The First Elf Hall Owner Beat Countless Trainers to Tears

I am the author and I want to tell you something... I am very grateful to everyone who clicked in to read this book. Today there are a lot more people watching and there are a lot of comments. I've read some, and some are supportive and some are scolding. To be honest, I hope you won't be so angry when reading, and I feel quite uncomfortable. If you don't like it, just move the upper left corner back. There's no need to keep criticizing me. I'm a newbie and I really can't write well. Please be merciful, everyone. If you can, please don't give negative reviews. Try not to give any help. Whatever the author can satisfy you, he will try his best to satisfy you. When I first started writing, I had a group of lovely friends who were supporting me. I updated happily and they read happily, which was pretty good. Send me electricity with love and send me flowers. Enough. Thank you. There were suddenly more people now, and I was a little scared. The setting of this book is a brand new world. Without a system, the protagonist doesn't have that many advantages. Not a cool article. There will be joy, anger, sorrow and joy. The protagonist starts off as a talkative, somewhat clever person, but slowly grows up and finally reaches the top. Not to say too much. Thanks to my partners who support me. Thank you to everyone who read the book. Finally, I hope everyone can slowly enter this story with a peaceful mind. Whether you give me guidance or make suggestions, I accept them all with an open mind. But I really don't accept name-calling. Above. I'm going to code 😂

Sure! Very good-looking and popular. Kick me [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's beautiful. Come on, boss.

It's okay, but I feel like I traveled through time a little late.

It's quite interesting, and I don't object to the protagonist becoming darker. As the author said, he is often deceived and assassinated. If I were to kill him, I would definitely kill him. I really hate being betrayed and assassinated by someone I trust.

It's still good, but the author could go over the plot again, such as the grass-type restraint against electricity... But overall, it can be said to be one of the better-looking Pokémon. It still needs more updates, otherwise I will lose my fandom [smiles] It's not that this book is very beautiful, but the author also worked hard and needs to be more considerate. It's not too bad, so I'll give it five stars. Besides, Tomato authors don't make much money in the first place. Humans, it's a bit wrong [harmful] Shame] So, you should read the book with a calm mind. After all, the novel is still a little different from the original work. Please be considerate (I am not a troll that the author found, I am a true fan. I hope this book will not be unfinished [makes a face])

This book is very good. Compared with other books, it's great to start with Gardevoir and Charizard, or start with Dragon Aotian and get Shining and other things. Although I don't read many Pokémon books, I think this one is my favorite one that I've read so far.

The growth-type protagonist is very good, but don't leave too many regrets. I hope the author will make less arrangements to make things difficult, and the combat power and character will not collapse, and there will be no harem. This is our unanimous hope. Author, you should know how to do it.

Overall, it's okay, and I can make do with it. The foreshadowing is a bit poor. Secondly, it's a bit early for the protagonist to change. It should be around 100 chapters at least. What's the main thing? When I think of it, I will add a comment: Thirdly, the writing style is still broad, and what should be written is also written, which is a big score [eating melon]

Very good, why is the rating so low. It's great to concentrate on writing and playing the challenge. There are some small problems in the middle. But look at what you wrote. The blood of the dragon and the ancient family you created are really too lame.

It's good to watch. From Meow Meow's reaction to Team Rocket and saying that classic line to the protagonist, it can be seen that the author has laid a big foreshadowing, which aroused my curiosity about the follow-up. Once I started, I couldn't stop.

Give it a try and keep up the good work!

Good-looking, grown-up protagonist

Why do you like to write about love elements? Isn't it better to just write about elves? King Yan doesn't like to follow you, why don't you let it go?

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

It's pretty good, but there are a lot of Pokémon, and I'm always collecting new Pokémon, so I feel like I can't train them enough. I hope I don't treat Pokémon as mascots! I'd like to ask, is there a female protagonist?

It's really good to read. I've read more than a dozen elf novels. Personally, I think this one is pretty good. I just hope there won't be a female Gardevoir in the future. (With a little personal sentiment, I recently found a few elf novels. The main character basically has a female Gardevoir. Reading too many of them makes me very uncomfortable.) Also, the part about Da Wang Yan feels a bit rough [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

It's really good. I hope the protagonist has a super fiery flaming monkey. If you want to write it out, I will give you 1,200 yuan as a gift.

This book is very interesting, the author should work hard

I think it's pretty

Author, you have so many shortcomings

I want to know about Meow Meow's experience

Good reviews, must have a single heroine

It's okay to just take a look at it, but some scenes still need to be described.

Not bad, but why such a low rating?

This book is quite good, but the owner of the dragon hall has some poisonous points. The author could consider changing it, and the author could consider arranging a flash elf for the protagonist [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile]

I watched half of it, and I feel good. The battle description is very good, the plot is full, and the emotional rendering is very good. I support it and hope not to stop updating.

It's well written, a bit middle-of-the-road. The reality may be a bit embarrassing, but the novel is still very passionate. The foreshadowing at the end turned out to be a huge failure. It was done so abruptly that it gave people a sense of inexplicability, and it immediately put me off.

So pretty! ! ! ! Why is the score so low [almost crying]

Five thousand years to the east of the river, five thousand years to the west of the river.