The Great Mage's Legend

Dad fell into a trap and will come out when he grows up. Suddenly I feel like crying.

What attracted you to it? Oh! It's magic! It looks good, it turns out there are people writing about magic in this circle, hehe.

The magic theme is kind of cool. I thought I didn't like this kind of theme, but now it seems I can do it again.

It turns out that Persimmon also has such a short article. It's a magic-themed book. This is the first time I've read it! Why don't you write more?

It's a very good and refreshing article. You can follow it from the beginning to the end. It's full of passion, loyalty and friendship.

It's a wonderful journey. I really like the characters in it, but I feel like there are too few and not enough to watch.

Gone? Is it really gone? No..., I still want to watch.

The plot and content are very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, but the paragraphs are too long and difficult to read. The layout can be greatly improved.

The plot is quite interesting, the writing style is quite humorous, and there are constant laughs.

The world of magic is really wonderful. I always feel that magic is greener in nature.