Empress************

This book is super, super good. The author shouldn't be too strong.

This book is quite good, at least I think so, but why does it have such a low rating? Was it because someone maliciously brushed off points? It is only 6.7 Now. According to the author, the lowest is only 5.6 Or 5.7

A hot-blooded seventeen-year-old boy from the middle school class traveled to a different world. He was a slave at the beginning. Because of his talent, he became the attendant of Yanyue (the last princess at the beginning). He went to war on the battlefield to repay his kindness. Finally, he saw through the decay of the empire and decided to reform (in a world where cultivators, warriors, and magic gathered, the strongest are respected). The protagonist wants to advocate universal unity and equality for everyone in a world where strength is respected. The protagonist is reborn for the second time (it remains to be investigated, the world is suspected to have been restarted by the protagonist). In the first life, in order to repay his kindness and because of his love for her, he personally raised Yan Yue to the throne. From the beginning of the seventeen-year-old boy, he gradually rose to the position of the general of the empire, bringing more than ten years of peace to the people at the bottom of the empire, as well as those from big families and powerful men who were oppressed by the protagonist. The protagonist's reforms in the first life were too drastic. He spent more than ten years trying to change a world where the strong were respected. The protagonist's lover, Yan Yue, who personally supported the throne of God, also stabbed the protagonist in the back. When the protagonist fell into the clouds, those at the bottom who had been protected by the protagonist and the exploiters of the big family jumped out and cursed the protagonist. In a world where the strong are respected, everyone is equal. Even if everyone is equal, where will the protagonist leave his subordinates? Follow you to liberate the world. Maybe the early stage is for ideals, but what about the mid-term? What about the later stage? The key is that your subordinates will become more powerful in the end. You can rely on your strength to restrain them, but what about people's hearts? Full stars are given to the author for his efforts.

If you just want to see people crushing their enemies and making pointless comments, this book may not be suitable. I didn't quite understand why at first. The protagonist of this book is decisive in killing, has extraordinary strength, has loyal followers to follow, and has a stunning beauty to fall in love with. It satisfies all the fantasies of a loser like me, but I just felt that this book was not refreshing enough. I couldn't understand it at first, but then I gradually figured it out, because this protagonist is someone I want to see, not someone I want to be. When reading novels, we always think of ourselves as the protagonist, so we always hope that the protagonist can be a refined egoist who encompasses all interests for himself. However, this protagonist is an idealist who can give up his own interests for the people. In this case, we who act as the protagonist will naturally feel very uncomfortable. All in all, this book may not be able to fulfill people's need for "refreshment", but if we savor it carefully, it can comfort the "goodness" in our hearts. I'm not very good at talking. Anyway, please give the author a boost. I haven't seen such a "red" protagonist for a long time. I hope to see him build an alliance where everyone is equal.

Suddenly I found out that the rating of this book was only 6.8. How could the author I liked so much be like this! Quick, let this author hand over his precious likes. I hope he will not be ignorant (just kidding [laughing] funny)

The author writes so well😁! The plot line is very complete, starting from the betrayal by Qingmei😈, there is no hesitation or indecision. Satellite has left himself a backup, and the people who are loyal to him have been taken away properly, and the dog emperor is not allowed to use the hero's "legacy" there. A five-star praise is not excessive!

Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with its ordinary true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are perfect, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, and the language is plain yet elegant. Concise and full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This novel shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It depicts the psychological description of the hero and heroine to the extreme in plain sentences, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. After reading your novel, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the novel, I dare not comment easily, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still commented, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe the wonderfulness of this novel. So at the end, I just want to say this: Your novel is so wonderful, why not add another chapter [smile]

The concept of this book is very good. The author is also a very thoughtful person. He wanted to write a novel similar to the Marvel Universe, in which there are cultivators who move mountains and seas, Iron Man who is a mortal as good as a god, there are also fierce collisions between political systems, discussions about faiths, and very in-depth ideas. However, the author's writing skills are really not good. The 30 chapters used to describe the escape from death are really long. Things have to be said over and over again. The plot advancement is really slow. After rebirth, the plot should be smooth, but there are too many inner dramas and memories of the previous life, and it is not smooth at all. The emotional scene with the Demon King was also averagely written, not as good as the empress's emotional scene. Why do you expect us to treat her as the heroine? For this type of novel, I have only read yours for the time being. It has been a long time since I read novels. After reading a lot of fantasy novels, I always wonder, if cultivators are so awesome, why is the political system in the world still feudal and imperial? No trace of technology at all? After reading too many science fiction novels, I always wonder, why are they all fantasy in the end? We were born under the red flag and grew up in the spring breeze. The people have faith and the country has strength. Why should we believe in gods? Come on, author.

