Genshin Impact: Something Is Wrong with My Light Novel

I suggest you ask Yaegongji to make me confess ~ Geniuses' love brain battle

I really like novels with this theme. I recommend them.

Author~Violet Evergarden~It's so beautiful~It definitely fits the plot✔Add one! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Chapter 12 Author, look at the author, there are more than 100 likes, it's almost enough to exclude those who don't read the comments ✔

The writing is very good, I like it very much, but, well, I personally think that the protagonist should be given more roles as a male. After all, the protagonist is originally a male, so there are so many scenes as a female, but it makes it look like the protagonist is a girl [almost crying], at least I feel better when I look at the male version [laughs] It's a man's true nature. It would be easier to say that he is a woman from the beginning, but he still uses the female body all the time, which completely loses his true nature as a man () The next important thing is, can JOJO [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I really want to see it

The author is great and has written a lot of things. Just update it a little. As long as it doesn't end badly and doesn't go crazy about collecting harems, it's a good novel.

The writing style is very good, and the style is also very to my liking. There are no poisonous points so far, and the plot development is acceptable. The characters' personalities are successfully shaped, and there are no awkward points.

I have to say that this book is really wonderful. It was precisely because of this book that I fell in love with the character Loli. So I've been frantically looking for Lolita novels lately, but I haven't been able to find them. I hope so. The author can separate the soul from the protagonist's body and make him look like an ice city cat. In my opinion it's the best. After all, the cute look of Bingcheng Cat was so successfully created. I can't bear to see his true identity revealed in the future. This character will disappear completely. In other words, it has changed.

The overall writing is really good, but it feels a little weird if it keeps changing. Because the protagonist is a boy, of course he looks forward to being chased.

I have read more than sixty chapters, and the first part is still very good. The writing is very good, and my aunt keeps laughing. But my feelings for Paimon seem to be a bit unresolved. Although it is explained later that I only like but not love emmm, it is not long and the emotions are delicate. Maybe it can be a foreshadowing for the following chapters. This paragraph is not bad. Paimon is also very cute. Then there's the aspect of hiding one's identity. To be honest, I think it's a little bit poisonous. Novice writers shouldn't touch this. First, tell the screenwriter that you are the author, and then later say that the author is your sister. Hmm. . . Maybe you can explain these clearly, but you stretched the page too long and wrote projections before you finished it. Even if you resolve the misunderstanding, normal people have some psychological barriers, unless you make Ying the heroine and develop some feelings. But the psychological details and emotions of resolving this misunderstanding are difficult to write in some books I have read, so most authors will avoid this. Otherwise, the heroine's emotions will be ruined if she forgives stupidly, but the author seems to prefer to push the plot. If developing with Ying, It's naturally a good story once it's written, but this book is more focused on the main line and plot, which makes it more troublesome. All in all, this book is still very good, but this is really too toxic. I can understand that the author may want to rely on this to develop Tiantian's story, but he can't be too anxious and connect the plot slowly. The author, please do your best. I'm optimistic about your potential.

It's very good. The male protagonist turns into a lolita in the back, which is very interesting [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's beautiful, very novel and rare, but it's too slow to update. Hope there will be more chapters today

I suddenly became curious, what would Hutao and Zhongli think after reading the light novel? What would Zhenjun and Shen He, who are good at chatting, think? There are also Ling Guang and Beidou. It feels like you can carve out three bedrooms and one living room. Okay, it looks weird, let's take another look. This is an unprecedented book, and it feels like the wear and tear has eased a lot.

The writing is very good but a bit short and weak. Good luck to the author.

Hey hey hey, it's not bad, just a little bit less. By the way, do you accept Wendy's? Wendy is so cute [admiration]

This book is a torrent that travels through women's clothing books. It not only fully expresses the gender of the author [smile] but also makes people very curious about the author's true appearance. It makes people want to stop, so I will include a picture [smile] [note]

Damn cat, please update soon, be careful I will take you to be sterilized💦👀👍🐶

I have been following it for so long and found no reviews. This is a rare and good book. I would like to call it the three hegemons along with "Ninth World" and "Investment in Ningguang". "Ninth World" focuses on knives, and "Investment in Ningguang" focuses on repairing knives. This book focuses on the cultivation of perverts and the gathering place for perverts... Well, no, it focuses on comedy, and it is very good-looking. I recommend it.

Well written, keep going ٩ (๑^o^๑) ۶ Well written, keep going ٩(๑^o^๑)۶よくけているあがんばって٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶

This book is amazing, very beautiful. I wonder if the main character will be a female or a male in the future? I hope the author will update it soon, because it's so beautiful, otherwise we might really kill you like you're due to be selected [smirking] [blowing kiss]. Come on, hope you update soon! !

This novel is good, especially the paragraphs about Wendy. I even thought Wendy was going to be transformed into a woman. Come on, cats!

This novel is very beautiful, and the ideas are surprising. I hope the author will keep up the good work and not stop updating. If you have money, I will definitely send you small gifts. I would rather watch the advertisement ten times and give you ten gifts [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's very exciting. To be honest, I wasn't optimistic about this book at the beginning because there were only about 3,000 reviews. The author likes to include real readers in the book. However, there are not many fighting scenes in the daily novels. The author wrote the story of the protagonist writing a novel within a novel, but the character design felt a bit broken. I felt that it was getting more and more boring and boring at the end, and I had to dress up as a woman to be cute, so I stopped talking about it on a whim, but in the end, I kept dressing up as a woman, and basically didn't turn into a man. The plot was getting more and more boring at the beginning, and I didn't have any desire to read it. The only good thing is that the author updates quickly, but the quality of the novels is slow to update and the quality is good.

Very well written. But the subsequent plot of turning into a loli seemed interesting at first, but after watching too much, I felt a bit bored. Moreover, the role of the male protagonist in the back is a bit lacking. This only represents my personal opinion. Come on, author!

It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Come on, author. This is the first time I read this style. It's very interesting.

Overall, it's pretty good, but there are some small places that make it a bit unpleasant or uncomfortable [face covering] The most important thing is that human society has collapsed. Alas, I can only say that it is generally okay (of course, if it were me, I would definitely not be able to write better than the author)

The biggest bad point of this book is that the main character was born male. If he were born female, everything would be very smooth. After all, Lily is not unacceptable. Maybe the author also realized that he gave a second form of lolita form later on. Overall, it is good.

It's great. As an eight-year old bookworm, this book is really enjoyable to read. I hope the author will type it up quickly [laughs crookedly]. Also, I want Wendy to turn into a woman [laughing evilly] and make the pig's feet dress up as a woman [sending my heart]

Cat, I miss you, okay, I admit that I also miss your novels. I have attracted many people to read your novel. Remember to update when you are fine, I will always be waiting for you!

Haokanghaokang, there is a sentence in it that is very correct: "When you are in pain, even if you lose this friendship, you will not hesitate to drag him into the pain. This is true friendship..."