Refusing to Lick the Dog: Angrily Dumping the School Beauty Girlfriend at the Beginning

The author's writing is so good! ! ! It makes me increase my memory every time [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's a real punishment. In the future, if red envelopes are not enough for the reviewers, I will tell everyone and give more big gifts to the authors [lick the screen]

I haven't written a book for a long time, so I definitely can't compare with the great masters. I am learning from the great masters' books while writing. If you have any opinions, you can raise them. Feel free to scold me. Your comments will not be deleted. Only when someone scolds you will you know your own shortcomings and make progress!

The writing is quite good, but why is the rating so low?

Keep going and don't give up just because of what some people say. Everyone has different opinions. I think there is nothing wrong with your writing. It's just a lack of experience, but it doesn't matter. These things will get better gradually. The key to the question is whether you are willing to continue writing and maintain your original intention. I hope to see this novel getting better and better. We will slowly watch this book get better and better. Also, while listening to opinions, you must have your own ideas and create new ways of writing. Author, you must remember that you cannot meet everyone's needs, but you can satisfy your own. Suggestions are important and your ideas are also important. I hope to see you getting better and better. I wish you success and don't be blocked!

The book feels okay, but the character of the male protagonist is too unlikable. He feels like a humanoid teddy who has never seen a woman. He keeps staring at a beautiful woman when he sees one [face covering]

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with You's loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jane's state when watching "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard", if I watch one more episode, I will miss one less. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers first

The author is probably young and has naive ideas. The relationship between the characters is very confusing, and the conflicts and baggage that broke out in the plot were not well written. It is recommended to read more what others have written. The relationship and background of your supporting character should be carefully thought out and it should match his background, otherwise it will feel mindless and the dialogue will not be logical. What kind of plot is comfortable to watch? Isn't it just to arrange for the protagonist to pretend to slap someone in the face? Most people don't like to watch this type of show nowadays. Readers' tastes are getting higher and higher now, and their requirements are in line with the trend of the times. There is a limit to everything, too much is never enough.

Not bad, come on

Wow, this book really fits my XP of reading. The content is very stimulating and super refreshing. However, the rating is relatively low, but it is definitely the best choice for ISPs who like to read harem stories. There may be some people who don't like Harem and give it a low score. I beg you to read the comment section and the introduction. If you like single girls and no girls, just click X. If you insist on reading halfway through and give a low score to Harem, I beg you to understand the article before reading it. It's not good for anyone to write down. It makes the author not want to update the article and poisons himself. [Angry][angry] This book is a little bit poisonous, but it's not poisonous enough to kill me as long as I'm not picky and it's still very enjoyable and enjoyable to read. I like it very much! [Laughing evilly] In this article, I personally feel that the protagonist is not happy enough in terms of martial arts (maybe I have read too many cool articles, so I think the Qi training period is too long) and there is no detailed description of the realm (maybe I am blind and did not see it). In addition, the protagonist is a bit too low-key in terms of money. Not many people know about the only sports car worth 50 million, so it is not that exciting. [Cry][cry][cover face] Come on, the author. I really like this book. Please don't end it too early or stop updating it. Please! Take more heroines, don't be confused by the low scores of those who only have one or no heroines. I really like the author's writing style and story in this book, and I like the SP character of the protagonist. Big boost for the author! I hope the author gets better and better! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Are you going to build a system or something later? If I don't add it, I always feel like I'm missing some fun.

I'm a little speechless. In the previous chapters, with that IQ, being a policeman? One against ten? Sorry to see this, I personally don't like it and don't recommend it.

Xiaobai's writing is better than yours, full of poisonous points.

If it weren't for you, the male lead would be too immoral. Just after sleeping, my sister-in-law turned around and said to her childhood sweetheart, I love you. You really know how to write

The first one or two were pretty good, but the latter ones made me so embarrassed and speechless. The policewoman was unreasonable, and so on. . . .

The protagonist is a loser at the beginning, but when he gets rich, he is still a loser when he starts cultivating immortals. He can't beat dozens of ordinary gangsters at the qi training level, and his combat power is terrible. In the novel, the higher realms can't be seen as low-level cultivations, and they don't even know their own cultivations. The policewoman and senior sister have experienced life and death crises with the protagonist. , Did not fall in love with the protagonist, or even have much affection, which proves how rubbish the protagonist is, especially with the senior sister, who has done everything except playing poker for real in the end, and actually thinks that the senior sister will meet someone she likes in the future, so that she can get married, so it is really disgusting to not play real poker with the senior sister.

