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I haven't written a book for a long time, so I definitely can't compare with the great masters. I am learning from the great masters' books while writing. If you have any opinions, you can raise them. Feel free to scold me. Your comments will not be deleted. Only when someone scolds you will you know your own shortcomings and make progress!

The writing is quite good, but why is the rating so low?

Keep going and don't give up just because of what some people say. Everyone has different opinions. I think there is nothing wrong with your writing. It's just a lack of experience, but it doesn't matter. These things will get better gradually. The key to the question is whether you are willing to continue writing and maintain your original intention. I hope to see this novel getting better and better. We will slowly watch this book get better and better. Also, while listening to opinions, you must have your own ideas and create new ways of writing. Author, you must remember that you cannot meet everyone's needs, but you can satisfy your own. Suggestions are important and your ideas are also important. I hope to see you getting better and better. I wish you success and don't be blocked!

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with You's loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jane's state when watching "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard", if I watch one more episode, I will miss one less. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers first

Wow, this book really fits my XP of reading. The content is very stimulating and super refreshing. However, the rating is relatively low, but it is definitely the best choice for ISPs who like to read harem stories. There may be some people who don't like Harem and give it a low score. I beg you to read the comment section and the introduction. If you like single girls and no girls, just click X. If you insist on reading halfway through and give a low score to Harem, I beg you to understand the article before reading it. It's not good for anyone to write down. It makes the author not want to update the article and poisons himself. [Angry][angry] This book is a little bit poisonous, but it's not poisonous enough to kill me as long as I'm not picky and it's still very enjoyable and enjoyable to read. I like it very much! [Laughing evilly] In this article, I personally feel that the protagonist is not happy enough in terms of martial arts (maybe I have read too many cool articles, so I think the Qi training period is too long) and there is no detailed description of the realm (maybe I am blind and did not see it). In addition, the protagonist is a bit too low-key in terms of money. Not many people know about the only sports car worth 50 million, so it is not that exciting. [Cry][cry][cover face] Come on, the author. I really like this book. Please don't end it too early or stop updating it. Please! Take more heroines, don't be confused by the low scores of those who only have one or no heroines. I really like the author's writing style and story in this book, and I like the SP character of the protagonist. Big boost for the author! I hope the author gets better and better! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Are you going to build a system or something later? If I don't add it, I always feel like I'm missing some fun.

Are these 36 chapters a conspiracy?

Come on, author, I support you, but don't have too many women. It will be difficult for you to write in the future. Remember, if you write 100,000 words a day, I will give you four stars first, and five stars will depend on your laziness in the future [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I gave it 4 stars, which is too high to be honest. I have read Chapter 53 so far. Let me tell you my feelings: This is the article about cultivating immortals in the harem city. The content is not particularly exciting, but boys are a little satisfied to watch it. The female protagonists all love the male protagonist at a disadvantage (they give it physically, but it is not love, and it is a bit of a knife from a mental point of view). There are no particularly powerful fighting and killing scenes, and the writing is a bit gentle and comfortable to watch. After watching it for a long time, you will find that it is a bit impatient. The emotional line is too hasty and sloppy, and you cannot feel the desire for love of the male and female protagonists. If you look at it more broadly, you will feel that this kind of relationship is flawed and could be broken at any time. There are some lack of rules in the content. Maybe the author had little restraint on himself when writing the book, and made no distinction between important things and ordinary things. It gives people the feeling that they can easily obtain valuable things without worrying about losing them.

Okay, okay, the novel is very good, don't care about other people's opinions. Personally, I think it's pretty good. After all, it's a novel, so you can read it without thinking. I hope the author can keep updating it, come on! [Thinking][thinking]

I personally think it's good, but the progress of the protagonist's cultivation is too slow, and can you pay more attention to his senior sister? It's just my personal opinion. After reading this book so many times, my favorite is the protagonist's senior sister.

It is a very good novel. The plot is ups and downs and exciting. However, there are some flaws in the character structure of the male protagonist, as well as the world background, character links, etc. It needs improvement. In short, I will improve it again and don't make it seem like I am too nervous. Come on! …

It's very interesting. If you like harems, please join in [laughing] I took a look at the comments below. They must be old bookworms with spoiled tastes and can't stand books with less delicate writing. But I think feeling is more important. Your idea is very good. As for the harem, it must be fun. I just need to improve the writing style and make the feelings more delicate. It's okay to be a scumbag. Beautiful women can never give up. It's a bit bad to be a teddy. Think about it from the perspective of the author. Come on!

The plot is not boring, it is very comfortable to read, and it is also pornographic [laughter]

I still want to take a look and give it five stars. Why did I fall apart when I saw the second part? Was it written by a primary school student? There is really no one who can write about this kind of wisdom.

It looks really good [like], this is the hardest to deal with, I hope it doesn't collapse later.

Come on, come on, come on. I really like watching it. Don't let it suck.

The plot is a bit unreliable, but its content is too rich. Does the author have any side business?

Although it's a bit too cool! But overall it's pretty good

From the content point of view, it is relatively in line with the standards of a scumbag, and it is not hidden. Most of the scumbag articles are 1v1 on the surface, and the showdown is only in the middle and late stages. Although there is a cuckold plot, the cuckold is placed on the head of the protagonist's father.

The characters are well-written, but there is obviously a lot more to write about. I thought they would all be together in the end. It felt like the climax of the movie and then the protagonist fell to his death. I hope to see a sequel.

Yeah, working overtime v in a hurry for the third time

Why doesn't the author post pictures? ? ? ? ?

Well, I personally think it looks good

Give it five stars first and let me check to see if it is a harem novel. If it is a harem novel, then I will add the harem books first and put you aside for the time being to wait for review.

Come on, author, why not write a new book?

This novel is like a TV series I once watched.

Pretty good. There is just a scene with Zhao Yan at the back that I don't think is good.

Author, come on, update more tomorrow, don't give up [Like]

Come on, author, this book is great👀