Dragon Ball: Start as the Grumpy Old Brother Broly

At first I came to watch it because of Broly, but it wasn't until later that I felt the real charm. Come on, author.

There are a few Broly stories in Tomato that are pretty good. I hope to make a wish after winning the game the same as in the anime. In this way, it can be adapted from many fans on the Internet, such as Yamosi, Dragon God and so on. The author also has a lot of room for his own original work in the follow-up, but he doesn't want to write about all demons, because if he does, it will almost be the end of the book (unless he travels to the next world). Okay, let's give it four stars. Let's just say Broly that's green, green! The transformation is also yellow-green. Don't say I haven't watched it, I just like Broly. How can I not watch it?

Well, not bad, it's quite good. The author updates it every few days. I waited for a long time to get to Chapter 50. The update is a bit slow. It's really not enjoyable to read. [Thinking] Sometimes I really feel that your book is too eunuch [Laughing and crying]

It's very nice and beautiful. Some authors can't write grand battle scenes like Dragon Ball, but this author did it. The sense of immersion in the battle is very strong, and the writing is very powerful. It is very powerful to be able to write Broly's sense of oppression. Without a harem, it is really amazing. I admire the author very much.

Alas, in fact, the first part of the plot of Mora is quite good. The fighting, mood changes, etc. Are all described very well. It is really top-notch among the Dragon Ball fics I have read. Maybe the author's mentality has declined in all aspects due to the low income. The subsequent plot made me feel stuck in my throat. Especially when the original boss appeared, from the name to the description, I felt that the author was hasty. I hope the author can bring better works in the future! Thanks for keeping this book company.

There are also differences between the two versions of Broly's transformation. The old version can mimic the Super Sailor Transformation and the normal Super Sailor Transformation, and then the Super Sailor Transformation. The new version is the human form of the giant ape's power, and then it is directly transferred to the super.

Five-star praise is not too much, right? , Why is such a good book rated so low? This is the only Broly I've read. It's very well written. I hope the author can work hard!

It's quite interesting, different from the original plot, and a bit interesting.

The writing is so touching. I stayed up late last night and finished reading (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ. This is the best article I have ever written with Broly as the protagonist. But if you want to write a heroine, the character should be well established. As long as your writing is as good as it is now, I will definitely continue to pursue it. Come on, Dad. By the way, if possible, please update more next time (⑉°з°)-♡

The writing is OK, a little bit toxic (in my personal opinion), but it's not a big problem and the story is a good one. I hope the author will work hard, keep up the good work, and don't end it (many Dragon Ball novels are relatively unfinished).

No fighting power, everything else is pretty good Come on! ! !

I'd give it four and a half stars, but the fighting scenes are really exciting, but that doesn't stop me from wanting to watch Jockey [laughing evilly]

It's best not to skip reading my review of the chapters of Conference of Power that make him worthy of the stars above. Of course there is another thing I don't like, that is Gogeta did not appear [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Support the author, appreciate this kind of novel, and only pursue violence! The author keeps it up!

Tomato is a very good Dragon Ball fanfic, I like it very much!

I think it's pretty good to watch ~ battles ~ friendship ~ quite attractive, love can be carved out slowly ~ just arrange 3 to 4 for the heroine, not too many ~ [laughing]

The writing is very good. I hope the author will reward himself and write more chapters [smile][smile][smile]

It's super nice. It's a combination of old and new Broly. It's very nice!

Very nice, I highly recommend this book

I'm curious. After the protagonist devoured the two Brolys, did he perfectly inherit everything from the two Brolys? Did the three of them completely merge into one?

Not bad, but too short and weak

It took me several days to finish reading it. I remember that last year I had read and seen the Demon Man on Earth in the Sixth Universe. After that, I really forgot about raising the book. I found it a few days ago! It's great to read a book in one go, and the extras are also pretty good. [Crying] The author finished it a little too early. There are only a dozen or so chapters of the pirate chapter. Please update it too. I haven't read it yet. [Sending my heart] @ pillow

Very nice, I just wish I didn't have a eunuch

So beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful

The author's writing is great, I fell in love with Broly because of this

It's very beautiful, but the update is too slow. I hope the author will be faster [please update] [blowing kiss]

Possessed Soul Time, overall qualified ~ three stars, plus one star for the hard work of writing, violent aesthetics, it would be better if it can be entertaining, there will be a sense of ups and downs when you relax, the selection time is late, the whole article is short, overall it is not bad

It's very nice, but Broly's limiter was a bit poisonous in the early stage, but after all, he needs his father to receive the lunch box [laughing and crying] Club of Power Broly's wish is not to restore the entire universe [laughing and crying]

Every time when I'm enjoying reading it, a shitty yellow button pops up. I hope I can't see it again. Thank you. I'll keep this book for now. I'll read it slowly when there are more chapters later.

It's very beautiful, super beautiful. Good luck to the author.