all the more than 900 chapters in three days. As the first Naruto series I've read from beginning to end, it's enough to explain the problem. I'm glad it was finished when I saw it, it was a blast to watch. The book has complete logic, no obvious bugs, and a relatively objective view of the characters. It also describes the cruelty and instability of the ninja world. The protagonist has little aura in the early stage and is very integrated into the ninja world. The interpretation of the will of fire is also very good. From brainwashing to understanding, from watching indifferently to sacrificing his life to integrate, it is well written. There are not many descriptions of the protagonists such as Naruto, so don't read it if you mind this.

Participating in the world of Naruto from a truly people-friendly perspective is very powerless because I am a commoner. Because he is the protagonist, he cannot die, so the protagonist's teammates and mentors have been suffering greatly. If this can be accepted, then it is a good book with very detailed descriptions.

This is the best Naruto fanfic I have read so far. Unlike other fanfics that start with various systems, like Goldfinger, the protagonist of this novel becomes stronger through his own training. The author knows all the details of the original Naruto work, giving people a feeling of really living in the ninja world.

Very delicate, very rigorous, very upright, and very attractive! It's so late to meet you! This is my dream love story! 🍅'S push stream is very strange, I found it by searching here and there. No spoilers. I can't stop watching it now, and I got into it relatively late. It's already finished, and I enjoy watching it. I love this article so much! So straight-forward! It is in line with the original work, not OOC, and the logic is complete. And I can feel that the author loves Naruto. No, this article is too straight-forward. I repeatedly emphasize that this is a compliment! This is really written in my heart. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, this Naruto fanfic currently ranks second in my heart. The first one is the one I read a long time ago, Bai Yueguang, so I won't make any comparisons. Thanks to the author's wife for producing such a delicious fanfic. (Worship) I finished reading [Like], I have great stamina, I regret meeting you so late! What a great book! Now it has surpassed the Naruto fan Bai Yueguang in my heart and is the number one in my heart!

It's a pretty good novel. It's overall logical, the action is smooth, and it's comfortable to read. There are a few places where the plot is pushed forward, but it fails. I hope it can be optimized next time I write a novel. Come on! 1. The country of the sea left a message to Orochimaru, exposed the information to the fourth generation, and insisted that the fourth generation was noble and willing to die. These are okay. Later, Orochimaru would be persuaded by White Fang to research the direction instead of dissecting and reading the protagonist's memory. It is really unreasonable. In order to improve the protagonist's combat power, the plot here is too hasty. 2. The protagonist returns 4 years ago and declares his own memory. This episode almost turns into a battle of wits and courage with the air, and a dark shadow appears. . . In fact, it should be described in depth to reflect the badness of Danzo, and at the same time, the third generation's trust in the protagonist can be smoothly transitioned, instead of always using the fourth generation as a cover. 3. To resurrect Orochimaru, he was too trusting and relied purely on other gods, so that a lot of information was leaked and the situation was in danger. He relied on a miracle to save the situation. It really deviated from the overall style of the novel and received a negative review. 4. There are several other incongruities, almost all of which appear to increase combat effectiveness. In fact, since the novel wants to follow the route of the rise of a small character, it can broaden its thinking a little more, including Otsutsuki in another world, the moon, etc. In short, some places can be found to be smoother and reflect the way of self-improvement instead of relying on unexpected events again and again. In general, the key logic needs to be cleaned up more~ But in Tomato, it is definitely a rare good book written with care~ Liangcao+, recommended!

This is my first time seeing a very real Naruto article. I hope the author will keep writing.

This is the most special Naruto fanfic I have ever read. Although I have only read the beginning, I have to say that the writing style and subject matter are very good, but it is a little bit sinister. Maybe it is the impatience of the little character in his progress.

It is a very good book. The protagonist is not brainless, passionate, saintly, or pretentious. The author does not write any plot for the sake of writing. Everything is natural and immersive. The protagonist didn't fail even at the beginning. He was very careful and visibly cautious. Good reviews.

When I first started reading it, I thought it was average and felt that it might be a bit boring. Then I saw that this book had a lot of words, so I continued reading. As I read it, I found that this book is very different from other Tomato books. First of all, most of Tomato's other books use a sunshine filter to interpret the world of Naruto. This book uses a Naruto filter. It is that kind of dark feeling that interprets the world of Naruto. Secondly, the growth of the protagonist is step by step, which can make readers deeply remember that the author's portrayal of the characters in the world of Naruto is quite consistent with the original work. It is full and three-dimensional. The author must have done a lot of homework on the world of Naruto. It is worth reading.

Yes, the level rises slowly. There are not those who start beating all kinds of geniuses at the age of 7.

Very good! The writing is very good, author, you know Naruto so well! Don't worry too much about the rating. It's indeed different from other books and it's normal to have a slightly lower rating. Come on! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Use the original story to write about your own experience. It's not awkward or abrupt, and it's well written. I just don't know if it will be like other fan fictions in the future when I get stronger. Uncomfortable 😣.

Yes, I read more than a hundred chapters at the beginning, thinking that the protagonist would not cheat, and there would be no blood successors and high amounts of chakra. It would be boring to watch, but looking back, the author's logic is really good, and the plots are intertwined. The most important thing is that all the protagonist's power improvements are very good. It's very reasonable. Even when you get to the level of Jonin, you don't even say it. This kind of theme is unique among all the current Naruto novels. Because there is no cool plot, it is quite difficult to write this kind of plot without being boring. The author can still write it so well and at a very high level. ⑧Wrong👍🏻

There were too many foreshadowings laid in the early stage. Although they were basically filled in later, it was delayed for so long that it was difficult to see the future without enough patience. However, the early stage is indeed more attractive. When the protagonist survives in the cracks, the psychological description is a bit too appropriate for working cows and horses like us. The delayed development makes the content in the middle period slightly less attractive, and the end of the article is a bit rushed, but it is still reasonable. Although there are not many plots about Pig's Knuckles getting along with Minato in the current time and space, the Minato portrayed is much more vivid than the anime and is deeply rooted in people's hearts. It can be seen that the author really likes Minato and respects him. Be patient, be patient, I watched it intermittently for a long time before finishing it. The length of the book is not extensive, but the many small details of character portrayal are one of the highlights. After all, group portraits are a troublesome thing. (I can't write anything nutritious. I hope the author's writing style can be better and create more love that belongs to his heart)

The best Naruto story I've seen so far on Tomato, the change of mentality, the scientific thinking of ninjutsu, and the writing of the story at each stage are very good. If I want to say where it falls short, it may be the description of the battle, but it is also at a normal level. Personally, I don't like the later content of Naruto. Although it is a complete story, in the later period, I only remember Naruto's constant escaping. Madara is very brilliant, but Madara's portrayal and even the six-level battle in the later period have lost the taste of ninjas. What Naruto remembers most is the simple but interesting stories before Shippuden.

It's very interesting, very ordinary daily life, basically a very good process that a time traveler without cheating can achieve. I look forward to how it will end. Also, is there a female protagonist in this book? I just watched half of it

From the beginning to the present, after finishing it, to be honest, I feel quite sad and a little bit reluctant to give up. To be honest, this book is already considered a masterpiece. Anyway, I really like this feeling of growth. From being unknown at the beginning to becoming famous all over the world, it always gives people a feeling that I don't know how to describe. I hope the author will release a new masterpiece soon. I will still continue to support it.

A very good book, Jing Zi Zai Xianren