Spells Return: Beginning with Eternal Kaleidoscope

Personally, it looks good. I haven't read much of Naruto and I haven't read much of Jusei, so I have my own thoughts on this book. It's well written and very attractive to people who have never been exposed to the two comics. But those who have read it will give their opinions, but this is a fan. The author has his own settings and ideas. It is impossible to follow the original work. Otherwise, how would the author write? This is a fanfic, not an original work. I also hope that those who leave negative reviews will think carefully about what they are doing. Can they write it themselves? If you like it, give it five stars. If you don't like it, leave it. It's really not easy to give a bad review. Anyway, I think it's good. I originally wanted to increase the reading time before giving a rating, but I couldn't hold it back. Author, don't let anything happen to you. If something happens to you, I won't update it. All the words I wrote will be in vain. Also, is that girl the heroine? It's not suggested that you don't want a heroine here, but it's not that you're not allowed to have one. It's just that the future of your book is unclear. To be honest, there are still many readers who are not willing to write a heroine, but there must be support. I feel that this heroine is better. Writing an additional main character requires a lot of thinking, and Gojo Satoru wrote You're right. This is a fan novel. You can have more connections with the original protagonist. Readers are here because of the fan novel, that is, because of Gojo Satoru. Of course, the author has the author's ideas. You must have thought about the plot and characters before starting the book, so it is still very difficult for you to change it. I don't have much to say. Finally, come on! I will keep chasing! Opinions can be adopted or ignored. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Please give more updates][Please give more updates] By the way, I have something else to say! The author's book is very good, but please remember that you are writing a fanfic. I don't have any objection to how Kaleidoscope cuts it. After all, the protagonist is too strong and it's not interesting. This book shouldn't be a good read, right? [Thinking][thinking] I won't talk about too little. After all, it's not easy for an author. If you don't save the manuscript, you still have to write it down. Finally, I believe that your own book is very good, and it doesn't matter if the rating is low. Sooner or later, it will be published [Sending Hearts]

As we all know, the warrior of pure love is invincible. [Cool]

I have never watched Naruto or Jujutsu, but I know about both. The protagonist is the Eternal Kaleidoscope, which is a bit overdone. Of course, it does not rule out that the author's brain circuit is wandering back and forth on the boundary of continuous growth and development. Actually, this article will be very nice and well-written for book lovers who have never read or understood it [I personally think it is well-written and very nice], but for those who have read the two comics, it will be more or less obsessive-compulsive. Finally, I give you five stars. I hope the author will continue to write. The content is very good. Moreover, only when someone comments and complains can you prove that there are still living creatures reading your work. I hope the next plot will be full of joy. Oriji

The one who cheated is the author Yun Huoying.

I took a look at the comment section, and many of them criticized this book, and there is indeed some truth in what they said. But as for me, a novice reader, the author's writing style is really good. I just said that maybe the author didn't want to go in the direction of invincibility. After all, Susana became invincible as soon as the Eternal Kaleidoscope opened. But don't hide the emotional scenes. If you insist on saying how hard you work for this person, but don't describe the relationship between the two of them, it seems too rigid and blunt, and you can't empathize at all. Generally speaking, it can be seen that the author wanted to write the book seriously. Overall, it is quite good. Come on!

The author is great, the description of Sleeping Beauty is like Mary Suisse. The meaning of her existence is to cause trouble and let the protagonist solve it. But the protagonist appears to be very love-minded. If there must be a relationship to connect the events involved in the article, friendship is indeed more passionate. It would be great to have a close friend like Nakahara Chuuya, who is strong, responsible and loyal. Otherwise, Sleeping Beauty would be easily scolded. She is too silly and sweet. She is silly, white and not sweet at all. A little bit of advice, the article is well written, keep it up (PS: The protagonist shows too many emotions, such as eyes full of resentment. I personally feel that people who show such emotions too much are basically the kind of little cannon fodder who can't survive one episode.) Five stars for you, come on, author.

