Ordinary Honsangenshin Fanfic

I give myself four stars, the one star difference is because of the writing. Humph~ The front may be a bit messy and boring, but the further I go, the more confident I become, and I feel like the rest of the writing is quite good (although the writing is still not that good, send it, Ababa Ababa~)

In terms of general theory Not bad I haven't read it for a long time, but there have been so many updates. The author is awesome!

I think this book is generally good, but too much ink is spent describing other characters in the book. This book is essentially a second-generation fanfic. Most readers have a certain understanding of other characters in the book, so I think more ink should be spent on describing the interaction between the protagonist and other characters. At the same time, the sense of fragmentation during the transition is too strong. I often don't know what I am watching while watching it. Moreover, I think the transition plot can be used as a foreshadowing of the interaction with the protagonist in the subsequent chapters. I think the biggest attraction of this book is the collision between the ideological culture from another world and the ideological culture of this world, rather than how the protagonist is saved in that world. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist's heart is a bit too fragile. The protagonist is also described as too humble and too cautious. After a few chapters, we always have to pay attention to the protagonist's physical and mental health again. The above are the biggest shortcomings of this book in my opinion. As for the advantages, I think the daily interactions between the protagonist and various characters in the book are very interesting. I hope the author can write more interesting interactions. Finally, I hope the author will work harder to write this book. I still like this book.

I like this article very much, although sometimes I think about sword stories or battle scenes, but I always get tired of this kind of battle. It is precisely because it is daily that everyday articles do not make people feel tired, because they seem to be very close to us, so I feel familiar with them. Sometimes I do not know the characters in it, but this is just like the road of life, I never know who I will meet at the next intersection. Such daily freehand writing may not be possible even if I am in the middle of it. I would like to express my gratitude to the author [smile][smile]

It's a very good novel. It doesn't have the various amazing abilities or systems of the protagonist in other novels (that I've read so far). It doesn't constantly collect harems and destroy CPs. It's mainly about daily life, and the plot arrangement is also very interesting. The character design of each character is well grasped, but the role of the protagonist in the early stage is too small, but it has no impact on the plot. The protagonist is very relevant and has a good sense of substitution. This novel makes me think that fan novels can be written like this. It's a novel experience. Come on, author!

I'm halfway through reading it, so let me make an objective evaluation. The first fifty or so chapters felt very confusing, and some of the plots were a bit inexplicable. However, there is a clear improvement from chapter fifty onwards, which shows that the author is also working hard to improve and has contacted more and more people. The author has always paid attention to the opinions of readers. He has read too many systematic Honkai articles, and it is an option to take a look at daily life. The main text is relatively bland, and the extra chapters are quite interesting. Overall, he is an author with great potential, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

Yes, it is my favorite daily life. The character design is almost not broken. The setting of the protagonist having no CP and the setting of traveling around the world and meeting various characters are well received. The main problem for the author now is the short message. Trust me and update more. If not more, just ten updates every day. Otherwise, you will become popular in a short time.

It's a very good book. I started reading it at about 80 chapters and have reached more than 300 chapters now. I really like this book by the author. It is good in every aspect. However, the updates have been a bit slow recently. It needs to be updated every few days. If you have no inspiration, you can take a break for a few months and write an outline. If you feel unwell, take more rest. Come on! I will accompany you until the end

Let me start by saying that this is a good book, but the protagonist has too few roles. However, the author also said at the beginning that he wanted to write a book without a male protagonist, but if he didn't write it, it would feel like something was missing. When I read this book, I felt the same way, and it felt very strange. , Maybe I'm used to watching from the perspective of a male protagonist, I hope the author will continue according to his own ideas, I respect the author, after all, this is not written by me, and I don't have the literary talent, so come on, I will just jump to the perspective of the male protagonist [Like] 6.8? ? ? ? ? ? ? Why so low

Daily writing that meets my expectations, I especially like this kind. Unlike the daily novel I read before, which had a single female protagonist, after Ai Li established a relationship with the male protagonist, she ended up having ambiguous relationships with various female characters. Ai Li can also eat the male protagonist He Hua's cp, which makes her whole person shocked. ——Love comes from the Starry Sky Train

It's rare for Tomato to find novels that suit my taste, and this is the only one I've found in this kind of urban daily life. Unfortunately, when I was reading Chapter 100, I flipped back and found that the author had stopped updating for a year. (This is the most desperate way to die in the world. How few people see it everyday...)

Come and read this book. Don't be fooled by the title and introduction. That's what the author thinks. In fact, it plays a lot of role in enriching the characters. Take a look. There is no protagonist in this book. It's great.

Everyone has their own line, the characterization is very full, the ordinary protagonist is not mediocre, and the few crumbs are also real crumbs...[Face covering]✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

Not bad, not a cookie-cutter routine. Especially the fact that the protagonist did not have no father or mother in his previous life is a good comment.

This book may be a little difficult for college students to understand, but it is just right for Leonardo da Vinci Lewinsky Guilin Glenwyne Sargavonte Laiwen Yushi Elista Dachiavin Silosta Demire Davis Brooke Stade Miles Davis Pa. Melanie Via

The author is really good at writing, but it's too short! ! ! The author couldn't continue writing in the middle, and then it was unfinished... Then there was a second part, and then the second part was not updated for four months... One last time, if it's good, it's good! !

Hello, Dream Ambassador!

It's been five days. Is the author still there? The author is getting shorter and shorter [shy]

Give it four stars, the author said it himself. Anyway, I must have watched it for ten hours.

Author, let me give you a suggestion. With the current progress of the plot, most of the characters have already appeared, but characters such as the post-collapse Carol have not yet appeared. In the main plot, a friend of the former civilized Fu Hua is the same as Carol. I think it can be borrowed to introduce new characters @ awesome broke with akimbo

Everyday, very daily, well written, I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch! No eunuchs! No eunuchs! There are really very few books that touch my heart as completely as this one, but don't be like the other books I've followed [almost crying] No, author, didn't you promise me that you would not be a prisoner? It's okay to go from two updates a day to one update a day. At least you're updating steadily. Why are you still updating so often [crazy][crazy][crazy]

What is the name of the second part and how can I find it?

It's good to watch. Only daily life like this is good to watch. Especially write other plots and don't keep writing about the protagonist.

The book itself is great. It not only describes the daily life between the protagonist and different characters, but also adds a bit of fun to it. However, it would be better if the extra chapters could be classified separately (I don't want to make a side story while watching it). But overall, five stars are not enough, four stars are more than enough. Although it is not as good as the classics, it is also the top of the niche group. Come on

When I see the author giving himself a four-star rating, I'll give him a five-star rating because I'm willing [laughing evilly]

It's very relaxing for daily use, it's grassy and fits the character at the same time, and it integrates characters from various Mi games without feeling out of place. In general it is I really like it

It's pretty good. I also like daily writing. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes] Looking forward to the sweet potato test~

Author, you are so sweet, let's get a little more serious later [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

What a word! Two words that are great! Three words, great!

I was reading a novel yesterday, and at night I dreamed that the protagonist and Alicia were kissing each other. The main character has so few roles