How can I put it, the front part is a bit too poisonous, the pace is too slow, it is better to transition quickly and then develop slowly. I have read more than fifty chapters, and the result is still poisonous, and some of them made me confused, such as the immortal wedding dress, which was quite confusing. However, come on, author

The pace of this book is very slow. But there is a different kind of beauty in the flowing flow of the article. The author is not very good at describing things from God's perspective. It is recommended that the author try writing in the first pronoun, so that you can speed up the pace and fill in the gaps. The author tried his best to write a refreshing article in this book, but the author's cultural foundation for refreshing writing is weak. The author also wants to write a sweet love - Egil. There is some inspiration for the writing later in the book. Egil died to save the hero. Male. The Lord saves the heroine and becomes the master of the plane. You can refer to Zhu Xian. It's also possible that the male protagonist failed to resist for the first time and everyone around him died completely. The reason: he was destroyed by a mysterious force. It could be related to the way of heaven and finally became the master of the plane in order to save everyone. You can refer to Ergen's Magic Seeking. When writing cool articles, I recommend the author to read cool articles like Dragon King. Recommended author for writing about love/dealing with love relationships. Watch My 26-year-old Female Tenant (Castle in the Sky) and wait for you to be romantic and romantic, My Miss Tulip. (The dog's head saves his life). I wish the author can become a great author soon. Ask if there is a fan base. Dog head saves life [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [ top post ] [Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top][Top]

It's not a cool novel, and it's not suitable for Tomato. But if it was written as it was originally written, it would be fine to publish a book. However, it can be seen that the author was too impetuous by some malicious comments in the later period, and there are problems starting from more than 70 chapters. The most important thing is that it is not suitable for Tomato, because the nature of Tomato, a free novel, determines those people who will come here to read.

I read Chapter 35. The whole story is very smooth, but the empress' hatred is not very clear. The author also gave an explanation but it is far-fetched. At least I don't understand it, but I will still read it. I support the author👍

I don't know what type of book the author wants to write. Anyway, it is absolutely impossible to write a good book, and it is extremely slow-burning. So far, the book has no hot spots, only countless frustrations and depressions. It is not suitable for the current fast food culture, but writing a book is very hard. I give five stars for the hard work.

The writing is really good, but the low rating is probably because I don't have the patience to read it. The quality of this book is really good for Tomato novels I can only say that this book is not suitable for Tomato, because Tomato readers prefer mindless and refreshing articles. It's too complicated to read. As for the plot, it's really not very exciting. You wrote out the purpose and process, but it's not attractive enough. So it's hard for ordinary people to watch it.

Author, don't lose your mind. Try not to pay too much attention to the book review section. Just write according to your own expectations. You have your own ideas. You can write how you want. After all, everyone is different. You can't be liked by everyone. If the book reviewers have good suggestions, just adopt them. Ignore the slanderous ones. If the book reviews do not meet your expectations, just prepare to start a new book. This book is your practice. I support you [get it]

Very good, the author also paid attention to it. And what I admire is that the author has put political, military, economic and multi-faceted knowledge into the book, and also included his own opinions. It's very vivid, very informative, and the plot is very interesting to read. It will take a long time for the author to develop the overall picture of this book.

