Fox Demon****************

How should I put it? The author seems to not only mix the two worlds together. In addition to the fox demon matchmaker and Genshin Impact, he also seems to have mixed together Journey to the West, The Great Wilderness, etc. The author's writing is not bad, but the plot always feels very rushed, but the heroine is a Pai Meng, and I like it very much ~ [laughter] [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

The little matchmaker of Mongolia and the fox demon from Genshin Impact is very beautiful. Please give it a try and update it.

It's beautiful, very beautiful, so beautiful. Well, very nice.

The idea of ​​this book is very clear, the plot is compact, the characters are well described, and the world view is also good. I feel that the rating is a bit low. Readers who read it can give the author some free gifts to support me. I think it is worth it. I have been looking for a book in which Paimon is the heroine. The author can think more about the relationship between our protagonist and Paimon in the future. If the author considers Paimon to grow up, he can design her purple and gold crown and star cloak to increase with Paimon's size, and then her personality does not need to change. I think Paimon's emotions can be more subtle and not too playful and cute, similar to the protagonist's soulmate. The characters in some Genshin Impact books completely collapsed later on, making it difficult to describe them in one sentence. The author can refer to my suggestions. He probably has an idea. I think this comment is worthwhile.

Paimon, the demon fox, and the intervention of Genshinjutsu. From a plot point of view, it is more interesting, but in terms of depth, it is still a bit lacking.

Big cheers for the author!

Author, you are so short-tempered

Come on. I love it.

To tell you the truth, the quality of this book is quite good.

Check in on the 19th day after the author disappeared

Tomato: Author, please don't eat me, I'm very sour, go and eat the eggplant, it's very delicious, go and eat it [I'm about to cry]

Is the author going to send it?

Overall it's very good

It's very interesting, but the author doesn't change it anymore... It's hard to find an interesting fox demon novel, but you made me lose so completely, Zhuo,!

Oh, that's great!

Okay, it feels good

Compound factory calls back Hacha

Not bad, very pretty

I like this book. Come on, the author.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Beautiful, very beautiful! ! ! It's just that the time is a bit confusing. [Think]

Yes, the content is very exciting, keep up the good work

Very good. Although the characters are a bit inconsistent, they are still very good-looking. Come on