Help! Should I Choose the Rich Sisters or My Childhood Sweetheart?

The author's writing is so good! ! ! It makes me increase my memory every time [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's a real punishment. In the future, if red envelopes are not enough for the reviewers, I will tell everyone and give more big gifts to the authors [lick the screen]

I haven't written a book for a long time, so I definitely can't compare with the great masters. I am learning from the great masters' books while writing. If you have any opinions, you can raise them. Feel free to scold me. Your comments will not be deleted. Only when someone scolds you will you know your own shortcomings and make progress!

The writing is quite good, but why is the rating so low?

Keep going and don't give up just because of what some people say. Everyone has different opinions. I think there is nothing wrong with your writing. It's just a lack of experience, but it doesn't matter. These things will get better gradually. The key to the question is whether you are willing to continue writing and maintain your original intention. I hope to see this novel getting better and better. We will slowly watch this book get better and better. Also, while listening to opinions, you must have your own ideas and create new ways of writing. Author, you must remember that you cannot meet everyone's needs, but you can satisfy your own. Suggestions are important and your ideas are also important. I hope to see you getting better and better. I wish you success and don't be blocked!

The book feels okay, but the character of the male protagonist is too unlikable. He feels like a humanoid teddy who has never seen a woman. He keeps staring at a beautiful woman when he sees one [face covering]

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with You's loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jane's state when watching "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard", if I watch one more episode, I will miss one less. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers first

The author is probably young and has naive ideas. The relationship between the characters is very confusing, and the conflicts and baggage that broke out in the plot were not well written. It is recommended to read more what others have written. The relationship and background of your supporting character should be carefully thought out and it should match his background, otherwise it will feel mindless and the dialogue will not be logical. What kind of plot is comfortable to watch? Isn't it just to arrange for the protagonist to pretend to slap someone in the face? Most people don't like to watch this type of show nowadays. Readers' tastes are getting higher and higher now, and their requirements are in line with the trend of the times. There is a limit to everything, too much is never enough.

Not bad, come on

Wow, this book really fits my XP of reading. The content is very stimulating and super refreshing. However, the rating is relatively low, but it is definitely the best choice for ISPs who like to read harem stories. There may be some people who don't like Harem and give it a low score. I beg you to read the comment section and the introduction. If you like single girls and no girls, just click X. If you insist on reading halfway through and give a low score to Harem, I beg you to understand the article before reading it. It's not good for anyone to write down. It makes the author not want to update the article and poisons himself. [Angry][angry] This book is a little bit poisonous, but it's not poisonous enough to kill me as long as I'm not picky and it's still very enjoyable and enjoyable to read. I like it very much! [Laughing evilly] In this article, I personally feel that the protagonist is not happy enough in terms of martial arts (maybe I have read too many cool articles, so I think the Qi training period is too long) and there is no detailed description of the realm (maybe I am blind and did not see it). In addition, the protagonist is a bit too low-key in terms of money. Not many people know about the only sports car worth 50 million, so it is not that exciting. [Cry][cry][cover face] Come on, the author. I really like this book. Please don't end it too early or stop updating it. Please! Take more heroines, don't be confused by the low scores of those who only have one or no heroines. I really like the author's writing style and story in this book, and I like the SP character of the protagonist. Big boost for the author! I hope the author gets better and better! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Are you going to build a system or something later? If I don't add it, I always feel like I'm missing some fun.