The author has great ideas and a great story line, but he really just plays a good hand of cards (I don't know if it's an old author or a new author), but it's okay, I think The further you read the previous title and the story, the greater the gap becomes (the previous title should be changed appropriately) The structure of the story in the front is exposed too much, and the holes in the back are a bit difficult to fill. Then there is the image of the characters. Don't use one-sided words, use actual actions. The emotional line of the story is very strange. After more than 20 pictures, the new demon king, if he hadn't been persuaded by others, would have fought with others. What's the reason? I felt that the Princess of the Demi-human Kingdom was okay, but later on I was with that one, and they said I was a tsundere but didn't write it. Well, how could a 500-year-old tsundere only have a few chapters? Then he said that the empress, really, how should I say it? It's just a one-sided story. It doesn't talk too much about the empress. It's more of a stereotype. Then there is the psychic technology weapon at the back. It has to succeed every time. Really nb, it does not fail at all (it has too many flaws, I don't want to complain) Then there is the protagonist, who is very versatile. I can only say this. There is no introduction to what he does in the original world, and there are no plug-ins. So it is impossible for the current academic master to be so versatile when he goes to the alien world! Generally speaking, I was too eager to get things done, which led to huge problems later on. The main plot of the story came out, and then there were so many pitfalls that the author probably couldn't fill it in. Overall, it was very bland, and it was both enjoyable and unpleasant. I didn't have the patience to read the end of it, but in the end I persisted. The author really has ideas, anyway. A very thoughtful author (the author's ideas are really good anyway) Shuangwen is not like Shuangwen. If the IQ is online, there are still some. That is, the author, what kind of article do you want to write? Otherwise, the changes are really big. I hope it will bring some help to the author in writing stories in the future. This book should not be changed. It will be bad if it is messed up again (suggestion)

This book is great. The only unpleasant thing is that I saw so many people betraying the protagonist. I hope the ending can be clean and tidy. I saw the empress regretting it and the protagonist exiled the empress as an ordinary person; or simply killed the empress cleanly in the final battle. This is a bit of a standard ending.

Overall good. It means that the archbishop is sometimes strong and sometimes weak. It was said that it was very weak for a while. He also acted very strong for a while. The scoring system seems to be divided into several parts. What is the abandonment rate? Those who follow up, wait for scores based on many factors.

This book is very exciting, but the title is a little inconsistent with the protagonist's domineering and ability (☆∀☆). The writing style is very particular, and the writing is also very detailed. Keep up the good work and give you a gift. Can we add some emotional scenes? The protagonist and the big devil didn't have any feelings for a long time. When I torture the scum in the end, I hope it feels a little better

Such an active author is polite and waiting for his next book. Even though I don't like it, keep it up.

Why is this book rated so low? It feels better than recommended.

I'm currently on chapter 57. This book tends to be a slow-burning one. If you want to enjoy it directly, I suggest you just jump to the end of Chapter 90 (the author said so, I don't know if I will continue to read it). Anyway, it is quite to my liking. I am a reader who likes slow-burn behind-the-scenes stories after all. Finally, I hope the author will write more, as this is not enough.

I was wrong. I originally read the synopsis and thought this was a novel about revenge, a harem, and some daily life. After reading it, I realized that it was a military, revolutionary, and science-based novel. It could almost be said that it was not fun at all. I originally thought it was a fun novel. Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. I have to find some now, really cool to read.

Come on, you will have higher grades. Let me add one more thing, I gave you four stars because I want to wait until you update to the point where people will be insulted before I give you five stars.

Come on, the author has a very good novel, I read it all night long. Come on support the author with free gifts every day

This book is beautiful, why is the rating so low?

It's very good. I hope the quality can be maintained. I'll keep it for a month.

I feel it's a bit delayed, but that doesn't stop me from giving it 5 stars.

The writing is good. Is it possible to open a harem? I'm really looking forward to writing a harem story [laughs], of course it all depends on the author's wishes [eating melon] Ah. . The plot feels so vague. There are too many worldviews in more than 60 chapters, and the settings are all over the place. There is a demon king and a fox girl, two countries, a great inflammation, and a Holy See. As for the author, you can write more slowly and don't kill the great inflammation so quickly. There are some memoirs and sugary plots in the middle, and you can read it. Now. It's because you have created too many characters. I can't bear to see the scenes of people's confessions and exploitation [face covering] (Of course, I still hope that the author will write according to his own wishes.) In the middle of the comments, I saw comments that sometimes whitewashed and sometimes didn't whitewash. It's true that the author doesn't need to reply one by one. You can just write according to the introduction, right? I really feel like you're jumping left and right like this [laughs awkwardly]