It's quite interesting, the plot is too fast, the reason why the male protagonist and his girlfriend break up is explained clearly in less than twenty chapters, and the male protagonist is simply the reincarnation of a demon, it's so simple, he talks about being with someone for a long time, but as a result, he immediately hesitates as soon as a woman asks who he is dating, and there is also a young man. Mei Zhuma, I don't want to say, what, it's ridiculously fast, they reconciled in just two chapters, you can't be this fast, right? [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes] The male protagonist has a bad character, please consider it carefully, if you can accept the male protagonist being weak and hesitant in front of women, just watch it

Are these 36 chapters a conspiracy?

Author, what the hell is Chapter 36? Let's write it down. I feel like writing about the character Ye Feng is a bit alien.

First, the character Jiang Feng feels redundant. . Secondly, the scene where mwq and her fiancé were intimately hooking up felt a bit weird. . A whole vacation that could have gone without. As it turns out, the author found out that the first few photos of her intimately entering the hotel room were real. . To be honest, it's a bit cool. .

It's okay, I'm talking about the front. After Chapter 90, the male protagonist becomes a real scumbag who has no ambition and can't make up his mind. The second warrior star also stopped practicing and kept doing that thing day after day. Author, you are really enough! Strength is the most solid foundation for opening a harem. Without strength, you will be abused by others every day! Also, don't have this kind of plot about a scumbag who can't make up his mind. Change the character of the hero quickly. He's just a playboy, but he can't be irresponsible! If you want five stars, don't let the plot be trashy!

Come on, author, I support you, but don't have too many women. It will be difficult for you to write in the future. Remember, if you write 100,000 words a day, I will give you four stars first, and five stars will depend on your laziness in the future [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I gave it 4 stars, which is too high to be honest. I have read Chapter 53 so far. Let me tell you my feelings: This is the article about cultivating immortals in the harem city. The content is not particularly exciting, but boys are a little satisfied to watch it. The female protagonists all love the male protagonist at a disadvantage (they give it physically, but it is not love, and it is a bit of a knife from a mental point of view). There are no particularly powerful fighting and killing scenes, and the writing is a bit gentle and comfortable to watch. After watching it for a long time, you will find that it is a bit impatient. The emotional line is too hasty and sloppy, and you cannot feel the desire for love of the male and female protagonists. If you look at it more broadly, you will feel that this kind of relationship is flawed and could be broken at any time. There are some lack of rules in the content. Maybe the author had little restraint on himself when writing the book, and made no distinction between important things and ordinary things. It gives people the feeling that they can easily obtain valuable things without worrying about losing them.

Okay, okay, the novel is very good, don't care about other people's opinions. Personally, I think it's pretty good. After all, it's a novel, so you can read it without thinking. I hope the author can keep updating it, come on! [Thinking][thinking]

I personally think it's good, but the progress of the protagonist's cultivation is too slow, and can you pay more attention to his senior sister? It's just my personal opinion. After reading this book so many times, my favorite is the protagonist's senior sister.

It is a very good novel. The plot is ups and downs and exciting. However, there are some flaws in the character structure of the male protagonist, as well as the world background, character links, etc. It needs improvement. In short, I will improve it again and don't make it seem like I am too nervous. Come on! …

It's very interesting. If you like harems, please join in [laughing] I took a look at the comments below. They must be old bookworms with spoiled tastes and can't stand books with less delicate writing. But I think feeling is more important. Your idea is very good. As for the harem, it must be fun. I just need to improve the writing style and make the feelings more delicate. It's okay to be a scumbag. Beautiful women can never give up. It's a bit bad to be a teddy. Think about it from the perspective of the author. Come on!

The plot is not boring, it is very comfortable to read, and it is also pornographic [laughter]

I still want to take a look and give it five stars. Why did I fall apart when I saw the second part? Was it written by a primary school student? There is really no one who can write about this kind of wisdom.

It looks really good [like], this is the hardest to deal with, I hope it doesn't collapse later.

Come on, come on, come on. I really like watching it. Don't let it suck.