I hope you can see my comments. You don't need to read my comments inside. It doesn't matter. What follows is a personal agreement. Wonderful fights and perfect descriptions are never out of touch. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on. [Top post] [Please update] [Learned]

I have to say, it's so beautiful! It has that taste, it's really great (›´ω`‹) It's not the kind of mindless cool article Come on, the author (ง•̀_•́)ง[salute][learned][learned]

I hope the author will try to slow down the protagonist's growth process as much as possible. . Because the protagonist's combat power is too strong, it is necessary to expand the originally limited world view of the spell. In the end, the fanfic of the spell's return war, which is easy to write, does not look like a fanfic. Now at chapter 50, the protagonist's combat power is already very high. It's not that it cannot be high, but the process is too fast and the combat power of the whole book will collapse very quickly. The combat power must be properly balanced. Ignore the requests to strengthen the protagonist's combat power. I feel that the protagonist's kaleidoscope is too stretched. . Then speed up the main plot of the original work appropriately. If the author doesn't want to write a pure and refreshing novel, he still hopes to consider it. After all, the original airborne character is not as good as the character who has plot growth in the progress of the original work. The protagonist can also play a role similar to a mentor? Okay, the rest is gone. The author's writing is pretty good. Just control the rhythm. I wish the author's book success [OK] Also, I hope the author can rationalize the setting of the original work. If it is too strong, it can be weakened, but not too harsh. At least the setting cannot be wrong. If the author writes in the future, he should distinguish between cool writing and normal growth type. It is best not to use a cool writing template, and then hope to balance the combat power, otherwise he will really be scolded. If this book already wants to balance the combat power, then don't jump horizontally repeatedly. If it should be flat, it will be flat, but it is better to use the original flat to reduce the number of airborne characters.

Dear author, stop living on subsistence allowances and keep updating. It will definitely become popular. Don't run away as soon as chapter 50 is reached [awkward laugh]

This book is actually not that bad, right? 5.8 Points. I feel pretty good. I read it and most of them said that the author doesn't know Naruto. In fact, I think it's understandable. The author wants to write an upgrade-type novel, but using the Eternal Kaleidoscope would be too invincible. The author might as well use the system and unlock the ability step by step (spurt). I still really want to know the ending, please come on, author!

It's pretty good, come on

Well, how should I put it? It is better for the author to explain some things clearly. Everyone can generally understand it. After all, we generally don't have too high requirements for tomatoes, but you must say some things in advance. Otherwise, if you discover your own problems later, you must explain them in the comment area in time. I will give you 4 stars, no. It's because you write well. You can tell by the amount of time I spend reading. I haven't read your novel for a long time, but I still hope that you will work harder and learn from experience to create greater glory. I also hope that more people will write spells to fight back. The main reason is that I don't have the writing skills, otherwise I will write it. Finally, I would like to say good luck to the author [top post]

It's too weak for Naruto, what about Susan?

This is an eternal kaleidoscope that is better than two pillars.

Although the settings of this book's combat power and kaleidoscope are not very good, it does not prevent this book from being a good book. I don't know why this book is rated like this. I can't understand [what]. Alas, I can only ask for more updates.

Author, don't be influenced by others. Just write your own stuff. No matter what others say, I think it's good not to be invincible.

It's just that the Eternal Kaleidoscope is too weak, but the others can

Why don't you write it? It's very good.

There's nothing to say, it just looks good and that's it

The other things are pretty good, but why is there a woman, um, I don't know if she's dead or alive? It would be better if there wasn't this woman.

As long as you update continuously, I will always give you five-star praise.

Great, the rating shouldn't be so low, I hope the author won't be affected

It's so beautiful. I really want to know what the relationship between that girl and the protagonist is.

She looks so good, why? Come on, come on, stay well

Dear author, please update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I think it's pretty

Come on, keep writing

Not bad, but Tsukuyomi was cut.

I think it's okay, it looks cool Come on, author, I recommend writing private settings in the introduction, such as weakening the kaleidoscope, etc. The reason is to prevent the battle power from being out of touch with the story and leaving no content to write. I think the writing is good, better than other stories that are semi-invincible but actually very uncomfortable. It has blood, fighting and growth, and it also allows people to see the invincible part. Come on, more importantly, there is no disgusting harem (emphasis)