The Foolish Son of the Landowner During the War of Resistance

It's too wordy and never gets to the point. The question is, is it appropriate to write this way when you're traveling through time? If you hadn't time traveled, you wouldn't understand anything, and that would be excusable. Before you time traveled, you were a modern person, and you would have read books in vain.

It's a pity that it was so good overall, but it was castrated like this.

It's too wordy, can you write down the key points?

Dry and boring

The author drives the screws well. Don't just blindly support others when you see them writing novels well.

Good

Good.

After reading more than ten chapters, I realized that all the female horses are parallel imports. I wrote a long essay about one sentence.

Quite practical! Just too wordy

Too much nonsense.

Very good looking

Good-looking [shy]

I watched it for a while! I feel like there are too many explanations, so just write it in the first person! Just explain everything when something happens, it's not necessary, right?

The writing is more realistic.

I had so much fun watching it that I stopped updating, please hurry up and write! A very good book!